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Old 07-10-2008, 05:17 PM
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Default Friends Forever[COMIC] #3rd Episode


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These are funny stories of two best friends Milly(Milltank) and Dawdler(Absol) who have Rescue Team called "Got em all!'(Pokemon Stickers from Piplup Pop ) At their missions they are haveing funny histories.

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Milly-An extreamly happy from life, pokemon, she is always busy with something, she loves mission, work and helping people.
Dawdler-Emo Pokemon. He is unhappy about all things around him. The best option for him is to sleep or just don't do anything. He hates doing missions, but he is doing them for his best(the only one) friend milly.

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#1 "Mystery Pokemon"
#2 Team Members
#3Come to me Sweety Yummie Pie!
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*Milktank Overwold sprite for mystery dungeon
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Old 07-10-2008, 05:20 PM
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Default Re: Friends Forever[COMIC]

You dont even have an issue up, this thread is entire spam until you post an issue.
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Old 07-10-2008, 05:22 PM
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Default Re: Friends Forever[COMIC]

I have a nearly compleated first episode but i need for it milktank overworld sprite...
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Old 07-10-2008, 05:29 PM
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Default Re: Friends Forever[COMIC]

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You dont even have an issue up, this thread is entire spam until you post an issue.
Agreed, before you make a thread you MUST be sure yu have a first issue and make sure your going through with it.
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Old 07-10-2008, 05:43 PM
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Default Re: Friends Forever[COMIC]

how could you have an almost complete comic if you dont even have sprites of the MAIN CHARACTER?
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Old 07-10-2008, 08:01 PM
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Ok first part is finished ^^ Please comment and give advice you can also propose guests now without using forms(isn't it cool :D?)
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Old 07-10-2008, 08:11 PM
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errrrm.....its not the best intro comic, you get points off for putting the pokemon completely out of their natural character. You also bitmixed d/p graphics with md graphics, which is terrible. 2-d and 3-d do NOT mix. I can see a plot developing, and its good that its not a traditional mystery dungeon comic. I can see that youre working hard, but you may need to put that extra bit of effort in to make it a truly good comic
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Old 07-10-2008, 08:16 PM
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I think its a good concept and all, but I found two problems.

1. The Grammer is terrible. Number one rule is too use good gammer. I pretty sure a reportr wouldn't be talk like this, but maybe just me.

2. Why would Absol say lol if he's Emo? That part didn't make much sense to me.
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Old 07-10-2008, 08:19 PM
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errrrm.....its not the best intro comic, you get points off for putting the pokemon completely out of their natural character. You also bitmixed d/p graphics with md graphics, which is terrible. 2-d and 3-d do NOT mix. I can see a plot developing, and its good that its not a traditional mystery dungeon comic. I can see that youre working hard, but you may need to put that extra bit of effort in to make it a truly good comic
Thanks for that words.
And i have one thing to say about mixing. Without it this first episode will be a disaster and for me it looks good. But everybody have his own mind. I'll mix it sometimes because it appeals nice for me :) We'll see what others will tell about it ^^]

Guys im learning English 4th year ( i come from Poland) im still learning gramar.
I don't know much about things that EMO says ^^
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I think its a good concept and all, but I found two problems.

1. The Grammer is terrible. Number one rule is too use good gammer. I pretty sure a reportr wouldn't be talk like this, but maybe just me.

2. Why would Absol say lol if he's Emo? That part didn't make much sense to me.


hopefully the bolded was intentional, otherwise you made an extremlely ironic post :O

and yes, reading your comic, honestly sounds like a poor "engrish" translation
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Old 07-10-2008, 08:23 PM
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hopefully the bolded was intentional, otherwise you made an extremlely ironic post :O

and yes, reading your comic, honestly sounds like a poor "engrish" translation
Oopps... Silly me. I'm such an idiot >_<



JK, it was intended.
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Old 07-10-2008, 10:10 PM
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Keep it up, and this will become a great comic!
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I like how you use different sprites for different scenes. It matches really well. <3
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Me too! I think that is an effective....effect! xD

I reckon the grammar is a bit weird, such as you wrote "Lake Drake" in on of the panels, and then "lake drake" in another panel, with no capitals. You are getting a bit confused with things like this it seems.

Remember to proof-read your comic before posting it on the internet, to make sure you don't get beaten up with people telling you to fix your grammar. ;3

Other than that, I think it has a potential, but it did get confusing for me to read.
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Old 07-11-2008, 05:46 AM
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Me too! I think that is an effective....effect! xD

I reckon the grammar is a bit weird, such as you wrote "Lake Drake" in on of the panels, and then "lake drake" in another panel, with no capitals. You are getting a bit confused with things like this it seems.

Remember to proof-read your comic before posting it on the internet, to make sure you don't get beaten up with people telling you to fix your grammar. ;3

Other than that, I think it has a potential, but it did get confusing for me to read.
As i said in later posts im learning English 4th year and im trying my best with gramar ^^ Next time ill try to use easier grammar not tomake so many mistakes.

Thanks for good opinions they are motivating ^^

#2nd part comming soon.
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