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Old 11-19-2008, 02:40 AM
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Wow, Inazuma is rather ruthless.
Would the mermen really have been that difficult though? I mean, do they have a problem with outsiders?
Sorry, I don't know much about the rp.
It was still a good chapter. I liked the comment about trying to return the Ano ho-oh in one peice. ^^

Oh, you titled it as Chapter 9.
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Old 11-19-2008, 02:59 AM
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Wow, Inazuma is rather ruthless.
Would the mermen really have been that difficult though? I mean, do they have a problem with outsiders?
Sorry, I don't know much about the rp.
It was still a good chapter. I liked the comment about trying to return the Ano ho-oh in one peice. ^^

Oh, you titled it as Chapter 9.
Yes. The mermen in the RP were and are suppose to be difficult. They didn't like the idea of humans period to begin with and the mermen really didn't like the idea of Neo and his people draining the water above to make more land for the humans. So yeah, they really don't like anything that is human or human-like at all. haha

Yes, I would like the Ano Ho-oh to come back in one piece. I had much more grander plans for it's destruction later on...Also no stinkin mermen are going to destory the ship that is known as the Ship Killer. haha

Good chapter Rust. Can't wait to see what else you do with the Ano Ho-oh. haha (I am so not bias. haha)

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Old 11-19-2008, 03:10 AM
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Wow, Inazuma is rather ruthless.
Would the mermen really have been that difficult though? I mean, do they have a problem with outsiders?
Sorry, I don't know much about the rp.
It was still a good chapter. I liked the comment about trying to return the Ano ho-oh in one peice. ^^

Oh, you titled it as Chapter 9.
Yeah, the Mermen don't like people much. Thanks for the tip too. XD
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Yes. The mermen in the RP were and are suppose to be difficult. They didn't like the idea of humans period to begin with and the mermen really didn't like the idea of Neo and his people draining the water above to make more land for the humans. So yeah, they really don't like anything that is human or human-like at all. haha

Yes, I would like the Ano Ho-oh to come back in one piece. I had much more grander plans for it's destruction later on...Also no stinkin mermen are going to destory the ship that is known as the Ship Killer. haha

Good chapter Rust. Can't wait to see what else you do with the Ano Ho-oh. haha (I am so not bias. haha)

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Old 11-19-2008, 03:11 AM
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Yep, the mermen were no joke. They're pretty savage when it comes to defending their home territory. Most laser and plasma technology wouldn't work very well underwater, and neither would most machines. So even in the RP, it definitely proved to be enough of a challenge.

Nicely done again, rust. Inazuma can sure be one nasty beast in combat. And everything about "Shadow Aeroblast" just screams awesomeness on all levels.

Keep up the good work.
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Old 11-19-2008, 03:22 AM
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Nicely done again, rust. Inazuma can sure be one nasty beast in combat. And everything about "Shadow Aeroblast" just screams awesomeness on all levels.

Keep up the good work.
Just wait until we get to Shadow Sacred Fire. ;) Maybe you'll get to RP as Inazuma one day. XD

Also, Neo, Mike, Ski, or Finch... Any of you interested in writing a guest chapter since the WAR RP doesn't start for another couple of weeks, so I'm guessing you're not as busy as usual?
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Old 11-19-2008, 03:25 AM
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Just wait until we get to Shadow Sacred Fire. ;) Maybe you'll get to RP as Inazuma one day. XD

Also, Neo, Mike, Ski, or Finch... Any of you interested in writing a guest chapter since the WAR RP doesn't start for another couple of weeks, so I'm guessing you're not as busy as usual?
I currently have my hands full with ToJ III, but thanks for the offer.
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Old 11-19-2008, 03:26 AM
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I currently have my hands full with ToJ III, but thanks for the offer.
Alright. Offer's always open btw. Only reason I ask you guys is because I'm a chapter behind if I want to finish up Act 1 by Thanksgiving. XD
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Old 11-19-2008, 11:05 AM
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Alright. Offer's always open btw. Only reason I ask you guys is because I'm a chapter behind if I want to finish up Act 1 by Thanksgiving. XD
I would like to write a guest chapter, but I don't see the plausibility of a Silver-centric chapter coming up any time soon, and I'm only really confident of writing Silver properly.
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Old 11-19-2008, 12:32 PM
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I would like to write a guest chapter, but I don't see the plausibility of a Silver-centric chapter coming up any time soon, and I'm only really confident of writing Silver properly.
Just wait until the Grungust is finished. ;)
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Just wait until the Grungust is finished. ;)
Wait, there's a Grungust? :O

Please tell me I get a mention in this. Q_Q At least as comic relief?
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Wait, there's a Grungust? :O

Please tell me I get a mention in this. Q_Q At least as comic relief?
Read moar.
And what did you even do in TRP2 anyway?
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Just wait until we get to Shadow Sacred Fire. ;) Maybe you'll get to RP as Inazuma one day. XD

Also, Neo, Mike, Ski, or Finch... Any of you interested in writing a guest chapter since the WAR RP doesn't start for another couple of weeks, so I'm guessing you're not as busy as usual?
I am intrested but as you can see grammer is holding me back. If you are ok, I can write it and you can take care of all the grammer junk like I'm and I am and junk like that. You still have to work but it be much less then doing a whole chapter.

Still I do have an idea for a chapter that goes along with what I said before concerning a certain character. Want me to PM my idea for a chapter so you can see if it is ok?

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Old 11-19-2008, 10:50 PM
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Wait, there's a Grungust? :O

Please tell me I get a mention in this. Q_Q At least as comic relief?
You weren't even in Team RP II. :P
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I am intrested but as you can see grammer is holding me back. If you are ok, I can write it and you can take care of all the grammer junk like I'm and I am and junk like that. You still have to work but it be much less then doing a whole chapter.

Still I do have an idea for a chapter that goes along with what I said before concerning a certain character. Want me to PM my idea for a chapter so you can see if it is ok?

Drew, Draw, Drawn!
I'll send you a PM later tonight with details. Just send me the chapter when you're done, I'll correct it, send it back to you, and you can post it. ;)
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Thanks for the 411 on the mermen. All in all, they're not exactly anyone you'd want to meet up with, right? ^^'
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Old 11-21-2008, 07:14 AM
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Read moar.
And what did you even do in TRP2 anyway?
I did random non-explody things in 5. :P

And according to SRW lore, within laser/plasmas, only the beam sabers work underwater.\

As soon as I finish grading mountains of stuff, I'll sit down and read. :P
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