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Shut up >.>

Just wait and see what happens to them both as they keep writing the story - Grassy did after all run into a bathroom door XD

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Chapter Four


<Iyoku… Iyoku! Hey! Wake up!>

The grey hedgehog’s turquoise eyes opened, and he glared at Kiyo who was the one who had sent her telepathic voice into his thoughts, disturbing his sleep – or, what little of it he could get. He normally slept with his mind still half awake and aware of his surroundings, ready to draw his sword or prepare and launch an attack at the sound of even a twig snapping, but this world seemed to be more forgiving, and not as harsh as the future… so far, anyway.

<What is it?> He asked, slightly irritated.

The Lapras watched the skies for a few seconds, apparently concerned with the stars that still shone overhead, although, it was beginning to lighten considerably on the horizon. <Come with me, quickly!> She said; <I want to show you something.>

Sighing inwardly, Iyoku got up from his resting place at the base of the tree after taking the other three Poke Balls that held Shourai, Yaiba and Koutei, and noiselessly made his way to the river before jumping – again, soundlessly – onto the Water-Ice Type’s back. Iyoku was rather happy that he had practiced his stealth, having probably not woken anyone else up unless they were very light sleepers as well.


Nazo stirred slightly, but did not wake. Although he was a moderate sleeper, it was not Iyoku's movement that had alerted him. Instead, it had been the Houndour curled up beside him, shifting her position as she silently watched the grey hedgehog bound off. She was awake because of her Dark Type attributes, but it was also...She felt unsettled, and unsure as to the cause. Her partner was leaning against a tree, oblivious to any cold the wind might blow, the unfinished amethyst clutched in his hands. Yawning, Lilac let sleep overcome her, unaware of the equally silent eyes that watched the pair.


A smile on her face, Kiyo proceeded to swim downstream until they reached and passed through a large opening in the river, and as Kiyo continued to swim out further, Iyoku stared with astonishment at what was before them as he let the other Pokémon out.
Koutei opened his wings upon exiting the Poke Ball and after flying around a little to stretch the limbs, he landed comfortably on one of the spikes that patterned the Lapras’ back. Shourai and Yaiba also were on Kiyo’s back, given that neither could swim due to there being no water in the future, so the Water-Ice Type turned sideways so that they all could see the sight in front of them.

A gigantic expanse of water with no end in sight stretched out before him and Kiyo, but what was the most beautiful was the light of the sun rising over the ocean’s horizon that was also reflected on the water itself. It seemed that every colour in existence toned the morning skies with any and all imaginable hues in the world. They both remained silent, watching the spectacle in amazement. Neither of them had ever seen anything like it in their lives. It was still far too early for any of the other Pokémon to have woken up yet, so there was no unpleasant noise such as that of Wingull and Pelipper as well as other Water Type Pokémon squabbling over food and territory, but just the calming sound of the ocean’s waves. Landing on the beach, Iyoku watched as Shourai and Yaiba jumped at each other, having a practice battle. Yaiba started things off by charging up a Razor Wind, and then letting the said attack fly at Shourai who quickly dodged it, and then Tackled the Absol.
Shifting his attention to the coastline, Iyoku wondered when Nazo and Lilac would wake; they had to get looking for the next Chaos Emerald, and in the meantime, he got to speculating with Kiyo as to where it could be.


Lilac suddenly jerked awake as the grass moved, finding herself staring at a pair of red eyes. They belonged to a large snake, who was mostly black but had areas of gold plating mixed in with purple spots, particularly the zigzag pattern on its “chest”. It carried a lethal blade on its tail, the edge lined with red. The Seviper hissed, and both Lilac and Nazo leaped out of the way as it struck outwards, the Houndour taking a fighting stance in front of her partner, a howl ripping from her jaws as she readied herself to battle.

Nazo could only blink - he hadn't the foggiest idea of what to do.


Iyoku’s ears pricked sharply, and he immediately stood up. “Something’s wrong…” he muttered. Soon enough, that statement was followed up by a loud howl that was no doubt from Lilac. Iyoku looked at Koutei who only nodded and swooped low for Iyoku to jump onto his back in mid-air while the other three Pokémon proceeded to make their way back upriver.

Flying at an incredibly fast speed, the grey hedgehog scanned the forest below for their camp, instantly viewing what the predicament was. Koutei was about to dive down and intercept the Seviper, but Iyoku told him through telepathy to wait until they were needed. Landing in a smaller clearing outside the camp, they both made their way towards the Pokémon.

Koutei remained tense, however; he could tell Nazo did not have much of an idea of how to battle, and was ready to step in if he had to.

<Give me a command, Nazo!> The hedgehog stared at Lilac, and she sensed his discomfort. <I can dodge, or attack. I know Leer, Ember, Howl, and Smog right now. Seviper is a Poison Type, so Smog will have little effect. I can only use Howl and Leer once - Howl will raise my Attack power, and Leer will lower the Seviper's Defense. I only have a Special Attack move, so those won't be any use.> Nazo's head reeled from all this talk and information, but he quickly shouted out to Lilac to move out of the way. The Houndour lithely darted to the side as the snake licked at where she had just been.

“Well then Lilac...I suppose we should try that Ember attack you mentioned, since you said everything else you knew would not work.” Lilac grinned, opening her mouth as ovals of fire shot forth from her mouth, smashing into the Poison Type head on and knocking it backwards. She then rushed forward of her own will, slamming her bony head and flinging the snake towards her partner, who grabbed the Pokémon and pinned it down by its head and tail.

While Nazo had the head and tail of the Seviper pinned to the ground, Iyoku frowned slightly, scanning the woods. His turquoise eyes froze on something within the bushes and traced its outline, revealing it to be another Seviper, but it did not look like it was going to attack. The grey hedgehog stared at it, as if daring it to attack. Koutei also soon spotted what Iyoku was watching, and kept a careful eye on it, too. Seeing it was vastly outnumbered, the other Seviper slithered off into the woods. “Seviper nest in groups…” he muttered, crossing his arms and looking at the one Nazo had pinned down, “we have to decide what to do with that one, then get out of here before more come.”

Lilac glared down at the Seviper, a low growl rumbling in her throat. <You will not attack us anymore, right?> The Seviper's eyes were wide with fear, yet it was strangely unresponsive. Just as suddenly, it twisted around, knocking Nazo over and clamping its jaws around his arm. This in turn caused the hedgehog to give a hiss and toss the snake into a tree with a soft thud. As it fell down, a small amount of foam dribbled forth from its mouth, presumably from the impact. As Lilac trotted over to it, she sniffed it, shaking her head. <...It's dead. Smells like death too - must have been on its last legs - or rather, scales.> This was broadcasted to all present, and she turned to look at Nazo, who was staring at his bleeding arm. It was clear he was not used to being injured, neverless to the point of bleeding.

Iyoku’s eyes narrowed as he thought to himself; attacking out of nowhere, and aside from that other Seviper, I haven’t seen a single other member of its species here… Something’s wrong, but I can’t quite put my finger on it. He went to his bag, and got a long roll of bandage out of one of the pockets that lined the outside, along with a Pecha Berry, since he had a grim suspicion that Nazo had – at the very least – maybe been poisoned from the bite. Setting the baseball-sized berry on the ground, he said, “rinse out that bite in the river, then I’ll wrap these bandages around it.”

Nazo snapped out of his reverie, nodding at Iyoku. “I was just going to do that.” His eyes never strayed back to the dead Pokémon - although whether it was due to guilt or the fact he simply did not care at this point in time, was unknown. Lilac whimpered in worry as the hedgehog proceeded over to the river, gingerly washing the wound. He was able to examine it better now that the blood, while still flowing, was mostly washed away. Two puncture wounds signified where the Seviper's long fangs had delivered the painful bite. As it was, Nazo was impassive to the damage dealt to his body, even though he was aware of the pain. Lifting his injured limb from the clear water, he signaled to Iyoku via his other arm, his right, to come over and treat him.

Iyoku walked over to where Nazo was standing, and proceeded to wrap the bandage around his injured arm; it was pressured enough so as to avoid his blood leaking in larger quantities, but also loose enough to allow it to continue circulating. As he did so, his mind was still elsewhere, trying to think of a plausible reason that the Poison Type might’ve had to attack. The only Pokémon I've ever known to actually attack and kill for no reason other than enjoyment were the Shadow Pokémon of the future, but otherwise…He finished bandaging Nazo’s injury, and then handed him the Pecha Berry. “You may want to eat that in case there was any venom that the Seviper let loose when it bit you.”

The hedgehog nodded, briefly wondering if this berry was another prank. Hearing the small amount of concern lacing his voice, however, he decided it was truly for his own good. At first nibbling the pink berry, he found that it was amazingly sweet and soft, and began to truly eat it. He took his time, savoring the Pecha Berry, but also thinking to himself. Strange...Lilac told me earlier that Pokémon do not attack for no reason. We did not threaten the...Seviper, was it? A rustling in the bushes made him turn, and the second Seviper was slowly slithering into the clearing, staring in dismay at its fallen companion.

Lilac bounded over to the Seviper, stopping short, and the two apparently began to discuss what had occurred. Nazo was mildly surprised - the other snake Pokémon was calm and willing to talk. He watched Lilac shake her head slowly, before turning to gaze at Nazo and Iyoku, the Seviper by her side.

<She said that her mate had been acting weird. He was bitten a while ago by something, but he never told her what. Sevi says she is deeply sorry for what he did, and hopes everyone will be okay. She thinks Fang may have had a parasite, seeing as “he ate so dang much, he probably caught everything”.> Lilac was pawing the ground, thinking to herself quietly. She had a bad feeling about whatever caused the end of Sevi's partner Fang. A Pokémon does not walk around smelling like death, nor being unresponsive and attacking anything that it saw. It just didn't make any sense!

Iyoku pondered what Lilac had translated for the Seviper, but, to his annoyance, he still wasn’t able to think of anything. Suddenly, his ears pricked as he heard an anomaly in the sound of the river’s water, and watched at the side of the riverbank as he noticed Kiyo and her passengers were returning. Shourai jumped off the Lapras’ back followed by Yaiba, both landing a little unevenly on the ground because they were still used to the swaying motion of the water. He then took all four Poke Balls out of his bag and recalled his squad of Pokémon, his mind now on the thought of where the next Chaos Emerald could be.

Nazo turned to look at Iyoku while Lilac set herself in comforting the widowed Seviper. “Where do you think we should start, Iyoku? Mesprit said a place of strong will, and I have no doubt it is related to a Pokémon. We just do not know which kind.” The hedgehog folded his arms, careful not to agitate the injury. There was also a hint of pride in his voice, perhaps because he had fought his first Pokémon battle ever, and won. Or at least, for the most part.

“Well…” Iyoku began, “The first was guarded by Mesprit. There are three Pokémon that keep the spiritual world in balance… Uxie, Mesprit and Azelf. Uxie is the Being of Intelligence, Mesprit is obviously the Being of Emotion, and so therefore, Azelf is the Being of Willpower.” He paused, “Mesprit said that the next emerald is in a strong willed place, but I don’t know where that could be, although it’s connected to Azelf.”

<Actually, Iyoku…> Kiyo said from her Poke Ball, <I was speaking to a Buizel on the way back upstream, and he mentioned that there is an area to the north that’s raked by vicious blizzards.>

Iyoku frowned, and then told Nazo what Kiyo had just informed him of. “I think it’s worth an inspection. It’s possible that it could be there.”

Nazo slowly nodded. “I agree. Normally I could open a portal there, but unfortunately...I have never been to that area. We will have to take the long way.” Lilac came padding over, nudging Nazo. “Mmm? Yes, Lilac?” The two watched each other as Lilac communicated with him. “Really now?” Nazo turned to look at Iyoku. “Sevi wishes to join us. She wants to make sure that my wound heals all right.” The Seviper let out a caring hiss, slithering up once more to the group.

“I don’t see why she shouldn’t come,” Iyoku said, getting another Poke Ball from his bag. This one was different hues of purple, gold and red – obviously a Poke Ball created when he’d had way too much spare time on his hands. Handing it to Nazo, he finished, “This should do the job if she wants to use it.”

Nazo caught the ball as Iyoku closed up his bag, looking down at the small thing. With prompting from Lilac, he enlarged it, and was unsure of throwing it at Sevi. That was, until she herself reassured him that it would be all right - compared to his wound, a bonk on the head wasn't too bad. With hesitation, he threw it at the Seviper, who disappeared in a flash of light, the ball landing on the ground without any resistance. The hedgehog picked it up, managing to make it smaller, when Lilac trotted over with a bunch of leaves. Taking the hint, he fashioned them into a sort of sling over back pack, which he put both Pokeballs into before walking after Iyoku, Lilac hot on his heels.
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Watching the woods alongside the path he was walking on, Iyoku had an uneasy feeling that something was going to happen. It wasn’t like what had happened when the other Seviper had bit Nazo, but was something worse. He had felt it before; an ominous feeling that had once had him running as fast as he could, but that had been in the future. What is going on? He thought to himself, a little unnerved. Nonetheless, he kept his already-fast pace the same so that Nazo and Lilac could catch up. Suddenly though, a large flock of Flying Type Pokemon that ranged from every species from Pidgey to Staraptor burst out of the trees overhead, flying at an abnormally fast speed. Pausing, he stopped, and stared once again into the green-leaved forest, trying to discern why he was feeling so spooked and unnerved.

Nazo soon caught up with the grey hedgehog, but stopped short when he too noticed the birds burst forth from the tree, squawking in alarm. Taking a few quick steps, he placed himself next to Iyoku, Lilac bringing up the rear. She had lifted her head to catch a scent, turning taut as she no doubt picked up something worth being nervous about. Nazo noticed this, but was lost in thought, pondering the same exact thing Iyoku was, although not feeling quite as spooked or unnerved. After what he had been through, it took a lot to scare him.

A few seconds after Nazo and Lilac caught up, it finally clicked to Iyoku as to where he’d sensed that particular feeling before. It had always been constant in the future, but not a threat because it had already happened. He paled slightly as he saw the trees further inside start to turn an ominous shade of black, followed by what seemed to be a small creek in the woods freeze up and remain motionless. “Oh crap…” He muttered before channeling a large amount of Aura to his shoes and promptly beginning to run as fast as he could down the riverbank.

Nazo's eyes visibly widened upon seeing the darkness spread, and time apparently froze. Turning, his legs ran of their own free will, tearing after Iyoku. Lilac kept easy pace, but with prompting from her, Nazo managed to return her despite being in a full-out run. In fact, Nazo doubted he had ever run as fast as he was now, blaming it on the urgency of the situation. He kept his eyes on Iyoku - losing sight of him now would result in the group getting separated.

Still running at the same pace, Iyoku was very thankful he had not spent all his time at the library, or he wouldn’t have been able to keep going at the speed he was for long. His ears pricked as he heard a low rumbling in front of him, and shortly after, there was a massive roaring sound that signaled for sure that a waterfall was ahead. He knew that where a waterfall was, there were stones that jutted out of the falls from which the water made its way around as it fell. Soon enough, he did reach the waterfall, and knew he had no choice but to jump, and make his way down as swiftly as he possibly could, and proceeded to do so. The first stone that emerged from the falls was about five feet down, and upon jumping from that, he spotted another one another ten feet down and landed on it, careful not to slip. The third, and final stone was almost fifteen feet below him, but he made the jump, and proceeded to land back on the riverbank, not pausing to catch his breath before running again.

Nazo never even stopped as he approached the falls, flinging himself over it as he used his ability of flight to stop himself from a painful - and potentially lethal - fall. Flying was faster for him than running, but to stay close to Iyoku and not lose sight of the small hedgehog, he was forced to land once more and continue his crazy sprint. Nazo was distinctly aware of the burning sensation filling his lungs, slowly consuming his chest and spreading downwards to his legs. I cannot keep this up much longer!

Iyoku frowned slightly; he thought he saw something ahead, and when he looked harder, he saw that there was a gap in the woods that signaled another clearing ahead. Alright, he thought, I’ll have to coordinate this perfectly. He reached back, being careful not to lose his balance, and took a Poke Ball out of his bag. Opening it, he released its occupant, Koutei, who took to the air upon being released, and explained their situation through telepathy. Once they entered the clearing, and upon a telekinetic cue from Iyoku, Koutei swept down low so that the grey hedgehog could jump lightly on the Staraptor’s back. Slamming his wings down, the Normal-Flying Type increased his speed, and flew above the trees, running off the momentum of his earlier dive to keep going.

Utter relief flooded through the hedgehog as he saw Iyoku take off into the air. Taking one leap, he used that momentum to increase the second one, launching himself into the air and joining Koutei in the joys of flight. Casting his eyes back, he could not see the strange darkness anymore, although that was no guarantee it wasn't still coming. How long must we keep running? Nazo thought, slightly impatient. He knew it had to do something with the paralysis of the planet that Iyoku had spoke of, and was worried that it had already begun.

Still flying at the same fast pace, Iyoku also looked back at the forest below them, a frown on his face and dismay in his eyes. The paralysis… It’s happening already. It'll only be a matter of time before the rest of the planet is taken as well. Finally reaching the fringes of the forest, Iyoku knew that the darkness would not spread any further, so Koutei followed a telepathic request and angled his wings in a smooth descent to the ground. Landing on a hill that overlooked the once green woods, Iyoku shook his head, “I hope not many Pokemon or other travelers ended up getting trapped in that…” He knew from actually having seen the results that it was a bad way to go. In the darkest, deepest portions of the woods in the future, there were those who had become trapped within time and had become frozen, lifeless statues; never to eat, breathe, laugh or live again.

Nazo landed without so much as a soft thud, gazing out across the dark forest, he closed his eyes in thought. “Me neither. I can only imagine what would happen if one became trapped within time. To die without actually dying...” He shook his head sadly, realizing that at this point, there was nothing that could be done. They had to figure out what was causing it in the first place. Reaching back into the make-shift pack he had created, he released Lilac, who gasped at what she saw. She hastily asked Nazo what had happened.

“Time has stopped in the woods, apparently.” His soft voice hid his immense worry, helping to ease Lilac's own - if, albeit, just a little - so she could turn to look towards the North. She shivered slightly, knowing that the cold would be bitter and numbing. Heck, they could die from hypothermia.

Knowing that there was no point on dwelling in events that happened during the past, Iyoku looked to the opposite of them, where the plains were. Gigantic grassy fields spread out in front of them, flatter than a pancake, and were dotted with the occasional settlement before arriving at an abrupt halt to the foothills in the distance which eventually gave way to the tall, snow capped mountains.
I don’t think we’ll really have to worry about the cold until we actually get to the mountains themselves, he thought to himself, So… I guess we’ll just have to keep going through these grasslands until we reach a settlement that is close to the mountains.

With that, he turned and began the long trek north, Koutei circling high in the skies overhead.
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D: Lack of Sonic kicking butt...AND LACK OF EGGMAN!

Eggman: That's ROBOTNIK, you imbicile!

>.> Riiiight. Good chapter, but I prefer seeing Eggman Sonic kicking butt.
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I'll see if I can get Grassy to put Sonic and some others in there, but she was rather set on only using Nazo
But, eventually, they will end up fighting Robotnik. And it'll be hilarious XD *Has something planned*
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It'd better be. EGGIE MUST USE ROBO-POKEMON!

Eggman: ARGH! *snaps his fingers and a legion of robots maul MS* My name is Dr. Ivo ROBOTNIK, imbicile! How many times must I pound this into your head!?
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Actually...That's a good idea *Evil grin* >:3

Just for the record, imbecile is spelt as such XD
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Robotnik: SILENCE! I did that on purpose!

Of course you did! *strangled by Catterkiller*
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I don't know about you, Robotnik, but I wouldn't get her mad oO And as for that robo-Pokemon...

Yeah...She's more powerful than Arceus by now ^^'

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*still being gagged* You forget about the Metals. He has them, too. ROBO POKEMON WILL PWN!

Robotnik: Then perhaps you need a muzzle! *grins*

Silver: You should see what he has planned for me.
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Good thing the other side has their reinforcements too XD

Try it and you'll get a psychic blast more powerful than any atomic bomb.

Blunt and to the point.
And...what does he have planned for you? oO
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Silver: He's going to-- *Caterkiller wrapped around mouth*

SHH! No one muct know yet!

Robotnik: You're aware they think for themselves, aren't you?

Caterkiller: *looks confused* Whu? I was just...How'd I get over here?!
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*Back in from PokeSav* Must be good if he's going to that extent to keep it a secret XD

Yeah, I knew that. Either way, they'd probably make some interesting opponents.

That is 'author power', Caterkiller
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It should be. I've been meaning to do something with Silver anyways xD

Silver: *prys Caterkiller off his face* Jerk.

Eggman: Of course they would. Oh, did I mention the author's given me super strength?

>.> *feels like he's spamming*
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If you feel like you're spamming, we can just VM XD

*Shrugs* Eh, not bad, but can you create explosive Aura Spheres that destroy everything in their path? >:3
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You'll see the other characters eventually, Metal.

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I don’t think we’ll really have to worry about the cold until we actually get to the mountains themselves, he thought to himself, so… I guess we’ll just have to keep going through these grasslands until we reach a settlement that is close to the mountains.
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It should be, "finding herself staring at a pair of red eyes" ^^
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