Please Rate My Team!!

[MysticNightmare]

OK so I was just experimenting with movesets and pokemon and stuff and I put this team together. Can you tell me what you think and give me any advice on changes and stuff?

Scpetile
Leftovers
Jolly
Overgrow
252 HP / 252 Spe / 6 Sp. Def
-Toxic
-Substitute
-Protect
-Leech Seed


Skarmory
Leftovers
Jolly
Keen Eye
252 Def / 252 Spe / 6 Sp. Def
-Drill Peck
-Stealth Rock
-Spikes
-Roar


Umbreon
Leftovers
Relaxed
Synchronize
6 HP / 252 Def / 252 Sp. Def
-Curse
-Wish
-Payback
-Baton Pass


Weezing
Black Sludge
Bold
Levitate
252 HP / 252 Def / 6 Spe
-Pain Split
-Destiny Bond
-Flamethrower
-Will O Wisp


Hariyama
Flame Orb
Adamant
Guts
252 HP / 252 Atk / 6 Spe
-Facade
-Close Combat
-Bullet Punch
-Fake Out


Breloom
Toxic Orb
Jolly
Poison Heal
6 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
-Spore
-Focus Punch
-Leech Seed
-Substitute


Any help you give me will be greatly appreciated.

[The Doctor]

Originally Posted by MysticNightmare

OK so I was just experimenting with movesets and pokemon and stuff and I put this team together. Can you tell me what you think and give me any advice on changes and stuff?

Scpetile
Leftovers
Jolly
Overgrow
56 HP / 252 Spe / 200 Def
-Hidden Power Fire
-Substitute
-Leaf Blade / Grass Knot
-Leech Seed


Skarmory
Leftovers
Jolly
Keen Eye
252 Def / 252 Spe / 6 Sp. Def
-Drill Peck
-Stealth Rock
-Roost
-Roar


Umbreon
Leftovers
Relaxed
Synchronize
6 HP / 252 Def / 252 Sp. Def
-Curse
-Wish
-Payback
-Baton Pass


Weezing
Black Sludge
Bold
Levitate
252 HP / 252 Def / 6 Spe
-Pain Split
-Thunderbolt
-Flamethrower
-Will O Wisp


Hariyama
Flame Orb
Adamant
Guts
252 HP / 252 Atk / 6 Spe
-Facade
-Close Combat
-Bullet Punch
-Fake Out


Breloom
Toxic Orb
Jolly
Poison Heal
6 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
-Spore
-Focus Punch
-Leech Seed
-Substitute


Any help you give me will be greatly appreciated.

Changes In Bold.

-Darkness

[Viva la Gofre]

Darkness, don't just make changes to a person's team without explaining and justifying said changes, otherwise they will not know how their poke is improved and are not likely to make the changes.

Originally Posted by MysticNightmare

OK so I was just experimenting with movesets and pokemon and stuff and I put this team together. Can you tell me what you think and give me any advice on changes and stuff?

Scpetile
Leftovers
Jolly
Overgrow
56 HP / 252 Spe / 200 Def
-Toxic/X Scissor
-Substitute
-Leaf Blade
-Leech Seed

By maing your HP stat divisible by6 16, you get maximum use out of your leftovers, shoving the rest into defence is the best way to go. Subseeder needs attacks or the ever-common suicide leads out there LOL in your face with taunt, and protect is basically useless anyway.

Skarmory
Leftovers
Jolly
Keen Eye
192Def / 252 HP/ 64Att
-Brave Bird
-Roost
-Spikes/Stealth Rock
-Whilwind

Aweful EV spread, skarm is a physical wall and gets zero use out of all that speed. You can run 16 Speed EVs if you want to outrun max speed rhyperior, but you won't need them for anything else. Brave Bird please, recoil is minimal and you can roost it off anyway. As rare as they are, soundproof pokes aren't affected by roar so go whirlwind. Finally, skarm without roost= fail, only one entry hazard on him since you lack a spin blocker to make using two on one poke worthwhile.

Umbreon
Leftovers
Sassy
Synchronize
252HP/200Att/56SpDef
-Curse
-Wish
-Payback
-Baton Pass

Another poor EV spread, you're going to adding 50% of your initial def stat per curse so EVs aren't necersarry. Bulking up your SpDef is though.

Weezing
Black Sludge
Bold
Levitate
252 HP / 252 Def / 6 Spe
-Pain Split
-Thunderbolt
-Flamethrower
-Will O Wisp

Have you looked at weezing's speed? When is it ever gonna get to use destiny bond? Thunderbolt please so that water types don't laugh in your face.

Hariyama
Flame Orb
Adamant
Guts
252 HP / 252 Atk / 6 Spe
-Facade
-Close Combat
-Bullet Punch
-Payback

Bulkyness is kinda redundant when you're sapping 12% of your health a turn, use a decent guts sweeper like heracross for this.

Breloom
Toxic Orb
Jolly
Poison Heal
44HP / 252 Atk / 212Spe
-Spore
-Focus Punch
-Leech Seed
-Substitute

44HP Please, it gives better recovery. Otherwise fine.

Any help you give me will be greatly appreciated.

Changes in bold. You have two physical walls but nothing apart from umbreon can take special hits, so bring in a special wall. Nothing really enjoys recieveing curses either, so choose a more beneficial passer. Solve these problems and I'll rate again.

[Sebastien Loeb]

Skarmory, has to have for strength Roost. For how much as physical wall can be strong he cannot hold up for ever the hits of the physical sweepers of your opponent.

[Atheena]

Originally Posted by Sebastien Loeb

Skarmory, has to have for strength Roost. For how much as physical wall can be strong he cannot hold up for ever the hits of the physical sweepers of your opponent.

Yes. I agree. Roost is pretty much the base of his strength... without it he's pretty much worthless unless looking for a fast attacker... which isn't really that important when your looking for an attack team.

[platinumMaster]

Perrty cool but it should have soom changes

[Viva la Gofre]

Originally Posted by platinumMaster

Perrty cool but it should have soom changes

How on earth is that supposed to help the OP? Try posting something constructive in the strategy forums ¬¬

[MysticNightmare]

thanks for the help all of you but it sounds to me like this team is a bit of a dud

so i'll put my efforts into creating a better team with different pokemon altogether and post it up when i'm finished.