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Old 07-12-2008, 06:31 PM
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Hello,I'm new here and I started making a comic. I'm new to this but I'm kinda starting to get it...Anyways,here it is! (Oh yeah,the name sucks)

GIRATINAS DARKNESS
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PART 1 - GIRATINA APPEARS!

The 1st page was kinda practise
http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/9982/sarjis1sm5.jpg - PAGE 1 - The beginning of the adventure!

Page 2 is already made too
http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/6489/sarjis2og7.jpg - PAGE 2 - The Starter Pokémons!

Page 3 is made too
http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/4350/sarjis3dh3.jpg - PAGE 3 - First Battle!

Okay,more coming soon. Also,you may have noticed that this hasn't got a good plot but I think that you'll get it when you'll see the part 2.
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Want to be in my comic?
-GUEST STAR FORM-
Name: -Enter your characters name-
Look: -OPTIONAL,but if you want to be an Ruin Maniac or something,name a sprite! (ONLY D/P sprites!)
Pokémons: -What pokemon you want to have in the comic (No legendaries please)
Personality: -Is your character brave,shy etc.-
Others: -Other info -
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Credits to rips:
Cheese: the !-mark (one above their heads)
PokeAnayze & celebi23: Giratina & Starly (OverWorld)
Gamedude: Heros house & Rowans lab

BTW,banner coming soon!

Last edited by SuperHyperMario; 07-13-2008 at 08:33 AM. Reason: Corrected typing error
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Old 07-12-2008, 06:34 PM
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Default Re: Giratinas darkness [COMIC]

1. Nowadays, most people like it when you save as PNG. Or else people like me will say SAVE AS PNG!!!

2. Most people don't go to Sinnoh in their comics because there's not any sprites for routes, etc.

3. Since this is Sinnoh, Rowans lab is a route away, you should at least show him walking there or say, After walking route 1.

4. You mixed a FRLG Map in Sinnoh with a Sinnoh Overworld

Rating: C

Try improving 1-4.

And take a look at The Comic Tutorial.
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Old 07-12-2008, 06:41 PM
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Default Re: Giratinas darkness [COMIC]

The only thing I spotted (that GG hasn't already said) is that the plural of pokemon is pokemon. It's kind of annoying to see someone talking about pokemons for the umpteenth time. POSITIVE: Yay, a comic about a legendary that isn't darkrai! Destiny of Darkrai is good, but they're overpopulated.
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Old 07-12-2008, 06:44 PM
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Default Re: Giratinas darkness [COMIC]

PRetty good, but try improving the things GG noted on.
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Eh, at least he used é, Camerupt, but, good eye.

EDIT: Also, That wasn't a very good battle, since you showed nothing about the battle except him fainting and "A few moments later"
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Old 07-13-2008, 12:17 AM
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Default Re: Giratinas darkness [COMIC]

Well, I think it is an interesting concept. With a little work and a good plot, I think it could pull through as a great comic!
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Old 07-13-2008, 07:13 AM
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1. Nowadays, most people like it when you save as PNG. Or else people like me will say SAVE AS PNG!!!

2. Most people don't go to Sinnoh in their comics because there's not any sprites for routes, etc.

3. Since this is Sinnoh, Rowans lab is a route away, you should at least show him walking there or say, After walking route 1.

4. You mixed a FRLG Map in Sinnoh with a Sinnoh Overworld

Rating: C

Try improving 1-4.

And take a look at The Comic Tutorial.
Okay,part 4 will be as PNG and I will at least try to improve "1-4" And BTW,the FRLG rt.1 instead of DP rt.202 is part of the plot
I need a sidekick for part 4! If someone wants that his/her character is the sidekick,please fill the guest star form,and write "Sidekick" on the "Others"

(God,it's slow to write on Wii)
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Old 07-13-2008, 07:18 AM
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Default Re: Giratinas darkness [COMIC]

I will guest star! :D *Gets form*

Name: Zarro
Look: Sprites:
Pokémon: Female Chingling called Belle. It is in the sheet above.
Personality: Lively, happy and bouncy. Not very smart, though.
Others: She has just started her journey, like your character (forgot his name) and received the Chingling as a present.
That's her.
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Old 07-13-2008, 09:50 AM
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I will guest star! :D *Gets form*

Name: Zarro
Look: Sprites:
Pokémon: Female Chingling called Belle. It is in the sheet above.
Personality: Lively, happy and bouncy. Not very smart, though.
Others: She has just started her journey, like your character (forgot his name) and received the Chingling as a present.
That's her.
Do you want that she is the sidekick?
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Old 07-13-2008, 09:54 AM
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Default Re: Giratinas darkness [COMIC]

That she? xD

Yes please. I forgot to put that! x3
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