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Old 01-08-2009, 05:07 AM
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Race:
Night Elf

Faction:
Affinity (for now)

Name:
Remidra Nri’tron

Age:
80 (Very young for a elf, considered still to be a teenager)

Gender:
Female

Appearance:
Remidra stands at 5 foot 9 ˝ inches (that’s my height!<3) and is very, very thin, possibly only weighing about 110-119 lbs. Her slender form suggests a very flexible individual and a rather good sneak at that. She has long legs and arms, which comes along with long fingers as well. Perfect for wrapping around a sword or a bow. Remidra appears to be around the age of 16 or 17 to humans. She has sharp, hooked nails like claws on the tip of each finger, black as night, and a pair of small fangs on her pearly whites to go with it. The two fangs poke out onto plump, and oddly curved blood red lips, set against pale, ivory skin. Remidra has startling blue eyes. The iris closer to the pupil being such a bright color its almost glowing, and on the outer rim of the iris it gets dark and deep, almost blackish-blue. Her eyes are slightly upturned on the outer corners, like a cats, giving her face a slightly less human look. Her features are much more soft, yet bolder, then a humans and it is hard for her fit in among them. Even if her large pointed ears are covered with a hood. Her ears are rather long like most night elf’s and stick about a inch or two out of her black hair. Her hair is thick and smooth, black as night. It is slightly wavy, a windblown effect to it, making it look like raven’s feathers.

Remidra is cloaked in very complex, and hand crafted clothing. Navy under amour, strong yet light, a elf’s secret in its forging, fitted and sewn like a corset and doubles with that function. With white lacings in the back, pulled tight around her bust and torso.. Over which she wears a black, silk tunic stopping at her upper thigh, just long enough to keep her modesty, cinched at the waist with a white string (To make it a bit more form fitting, making somewhat of a short dress appearance). Under that she wears black leggings, skin tight, to keep her pale limbs from glowing in the black night. Over that she wears a wine red cloak, hooded, made of a fine elfin fabric, stitched with gold thread. On her feet she wears no shoes whatsoever. Only when need be does she even think about covering them. Her toe nails are black like her clawed finger nails. On her lower back she has a tattoo of a elfin symbol, it appears to look like a sun bursting into flaming pieces, the tattoo is all black, and symbolizes power. On her right foot is a snake, its head starting on the middle of her foot and winding up her ankle, this symbolizes her ability at agility and going undetected, also for her lying and deceiving skills. Finally she has a tattoo of a crescent moon and a arrow. The moon almost working as a bow, this is the royal families symbol. All of these are pure black.

Remidra usually carries little with her, food and such she can catch on her own. But she is always well armed, whether she appears to be or not. She normally carries a bow and quiver on her back, a sleek black bow, her arrows are very simplistic and are built more for precision then for show. On her right hip she carries a sword. Its blade curved and a dull, pale blue. It has a hooked ending used for catching onto flesh and ripping it. It is a odd looking sword, even among elves, On its hilt is a black sapphire in the shape of a crescent moon. She also has twin daggers attached to her hips, and another one hidden in her corset/under amour. Very discreetly. All the daggers look bare a resemblance to the sword, just smaller.

Personality:
Remidra is wise beyond her years and a very confidant person. She states hr mind with ease and confort, but is not cocky in any possible way. Her intellect is great and her fighting skills as well. Remidra is a very strong young women, her list of accomplishments as high as the ceiling of the great palace itself. But it does not go to her head. She is a women (or, young women, for that matter) who keeps her emotions inside. Her face is almost always a blank slate of logic, though, she is not afraid to unleash her anger if it serves her purpose. She believes the use of showing emotions is not needed unless it helps to further a goal. Example, the release of passion is only needed when trying to sway the council with her new ideas. But she does not use them and twist them for her own self gain. She only uses emotions that are there, just beneath the surface.

It is quite possible that she has not cried since she was 30, nor smiled in years. She is a emotionless shell, though she is not cruel. She is caring, and polite, but also brutal and ruthless. Keeping her emotions inside is not a good thing though. Eventually she has to let them all out for fear of going mad. This usually happens without her control, and only happens when something emotionally draining happens. (example? When her father was killed back when she was 30, all her emotions went flooding out in tears and anger. She has not released any emotions since that night.) she does not lack emotion, it is just kept inside, and never showed. She still feels it.

Weapons:
Sword, daggers, bow and Magic (sword, daggers and bow explained in detail in appearance)

Magic:
Glacin Akain (she majors in this. And is very gifted with it)
The gift of speech (something I read in a book somewhere, a knowledge of almost all languages, albeit a few dead and/or unknown ones)
Along with the gift of speech comes Animal Magnitism. She cannot control them, but she can speak to them, somewhat, since a animals speech is a language.


History:
Princess Remidra Sapphire Nri’tron, daughter of Arinia Critsinz Nri’tron, queen of the night elves. Born to King Uriku Nri’tron, King of the night elves. The young princess was the brightest hope of the night elves, with a heir, the king could go out and fight and the queen could run the elves. Remidra was a gift, for Arinia had been trying for years to birth a child, but to no avail. Remidra was said to be conceived on the night of a crescent moon, the queen had just prayed to the elfin gods, and a mage had attempted to cast a spell on her. And thus Remidra was born, if it was no coincidental enough that the baby was conceived on the day of the crescent moon (the moon being the royal families emblem) the young girl was born on that day as well. She was predicted to be the most well behaved, the most manner-able and the most pleasing princess to ever be born. To sit proudly on the throne and deal with diplomatic affairs. She would be their savior.

Remidra was smart, always was, always will be, she had a intuitive mind from her first days out of her mother womb. She was curious, made daring guesses and executed them with passion and faith (whether it be figuring out how to get something off the top shelf, or what her parents were talking about based on their facial expressions) Though Remidra was a odd child, she never showed really any emotion and was very strange. She did not communicate with other children and spent her days theorizing in her room and studying the commanders plans. Her childhood was filled with lessons on debate and running the country. She was interested in all of it, but wanted to learn more about battle strategy. Her mother denied her that, for she did not want her only child to be killed in battle, she had tried for too long to fulfill her maternal needs and would not have her daughter taken away from her.

When Remidra was 10 she began to learn to defend herself (as all elves must learn) but she went beyond the regular training and honed her skills. By the age of 20 she was the most skilled archer in the kingdom, not to mention a great scout and a wonderful ranger. She was smart and cunning, but she was very tactical as well. She enjoyed battling and wanted to serve her kingdom. When she turned 30, her father was murdered. No one ever found out how it happened. Remidra was devastated. That was the last time she ever cried.

At age of 60 she requested her mother let her join the council of their armed forces (the elves did not have things like army and navy, they had one force, consisting of archers, under the command of one elite commander. Who, the queen has little say over. In the past the king filled this position, but alas, he fell) when her mother denied her, for fear of losing her daughter as well. Remidra, being strong minded agreed with her mother. She could not join the Council. She would run it. Remidra felt the current comander was not good for their causes. He had horrid plans and did not think as cleverly as he should Remidra challenged the current commander of the Council to a battle. The winner, would become (or stay) the commander. This man was not a trustworthy man, nor a smart one at that. And took on her challenge, underestimating her abilities. She beat him within 69 seconds and took over. Her, mother, now furious at this behavior. Now refuses to speak to her as a daughter, and now only talks to her as a commander. Not many know outside of the elfin community that she is the queen’s daughter. In fact, only elves know of this, but never speak about it.

The Council was not to pleased at having a teenager (in elfin terms) basically running the country. Not to mention the former commander was now Remidra’s advisor and did not like being below the girl that humiliated them. Though, to their disdain, she was a great leader and did more hands on work then the former commander did. Now, she is very skilled in all types of warfare, and the best warrior around (for elves, though, not many have seen her in battle) Remidra is also gifted in the magic of Glacin Akian, extremely gifted in fact. She also is somewhat gifted with The gift of Speech, basically a knowledge of all languages (albeit maybe a few, ancient and dead ones) along with this comes a little animal Magnetism (As animal’s do speak in languages) though animal magnetism is a very minor power.

Other:
1) She looks like she is about 16-18 years old
2) thought she is 80, she is a teenager in elfin terms, Though more knowledgeable then most humans and should still be treated with respect.
3)…I like cheese.


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Sabi is teh Dragon Master

Please reserve me, I shall post my sign-up when it is complete.
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Old 01-10-2009, 05:15 AM
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Lusaknya: Yes, you can be Neutral, just put 'Unaligned; for Faction.

Everyone is reserved who asked for it. I'll update my list tomorrow since I'm so sick it's hard to breathe.

So Alana, I love the size of your SU but I'm gonna have to read it fully tomorrow darling. I'm just here tonight to catch up. Taking exams when you're as sick as I am first thing in the morning, and prior having to walk to school in -50 celcius weather is not, I repeat, not pleasant.
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Race: Sky Elf

Faction: Affinity

Name: Defahn Windspeak

Age: 108 Human Years

Gender: Female

Appearance: Defahn is about 5'11" and weighs about 83 pounds, as well as pale skin. She has brown hair that is about a quarter of the way down her back, and is secured into place with a sky blue headband. She has long, pointy ears that are about an inch and a half long, with small pearl earrings on their lobes. She has green eyes that seem to glow, and brown eyebrows that are thin and stick out about half an inch past her face. She wears a robe that is the same shade of sky blue as her headband, and the robes have sleeves that nearly cover up her arms, only revealing a pair of dark leather gloves that have no fingers, and reveal a ring made of a sapphire-like stone cut in the shape of an eagle, the symbol of the sky elves. She has an amulet with that same stone cut in the same way. On her waist, she wears a dark leather belt with a medium-sized bag and a sheath for her dagger. She also carries a quiver attacked to her back, used for keeping her bow and arrows in. Lastly, she wears a pair of dark leather boots.

Personality: Defahn may appear and act cold to you when you first meet her, if you're not an elf. If you are, she'll quickly warm up to you. If not, then it will either take a long time spent around her or a live-saving to get her to trust you, and if it's the latter, she'll repay her debt no matter how long it takes. When that is done, she will continue to trust you.
She is very respectful and obedient to people she deems of a higher power than she is, and will never look into such a person's eyes. She will always finish one of their tasks from start to finish, even if she may die in the process.

Weapons: Defahn carries a dagger that has a pure white, six-inch long blade. The handle is nearly black and can be held with one hand. She also carries a bow made out of ash and carved with various patterns. It is small enough to be held in her quiver. She uses arrows made out of ash wood, sometimes used to deliver messages.

Magic: She has an affinate bond with a gryphon, so she has mastered the art of Tempest Aivent.
Shapeshifting, Summoning, and Animal Magnetism are other magics she know.

History: When Defahn was a child of 16 years, she was always happy, until that one terrible day. The humans, overcome by the immense power given to them, killed her parents. She and the other remaining elves of her species were forced to retreat to the top of a mountain, thereby giving them the name "sky elves".
Throughout the many years of living as a sky elf, she had always felt a sense of dread. Dread, and hatred of the humans, for she feared they would find her peoples' hideout and kill the rest of them.
She made a silent vow to herself that she would avenge the ones who died.
Late one night, she ran away from the mountain cave she called home, bringing with her the dagger that she was given to her by her father before he was murdered. In the result, she nearly died tring to get down the mountain. That is where she met the gryphon, Koth, and developed a strange bond with him that she didn't understand. Through that bond, she was given the power to control weather, which she spent many years mastering. She has also used that time to create a perfect bow, one made of ash and carved with odd symbols that no one but her could understand.
She also has developed a strong bond with animals, completely different from the bond between Koth and herself. This gift is well known among certain species of elves. She can transform into any animal that she has seen before and knows well, and can summon and communicate with them as well.

Other: She appears to be at least 19 or 20. She also usually has at least one animal following her around, usually a bird.
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Race: Werewolf

Faction: Affinity

Name: Alexander Black

Age: 24

Gender: Male

Appearance:

Alex is about 5' 10" with an athletic body, which came in handy in a number of fights. He also where's a ring on his left hand (ring finger, obviously) that was given to him by his best friend before he left for war.

Personality: Very open-minded and curious. He is quick to jump to conclusions and as a liking of working alone. His friends used to call him annoying, but he was smart and actually helped out in many situations.

Weapons: He has a number of swords, but his favorite and most used ones are: A long, slightly curved blade that was named Dark Frost for it's dark blue color, and a dagger he named Kerzak. He uses his dagger in his left hand with a backhanded fighting style.

Magic: Affinite Bond -> Geokinesis -> Amber Teram
Also able to turn rocks/dirt into any form he likes, as long as he has enough around him.

History: He was born in the city, but later moved farther out and settled near mountains. He would sometimes train with many of his neighbors, and they were impressed with his old timey sword moves. They would even use guns against him, but they couldn't kill or even injure him. His father suffered a tragic heart attack, and Alexander moved to another town near his old home. When Alex turned 23, he found a queer note in his home to follow a trail of grass. He abandoned the note and thought nothing of it. The next morning, a trail of blue grass appeared in his yard, and Alex ran inside to get his weapons before leaving his house. He ran into the woods, and found a large hole in the ground. He peered over the edge, and out flew a magnificent gryphon, 20 sizes larger than Alex. He fell to the ground, suddenly turned to a coward, when the gryphon somehow contacted him, but not through his mind. The giant creature had told Alex about his history, and even about Affinite pledges, and Alex agreed, wanting to help with the war against the evil Oruk. They both said the Pledge at once, and Alex felt the power fuse in with his own. For many weeks, Patrick practiced his new skill, able to move rocks, pebbles, and anything to do with the earth. For one week, he lived off of this power, but when he arrived to his house, it had been burned to the ground. He then left, and is now searching for others with these new powers, hoping to help in any way possible.

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Race: Angel
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Name: Kiron Akula
Age: 78 (about 30 in Angel years)
Gender: Male
Appearance: Kiron is about a head and a half taller than most humans, with short-cropped black hair and golden eyes. Fairly handsome, he is usually wearing a serious expression and wears traditional white hellion robes, trimmed with gold. His meter and a half long wings, attached to his back, are classically white and feathered. His halo changes color and style depending on his mood. Underneath his robes he wears a fairly loose white jumpsuit and a belt, on which he attaches his weapons, a pair of expandable swords and two double-barreled steam pistols. He always stands and sits with an upright posture. He wears a patch over his left eye.

Personality: Kiron is dark, sometimes moody, and when he makes jokes it’s usually very difficult to tell due to his tone being exactly the same as he making a normal statement. He almost never gets laid-back, and gets extremely uncomfortable when events spiral completely and utterly out of his control. His sense of duty is very strong. His sense of morality is just as strong—however, due to his past, it is all too easily twisted and corrupted, justifying things as “for the greater good”. He likes the innocence of small children, but isn’t too good at handling them himself. He’s also somewhat awkward in social situations. His guard is never let down, and slats of emotional armor prevent other people from getting too close to him, all due to having the vast majority of his life being dominated by war.

Weapons: Kiron uses two extendable waveform swords. In retracted mode, they appear as two thick cylinders the length of a person’s forearm, but at the flip of a switch they expand into long swords. The blades are round; they have no edge, yet the waveform field that surrounds them makes them nothing but edge. The swords do have limited power and have to be recharged regularly, either from Kiron’s inherent powers or mechanically. One sword is a three-meter long dual-blade sword (think Darth Maul) while the other is a more traditional sword with adjustable length.

In addition to his waveform swords, he wields two large double-barreled steam guns. Primitive by modern standards, these guns only have two shots each, are fairly difficult and time-consuming to reload, and are powered by steam generated from Haro spheres instead of gunpowder. However, what they lack in technology they make up for in power and accuracy, which is magically enhanced. When without ammunition, he can channel his Lumikinesis through them.

Magic: Lumikinesis. Lumikinesis is control over light. Kiron is able to focus, bend, create, and amplify light to transform it into a weapon and as an energy source. He can gather it into concentrated spheres, beams, sheets, etc.

History: Kiron was born as the son of wealthy noble. His people lived on massive cities in the clouds, and generally ignored the battles of both the Ascended plane and the lower regions of Fallen planes, isolated, although flying creatures would sometimes come and go. However, when the elements of Corruption and Chaos entered the human world, the gulf of the sky could only protect them for so long. Soon the elements spread into the Angel civilization, and the Angels began to change to become more and more human-like in personality, instead of their previous peace-loving selves. Kiron was born into the age-long Angel civil war, with the Stratosphere Alliance (the legitimate government) on one side, and the breakaway Confederacy on the other. Few in number from the beginning, the war ravaged Angel civilization.

The war began with the ascension of Kiron’s uncle, Zamiero Akula, within the ranks of the Alliance military. The seeds of civil war were already beginning to grow even then, with terrorists bombing the Alliance capital, Diaspar, frequently. Zamiero facilitated the creation of a specialized police, the Stratosphere Alliance Guard (SAG), to combat the terrorists. Unknown to all, Zamiero had far greater plans in mind, and used a communication between the Chief of State and the terrorist leader to accuse the Chief of State of treason, and, along with some cunning political maneuvering, unleash a coup that placed himself along with Admiral Naithol as co-Chiefs. It was then that the terrorists went from merely terrorizing to declaring themselves to be a free state entirely. War soon erupted as several of the floating cities joined the Confederacy, with atrocities committed on both sides, skyship fleets laying waste to many cities.

Kiron originally served within the SAG, as Zamiero’s student, whom he looked up to. But as the war dragged on and Zamiero’s ultimate designs began to slowly become apparent, he became less and less sure about his side in the war, and looking more towards his father’s position, as neutral. The final blow came when Kiron’s mother was found murdered. A former spy and assassin, his mother was certainly not killed by anything that wasn’t deliberately targeted towards her, and Kiron began to suspect Zamiero of having done the kill, at least ordering it if not having done it himself.

Still having been Zamiero’s subordinate at this time, Kiron began to plot his own vengeance. Onboard Zamiero’s flagship, Kiron worked hard to gain his uncle’s trust, even going so far as letting a city be razed to the cloudtop, all so that he could guarantee his kill. When he finally attacked it was more luck than anything that saved Zamiero, with a few stray bombs just happening to knock Zamiero out of position for Kiron’s kill. Zamiero promptly took in his student and began torturing him.
It was finally when Zamiero’s own sister succeeded in an assassination when the war ended. But the Angels, few in number from the beginning, had been ravaged to the point where they were in danger of extinction as a civilization. The clouds had few raw materials, and the Angels simply could not rebuild. Few skyships remained, and there no cities were left unscathed. Without the essential recyclers that enabled civilized life in the clouds, it was impossible to even scavenge the ruins for parts. And so, for the first time, they are descending to the ground levels in an attempt to start over.


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Okay, here is my evaluation so far:

Alana darling, you're accepted

Dimentio is also accepted.

Lusankya, you can never have too much in an SU. Loved the history, also accepted. I like the lum...luah...your magic thingy. Reminds me of special relativity in my Physics class.


Now State Alchemist Patrick, I'm having a bit of confusion going on with ya. You say Alexander is 17, but mention him being 23 in your history, and he meets a dragon and forms an affinite bond. Second, dragon's have the natural magic of Pyrokinesis, not Goekinesis, so unless you forgot to mention Alex is Affinite bonded with a Gryphon, you can't learn Geokinesis under Dragon Affinite Bonding. Unless you can make up some history for the dragon to explain his Geokinetic powers. Like the dragon was raised entirely by gryphons and learned it from them while still holding a sliver of pyrokinetic energy still.

Or you put dragon accidentally instead of gryphon.

I don't think I quite made that really, really clear in the beginning so I do apologize. I'm not rejecting your SU, just wondering if you could fix some stuff please.


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I was more referring to inventing an entirely new civilization with floating cities and ships, but okay!
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Okay, here is my evaluation so far:

Alana darling, you're accepted

Dimentio is also accepted.

Lusankya, you can never have too much in an SU. Loved the history, also accepted. I like the lum...luah...your magic thingy. Reminds me of special relativity in my Physics class.


Now State Alchemist Patrick, I'm having a bit of confusion going on with ya. You say Alexander is 17, but mention him being 23 in your history, and he meets a dragon and forms an affinite bond. Second, dragon's have the natural magic of Pyrokinesis, not Goekinesis, so unless you forgot to mention Alex is Affinite bonded with a Gryphon, you can't learn Geokinesis under Dragon Affinite Bonding. Unless you can make up some history for the dragon to explain his Geokinetic powers. Like the dragon was raised entirely by gryphons and learned it from them while still holding a sliver of pyrokinetic energy still.

Or you put dragon accidentally instead of gryphon.

I don't think I quite made that really, really clear in the beginning so I do apologize. I'm not rejecting your SU, just wondering if you could fix some stuff please.


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Ok well I'm still working on my SU but I want to show you my powers to make sure they are ok to use and I asked Lusankya about my Dimukinesis magic and he said it is ok because it is the same as his magic but using darkness instead of light. Well here they are any ways and tell me if they are ok!

Shadow Manipulation- He can turn shadows 3d and control them.

Shadow Merge- Merge his body with his own shadow, giving him enhanced strength and vitality. As a shadow, he can fly and he can turn flat which allows him to pass under really tight gaps.

Shadow Imitation- By using his Shadow Imitation Technique, Blane can merge his shadow with his opponent's shadow, and force his opponent to mimic his movements.

Illusion of fear- Summons an Illusion oh his opponents biggest fear.

Night Vision- Can see in the dark.

Dimukinesis. Dimukinesis is control over darkness. Blane is able to focus, bend, create, and amplify darkness to transform it into a weapon and as an energy source. He can gather it into concentrated spheres, beams, sheets, etc.
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May I be reserved, Sabi teh dragon master?

And can we have more than one character? (Like two bonded pairs?)
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Old 01-11-2009, 11:07 PM
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State Alchemist PAtrick, 'tis okay, you're now accepted.

FP, those magics are fine with me. You may use them.

Eankaku, you are reserved and can have as many characters as you can handle.
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Shall we be starting soon?

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:F You have been downgraded because you said I was spcecial adn gave me a cookie.

..then gave evryone a cookie.
I hope your happy.
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Dimukinesis. Dimukinesis is control over darkness. Blane is able to focus, bend, create, and amplify darkness to transform it into a weapon and as an energy source. He can gather it into concentrated spheres, beams, sheets, etc.
But wait, if darkness is the absence of light (which it is), then wouldn't controlling darkness merely mean moving and reflecting light such that it doesn't affect a certain area? And, with the Shadow Manipulation and Shadow Merge powers, how could the darkness have any sort of physical effect? I mean, light is a form of energy, which at least has mass, so it could in theory be focused enough to harm or injure, whereas darkness doesn't have that? And how could you control a person through their shadow... I need to stop thinking about this or my brain will explode. Ima finish my SU now.
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