Originally Posted by austbot
''jack i caught 2 shadow pokemon''exclamed zeke. ''k zeke will continue to morrow'' said jack
Dude, you just triple posted, which is against the rules.
And this RP is a mess. Read the guides and the rules before making any more of these, and I'd highly recommend joining an RP before making your own. Fixing your spelling and grammar would also help massively, since people that post without a care for the presentation of their posts are almost never taken seriously, and often find themselves never earning that much respect from other members. Spelling and grammar are crucial here, not just for RPs, but for everything.
Sorry, but I need to lock this, since its going against many rules. Take a look at some other RPs, and you'll notice that other people post several paragraphs of detail, many times entire pages in MS Word. RPs that consist of nothing by one-liners and very rushed posts get locked here. All of us here are detail and depth oriented, we'd like you to respect that and treat the forum the same way.