Revenge Of The Sand Village (SU)

[pikachugirl2]

This is gonna be my second RP.

Everything was right with the Hidden Leaf Village. Inside it, that is. The war between the Leaf Village and the Sand Village raged on. Gaara, Temari, and Kankuro watched helplessly from inside the protection of the Leaf Village. Gaara would have done anything to defend his home.
Then Orochimaru and the Ikatski came.
After a good deal of argument, The Sand Village Genin and the Ikatski made a deal. Gaara and the others would fight with the Ikatski side-by-side on the destruction of the Leaf Village. The Genin of the Leaf Village say otherwise.
The Jonin, Chunin, and even the Hokage are taken hostage. It seems the only ones fighting back now are the Academy Students and the Genin. It's all up to them to stop the Ikatski and the Sand Village Genin from destroying the village!

Sign-Up Sheet:
Genin/Academy Student:
Side(good or evil):
Username(your REAL username. the one on ur profile.):
Do you swear not to be a n00b?:

example:

Genin/Academy Student: Naruto (Uzumaki)
Side: Good
Username: pikachugirl2
Do you swear not to be a n00b?: yes, i swear.

rules:
1. No swearing. I don't mean little baby things, I mean no stuff that could get you banned.
2. Nothing sick that can hurt someone's feelings and nothing that just is flat-out NOT OK.
3. No n00bs! XD
4. PLEASE no flaming. You can tell me that I suck and stuff like that, but no flaming. Got it?
5. Keep the gore and blood meter to about below medium level. We don't want bad images to enter peoples minds XD



Ninjas
Naruto-pikachugirl2

[Alana Marie]

O_O Oh geeze you have to be kidding me. Alright.
This has all the same mistakes as your other RP SU. If you want to know what is wrong with it in detail. Check out what i posted in your other RP. Because this...oh boy.

One: Your plot. Did you see my plot in my RP? How long was it? like 6 of your's. That is about normal length of a plot around here.

You lack rules. There is a full list of good rules in the other RP Su i posted in. Please refer to that.

Your Sign up. You need things like

Name:(make up your own character!)
Age:
gender:
Genin/Academy Student: (choose one)
Appearence:
Personality:
History: (this should be a little long)
RP sample:

Alright. I will PM a mod and have this locked. :| BTW you might want to read the rules. Cuz in your other RP you are breaking just about all of them.

[pikachugirl2]

I do RPs my own way. Everyone does. (I think u really like people typing stuff :)

I have my own way of doing RPs though. I saw that you did too. And Solohell, and Roxas13, and Lonliness, everyone does RPs different, for the record.

BTW, can you actually get a thread locked for not having a decent RP? my other one Metal Sonic said was really good.

p.s. I just added rules.

[Dr Robotnik]

I personally thought the first one woulda been better if it wasnt infested with two noobs >.>

[pikachugirl2]

yeah. probably have a 99% chance of getting kicked out with the cussing they put in there.

[Lord Celebi]

Originally Posted by pikachugirl2

BTW, can you actually get a thread locked for not having a decent RP? my other one Metal Sonic said was really good.

Yes, actually, it can.

*Locked*