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Old 06-07-2008, 09:49 PM
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Default Symphony of Sorrow [A collaboration works of Geoffrey and Robert]

Symphony of Sorrow – A Collaboration of Geoffreys-Darkness and Robert

Unbolded: Robert's lines
Bolded: Geoffrey's lines

Shade covers our soul.
Simplicity has never been there.
We must be strong,
Before we’re swallowed completely.

Love covers our eyes.
Blinds us completely.
Shades us from light.
Together strong we will stay.


Break the surface,
And leave the pain.
Can we do this?
Or must we remain?

However we do this,
We will stay strong.
For love and hatred,
Falls down to the song.


But darkness and war can still go together… peace and light can never happen.


7-06-‘08
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Old 06-07-2008, 10:04 PM
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Default Re: Symphony of Sorrow [A collaboration works of Geoffrey and Robert]

It looks awesome...

We did good. xD


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Old 06-14-2008, 12:17 AM
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Old 07-11-2009, 04:46 PM
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Default Re: Symphony of Sorrow [A collaboration works of Geoffrey and Robert]

Bumping this because I can. (and I would like to hear some more comments if possible, Geoffrey and I have come a ways since when we did this one.)

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Bumping this because I can. (and I would like to hear some more comments if possible, Geoffrey and I have come a ways since when we did this one.)

=D

Yes; yes we have. I loved this poem so much, I changed my username to something similar. Yes. Now we see why. :D

We're planning (I hope 0_o) to do another collab, which is hopefully one of the dominating reasons why Robert bumped this thread, other than the fact that we really would like some more comments. xD
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Old 07-17-2009, 07:11 PM
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Yes; yes we have. I loved this poem so much, I changed my username to something similar. Yes. Now we see why. :D

We're planning (I hope 0_o) to do another collab, which is hopefully one of the dominating reasons why Robert bumped this thread, other than the fact that we really would like some more comments. xD
Yeah I'm still planning on the collab, I hope to get on AIM soon, I'm lazy like that =P
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