Originally Posted by Tyrell321
Good but you still have to make it long than that.
I usually make the first chapter short,I don't know why.I am bad at fanfics.
I hate waiting,on to chapter 2!By the way,this is also going to be a Roxas X Namine fanfic.
Chapter 2:Kairi's secret
When we left off,Sora told Riku that he loved Kairi.Then the bus parked,and everyone got off.
"Well,to tell you the truth Sora,I like Selphie."Riku confessed to Sora.
"Are you talking about the one with anger management problems,Riku?responded Roxas.
"Alright,so we like one of those three girls.But face it,Kairi is hot.Alright,here is the thing.Tonight, we tell our crushes that we love them.Deal?"asked Sora.
Roxas and Riku looked at each other,nodded their heads,and said:
They spit on their hands,and shook each others hands.
Sora walked up to Kairi.
"Hey Kairi,can I see your schedule?"
Kairi nodded,and handed Sora her schedule.Kairi looked over at Namine,who waved at Roxas,and Roxas doing his famous "cool boy" impression.Namine laughed and blushed,and walked over to Kairi.
"Looks like we have the same classes,Kairi."
"We better hurry to class,we are gonna be late!"
Sora met up with Roxas and Riku,and they went off to class.
When they walked in the class,Sora,Riku,and Roxas sat in the middle of the room.Sora was sitting next to Riku,and Roxas was sitting behind them,forming a somewhat triangle.Kairi,Selphie,and Namine sat the same way.Selphie looked over at Riku,and Riku winked at her,making her blush.
I was really happy.Sora was in my classes,along with Namine,Selphie,Riku,and Roxas.I had a real big crush on Sora,but I was afraid to tell anyone.I was afraid,afraid Sora might not like me.I wanted to tell someone.Finally,I took out a piece of paper,ripped a small piece of paper from it,and wrote:
Have you ever had a crush on someone,and was too afraid to tell someone?Well,that is how I feel right now.I need to tell you something,please don't tell anyone.
I passed the note to Namine,and Namine wrote back,and passes the note back to me.
Kairi,You can trust me.Tell me,who is this big crush of yours?
Kairi was nervous,and finally,she wrote:
Namine,I have a really big crush on Sora.But I don't know how to tell him...
Kairi passed the note to me,and it read:
Namine,I have a really big crush on Sora.But I don't know how to tell him.
Namine nodded,and wrote back.
You are not the only one,Kairi.The truth?I know I can trust you,instead of Selphie,who is an A1 gossip.All we have to do is make sure Selphie does not know.
Kairi,I have a crush on Roxas.
I passed the note to Kairi,and when she finished reading it,the bell rang.
Kairi walked up to Sora,and said:
"Yeah.Kairi,I heard there is a play going on right now."
"Oh,right.I heard.Isn't it that one when Prince Jeremy tries to save the Princess Jennifer's life,but ends up dying doing so?"
"Yeah,that one.When are the tryouts?"
"I think they start today,after lunch!"
I walked up to Namine,and said:
"Hey,Namine.I heard that the play tryouts are today".
Namine blushed,and looked at me funny.
"So,I'll uh......see you at lunch."
I walked away,and banged my head on my locker.
"STUPID STUPID STUPID!Why didn't you ask Namine out while you still had the chance!"
Namine stopped in her tracks,and walked over to me,blushing.
"You....wanted to go out with me?"
I blushed.She was blushing too.
"Alright,I'll admit it.I want to go out with you...."
I felt Namine hug me,and she asked me:
"Can I speak to you...in private?"
Namine and I walked to the darkest corner in the school,and we sat down.
Roxas interrupted me,by placing his lips over mine.He kissed me!My love actually kissed me!He pulled away,blushing.
"I love you,Roxas...."