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Old 07-08-2008, 03:25 AM
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Default [Comic]Pokemon Elite Adventure

Season One

Episode One

Episode 2!WARNING!RATED PG, CONTAINS SEXUAL REFFRANCE!


Criticize and recommend a name!

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Brendan, a 12 year old boy is saddened by his rival stealing his Pokemon, as a child, but his older brother, Tommy was able to defeat him in battle.Two years later, Tommy has won 4 different championships and has beaten a total of 40 gyms.
(No more until the plot unfolds)

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Old 07-08-2008, 03:29 AM
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Character Bios!


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Old 07-08-2008, 07:22 AM
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xD Good start. f you are trying to have proper grammar, it is going alright, but I have spotted at least two errors. (Minor)
I would like to guest star, but I can't at the moment. I am bound to soon though. ^_^

I don't have a name for you comic, but do you have a proper plot? If so, make the title related to the plot.
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Old 07-08-2008, 12:30 PM
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SO many new comics! Also, you should change the title when the plot is reavealed. Unless this is one of those random comics..

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Old 07-08-2008, 01:17 PM
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i don't get it.....its kinda hard to follow for me, maybe its just the fact that i'm still half alseep.

try a little harder on the graphical aspects, too.
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Old 07-08-2008, 01:22 PM
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There's no reason to not get gimp!
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Old 07-08-2008, 07:31 PM
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GG:I can't get Gimp, this is my mom's omp.And I was gonna name it Pokemon Adventures, but that name is already taken

Graceful_Suicune:Yea, I'm not that good of a speller...heheAnd how do you edit the name of the thread?

and last but not least,

Wario:I've made sweet drops before, but I kinda forgot how to do it soo I put this lame blue blob there.

Episode 2 coming soon!~~!
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Old 07-08-2008, 09:23 PM
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Default Re: [Comic]Pokemon Peddning Name!

These are the kind of first-issues that get my attention :3
Anyway, try to refrain from using acronyms in you comic aka "OMFG".
And yeah, try to proof read it before you publish it to the internet, just for small typos.
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These are the kind of first-issues that get my attention :3
Anyway, try to refrain from using acronyms in you comic aka "OMFG".
And yeah, try to proof read it before you publish it to the internet, just for small typos.
Yes I'll keep that in mind, but I put 'OFMG!!!' there for humor, thus Brendan actually said OMFG, not Oh my, F*****g god.

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I'm not that good of a speller...
Enter www.orangoo.com =]


btw nice comic k

PS. Do you mean Pending name? xD might wanna edit that

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Old 07-09-2008, 10:21 PM
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Enter www.orangoo.com =]


btw nice comic k

PS. Do you mean Pending name? xD might wanna edit that
How do you edit thread names?I sound like a total noobXD



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How do you edit thread names?I sound like a total noobXD



Episode 2!WARNING!RATED PG, CONTAINS SEXUAL REFFRANCE!
On the post press advanced and it'll give you the option =)

BTW, that's hardly a sexual reference xD
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How do you edit thread names?I sound like a total noobXD



Episode 2!WARNING!RATED PG, CONTAINS SEXUAL REFFRANCE!
double click next to it in the thread listings on Sprite art, or advanced edit in the first post of the thread, also, do you read Pokemon-x? >____>
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double click next to it in the thread listings on Sprite art, or advanced edit in the first post of the thread, also, do you read Pokemon-x? >____>
Kay, thanks, yeah I read Pokemon X >_<It was a lame joke anyway...
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Old 07-10-2008, 01:12 AM
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oh come on, the title alone makes me think of a recon-rip off....i guess youre improving though, but heres some advice: theres no need for sexual metaphors like that, its a sign of a weak comic that cant attract viewers by means of old fashioned, family friendly humor. Its not to say that an occasional "poke-ball joke" is out of the question, just dont use jokes like the one you did.
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