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Old 09-07-2008, 10:56 AM
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Default Only an Obsession

Okay, so I wrote this song a couple of nights ago, tell me what you think.



You say you haven't changed, but look at you now
You're not the same anymore
No longer the one I used to know

You say there's nothing wrong
But I can see right through those lies
The ones you're thinking of.

Tell me why
Why do you always cry?
It's only an obsession
It's only your obsession
Can't tell us why
Why we dream to fly?
It's only an obsession
It's only your obsession.

Can't say you're always right, but just look what you've done
Tryin' to defy your destiny
No longer the fate you're used to now.

I say there's something wrong
And you can't see right through to the light
The one you're dreamin' of.

Tell me why
Why do you always cry?
It's only an obsession
It's only your obsession
Can't tell us why
Why we fear to die?
It's only an obsession
It's only your obsession.

Dancing, dancing
Over the edge
and over the limits
Obsession, progression
Can't find where to start
Can't decide when to stop.

Tell me why
Why do you always cry?
It's only an obsession
It's only your obsession
Can't tell us why
Why we dream to fly?
It's only an obsession
It's only your obsession.

Can't tell us why
Why we fear to die?
It's only an obsession
It's only your obsession.

Open your eyes
Your heart will tell you why
It's only an obsession
It's only your obsession.
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Old 09-07-2008, 07:09 PM
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Default Re: Only an Obsession

Wow, I liked that a lot, it flowed wonderfully and I loved the line
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Can't tell us why
Why we dream to fly?
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