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01-18-2009, 01:13 AM
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Zhu-Quiao
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Re: Forsaken Bounds: The Forged Alliance [Chapter 16 is Up!]
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Originally Posted by Charizard Michelle
The addiction is back. About time!
I have to say. I am impress. I can't wait for the next chapter. Speechless.
Also you pasted the chapter twice.
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Yeah, I guess I hit 'V' twice when I Ctrl+V'd it.
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01-18-2009, 04:21 AM
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Re: Forsaken Bounds: The Forged Alliance [Chapter 16 is Up!]
Absolutely fantastic. You've definitely captured Neo Winterfield perfectly.
And Dragonforce's Through the Fire and Flames is always a fantastic pick for music. You have good taste, amigo.
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01-18-2009, 04:23 AM
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Zhu-Quiao
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Re: Forsaken Bounds: The Forged Alliance [Chapter 16 is Up!]
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Originally Posted by Neo Pikachu
Absolutely fantastic. You've definitely captured Neo Winterfield perfectly.
And Dragonforce's Through the Fire and Flames is always a fantastic pick for music. You have good taste, amigo.
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I figured Through the Fire and Flames would be a perfect theme for Neo. I have a theme picked out for rust too, that I'll be using when he gets a one-on-one with Diabora later in the fic.
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01-18-2009, 04:30 AM
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Re: Forsaken Bounds: The Forged Alliance [Chapter 16 is Up!]
Damn. So does everybody has cool theme music? I mean Ski had Guren-Lagura and then you two have one. I really wonder if Mike is going to get one too. Can I? haha
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01-18-2009, 05:01 PM
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Zhu-Quiao
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Re: Forsaken Bounds: The Forged Alliance [Chapter 16 is Up!]
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Originally Posted by Charizard Michelle
Damn. So does everybody has cool theme music? I mean Ski had Guren-Lagura and then you two have one. I really wonder if Mike is going to get one too. Can I? haha
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Rick Astley's Never Gonna Give You Up. :P
I don't know, actually. I don't have anything wild and crazy enough in my library to truly symbolize Mike. XD
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01-18-2009, 05:14 PM
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Re: Forsaken Bounds: The Forged Alliance [Chapter 16 is Up!]
Act 2! Act 2!
But is it just me, or is the grammar all over the place?
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01-18-2009, 08:38 PM
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Zhu-Quiao
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Re: Forsaken Bounds: The Forged Alliance [Chapter 16 is Up!]
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Originally Posted by skiboydoggy
Act 2! Act 2!
But is it just me, or is the grammar all over the place?
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Bleh, I'm still getting used to writing in past tense third person omniscient again. >_>
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01-18-2009, 08:41 PM
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Re: Forsaken Bounds: The Forged Alliance [Chapter 16 is Up!]
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Bleh, I'm still getting used to writing in past tense third person omniscient again. >_>
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I always write in third person. Except in my short stories, but those are in an altogether different style. xP
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01-18-2009, 08:46 PM
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Re: Forsaken Bounds: The Forged Alliance [Chapter 16 is Up!]
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Originally Posted by Lord Celebi
Rick Astley's Never Gonna Give You Up. :P
I don't know, actually. I don't have anything wild and crazy enough in my library to truly symbolize Mike. XD
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haha Yeah. Good point.
What about that song from Legend of Zelda. I don't know the name but it can be heard in Smash Bros. I think. Meh. I am sure you can figure something out. haha
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01-18-2009, 10:05 PM
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Zhu-Quiao
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Re: Forsaken Bounds: The Forged Alliance [Chapter 16 is Up!]
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haha Yeah. Good point.
What about that song from Legend of Zelda. I don't know the name but it can be heard in Smash Bros. I think. Meh. I am sure you can figure something out. haha
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You mean the Lost Woods song?
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01-19-2009, 02:22 AM
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Re: Forsaken Bounds: The Forged Alliance [Chapter 16 is Up!]
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haha
You know what? That sounded so much more better in my head. haha
How about Lon Lon Ranch or Majora's Mask Battle? haha Or To The Moon from Zelda. haha Still Lon Lon Rance is good. haha
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01-19-2009, 09:47 PM
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Re: Forsaken Bounds: The Forged Alliance [Chapter 16 is Up!]
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Originally Posted by Charizard Michelle
haha
You know what? That sounded so much more better in my head. haha
How about Lon Lon Ranch or Majora's Mask Battle? haha Or To The Moon from Zelda. haha Still Lon Lon Rance is good. haha
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Mike's a country bumpkin now?
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01-20-2009, 05:10 AM
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Re: Forsaken Bounds: The Forged Alliance [Chapter 16 is Up!]
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Hasn't he always been? I am not sure about Neo but you were raised in the city while Mike was raised on Cinnabar. Neo I believe was raised on Maville. haha
If To the Moon was longer then haha. That has an exciting beat to it. haha
Still another song that been in my head would be Paper Moon. haha Still don't you think that will be a good opening if this was ever made into an anime? haha (Ignoring the fact that it is an opening for Soul Eater. haha)
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01-20-2009, 05:19 AM
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Zhu-Quiao
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Re: Forsaken Bounds: The Forged Alliance [Chapter 16 is Up!]
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Originally Posted by Charizard Michelle
Hasn't he always been? I am not sure about Neo but you were raised in the city while Mike was raised on Cinnabar. Neo I believe was raised on Maville. haha
If To the Moon was longer then haha. That has an exciting beat to it. haha
Still another song that been in my head would be Paper Moon. haha Still don't you think that will be a good opening if this was ever made into an anime? haha (Ignoring the fact that it is an opening for Soul Eater. haha)
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Cinnabar was a tourist resort, it was never in the country. There really isn't a place 'in the country' in Pokemon... >_>
Never heard of Paper Moon.
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01-20-2009, 01:27 PM
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Re: Forsaken Bounds: The Forged Alliance [Chapter 16 is Up!]
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Originally Posted by Lord Celebi
Cinnabar was a tourist resort, it was never in the country. There really isn't a place 'in the country' in Pokemon... >_>
Never heard of Paper Moon.
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haha That is true. haha
Yes there is a place 'in the country' in Pokemon. That town where you breed pokemon and catch unowns in Sinnoh. I can't spell it for the heck of me so I just describe it. haha Also that Miltank place in Jotho (North of the gym with steel type pokemon town is) is also 'in the country'.
Look up second opening for Soul Eater on YouTube.
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