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Old 09-17-2008, 12:59 PM
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Old 09-17-2008, 07:30 PM
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Default Re: the adventures of pokemon

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I don't get it. Why would you post a thread if you're just going to give us some unreadable three-line block of text?
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Old 09-18-2008, 04:39 AM
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I don't get it. Why would you post a thread if you're just going to give us some unreadable three-line block of text?
Er.... what he said.
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Old 09-22-2008, 07:45 PM
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Default Re: the adventures of pokemon

I don't understand this, so maybe trying to translate it to English will help?

Before I let anyone read my story I must explain a little bit about it.

Basically, the adventure is about what the anime characters do when they're not in the anime. And there are Pokemon characters that have only appeared in the Japanese episodes or the manga, or maybe a made-up. Oh yeah, one more thing. All the characters live in a place called Pokemon Green Village. There's a special statue there - it's supposed to be Ash's ancestor. The Gligar and Gliscor.

So, Ash descends from a Gliscor?
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Old 09-22-2008, 07:53 PM
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So yeah, is it what the above said?
It's a little confusing when you don't use good grammar.
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Old 09-23-2008, 05:15 PM
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I don't understand this, so maybe trying to translate it to English will help?

Before I let anyone read my story I must explain a little bit about it.

Basically, the adventure is about what the anime characters do when they're not in the anime. And there are Pokemon characters that have only appeared in the Japanese episodes or the manga, or maybe a made-up. Oh yeah, one more thing. All the characters live in a place called Pokemon Green Village. There's a special statue there - it's supposed to be Ash's ancestor. The Gligar and Gliscor.

So, Ash descends from a Gliscor?
My older sis has a long way to go!

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So yeah, is it what the above said?
It's a little confusing when you don't use good grammar.
she should have more detail

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So yeah, is it what the above said?
It's a little confusing when you don't use good grammar.
u got that right

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I don't understand this, so maybe trying to translate it to English will help?

Before I let anyone read my story I must explain a little bit about it.

Basically, the adventure is about what the anime characters do when they're not in the anime. And there are Pokemon characters that have only appeared in the Japanese episodes or the manga, or maybe a made-up. Oh yeah, one more thing. All the characters live in a place called Pokemon Green Village. There's a special statue there - it's supposed to be Ash's ancestor. The Gligar and Gliscor.

So, Ash descends from a Gliscor?
U got that right! i have no idea what she means!

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So yeah, is it what the above said?
It's a little confusing when you don't use good grammar.
more topic.she needs to stay on topic.one topic per paragrapgh

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So yeah, is it what the above said?
It's a little confusing when you don't use good grammar.
how confusing does it get??

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So yeah, is it what the above said?
It's a little confusing when you don't use good grammar.
needs more paragraphs

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So yeah, is it what the above said?
It's a little confusing when you don't use good grammar.
needs more words

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I don't understand this, so maybe trying to translate it to English will help?

Before I let anyone read my story I must explain a little bit about it.

Basically, the adventure is about what the anime characters do when they're not in the anime. And there are Pokemon characters that have only appeared in the Japanese episodes or the manga, or maybe a made-up. Oh yeah, one more thing. All the characters live in a place called Pokemon Green Village. There's a special statue there - it's supposed to be Ash's ancestor. The Gligar and Gliscor.

So, Ash descends from a Gliscor?
it needs more things to it

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Old 09-23-2008, 05:48 PM
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My alternate account has a long way to go!
I edited your post to make it just right.

ROGUE ARCEUS, do us all a favour and stop posting multiple times in a row. Nobody wants to read through a thread filled with brainless comments from someone who doesn't know what they're talking about.

Regarding the story; try tying it out on Microsoft Word in order to fix your spelling mistakes. The Spellchecker application wasn't installed into the program to be ignored, you know. Make your story longer. A paragraph doesn't quite make the cut. You might want help before publishing your story and if that's the case, try and find a beta reader. He or she will help you with your mistakes and try to improve your story with you.

Actually, now that I think about it, I'm free to beta if you want me to. Just drop me a private message or whatever.
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Old 09-23-2008, 06:52 PM
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Default Re: the adventures of pokemon

I would be willing to beta for you too, as long as you don't type three sentences and expect me to turn it into a full four or five page chapter.

Also, RA. Do NOT, I repeat DO NOT, post that many times in a row. Edit your post if you want to, but don't post that many times in a row.
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Old 09-29-2008, 11:04 AM
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Old 09-29-2008, 11:42 AM
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Default Re: When to different worlds collide!

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summary this story is about what its like to be in someone elses shoes!
It's not really much of a summary.
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