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Old 10-23-2008, 05:31 PM
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wow that was exelent :D keep it up

1 tip put all the chapters in the first post k
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Old 10-23-2008, 05:32 PM
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wow that was exelent :D keep it up

1 tip put all the chapters in the first post k
why? i know people can see them better but most fics dont.
plus nowone will know ehen there is a new one.
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Old 10-23-2008, 05:39 PM
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:3 Looks good. But, as a friendly suggestion, you should use Quotes ( "" ) when they are talking, and these ( '' ) when they're thinking, that way it's less confusing. Or use italics to symbolize thoughts instead.

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okay, i`ll do that in the next chapter
i dont have many readers do i...
just youthree, its a start!
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Old 10-23-2008, 05:43 PM
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i'm keep watching put i have not got a clue about what's happening.
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okay, i`ll do that in the next chapter
i dont have many readers do i...
just youthree, its a start!


X3 I'm not saying you must do it, it just looks much neater.
I guess the Fanfiction section doesn't have much love.

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i'm keep watching put i have not got a clue about what's happening.
but you siad its crap...
amd to see whats happening read the chapters.
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Old 10-23-2008, 08:16 PM
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please don't swear it disoabying the rules
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Old 10-23-2008, 08:18 PM
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Cr**, isnt a swear but i stared it just incase
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Old 10-23-2008, 09:12 PM
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hello. how are you? the fanfic looks great!
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Old 10-23-2008, 09:26 PM
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i am fine thanks
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Old 10-23-2008, 09:27 PM
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loved the new chap!
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Old 10-25-2008, 12:11 PM
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can't wait for the new one .. :D
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lol XD i jus pwned a lvl 2 pokemon with a lvl 100 lol
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Old 10-26-2008, 04:33 PM
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i cant post the next chapter for a while now cause im on holiday and i left my notes at home...
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