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Old 06-10-2008, 04:36 AM
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Default Sora and Kairi:Love will find a way(a Kingdom Hearts fanfiction)

I suck at fanfics,so it is going to be pretty bad.

Chapter 1:Love at first sight
Sora woke up,and got up out of bed.Today was the first day of school.High school.He got up,and walked towards the bathroom.The spiky haired boy brushed his teeth,took a shower,ETC.He walked out of the bathroom,and got dressed.He slipped on a red shirt,a white jacket,large,baggy red shorts,and some big yellow shoes.He walked outside.He noticed his firends,Riku,a tall,gray haired boy,and a boy about his height,Roxas,a blonde,spike haired boy,very similiar to Sora's,only Roxas' hair was pointed up.
"Well,hurry up,Sora.We are going to miss the bus.",cried Roxas.
Sora was too tired to respond.They climbed aboard the bus,and sat down,next to three familiar girls.A red head,known as Kairi,a brunette haired girl,known as Selphie,and a blonde girl,known as Namine.
"Hey,check out that blonde girl,next to Kairi!"Roxas said to Riku and Sora.
"Yeah,sure" replied Sora.Sora was busy daydreaming.He had been friends with Kairi,Riku,and Roxas for a while now.But secretley,he had a big crush on Kairi.But only he knew.He finally thought it was time to tell someone his secret.Someone he trusts.He leaned towards Riku,and whispered in his ear:
"Riku,listen....I have to tell you a secret."
Riku gave Sora a greedy look,and said:
"Tell me anything.I won't tell no one."
Sora sucked in his gut,and whispered
"I have a very big crush on Kairi,but I don't know how to tell her."
"YOU WHAT!?"
Riku yelled it out so loud,everyone in the bus stared at him,including the girls next to them.Kairi giigled,and waved at Sora.
"Hey,Sora! Long time no see."
"Yeah,grest to see you too,Kairi".
Sora blushed.He was in love with Kairi,and he wanted her very badly.The bus finally parked,and everyone hopped off the bus.
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I hope you enjoyed my first Kingdom Hearts fanfic.It is pretty bad,but I wanted to give it a shot...
EDIT:Sorry about that,I needed to fix some typos.
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Old 06-10-2008, 02:38 PM
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Good but you still have to make it long than that.
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Old 06-10-2008, 04:03 PM
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Good but you still have to make it long than that.
I usually make the first chapter short,I don't know why.I am bad at fanfics.
I hate waiting,on to chapter 2!By the way,this is also going to be a Roxas X Namine fanfic.

Chapter 2:Kairi's secret
When we left off,Sora told Riku that he loved Kairi.Then the bus parked,and everyone got off.
"Well,to tell you the truth Sora,I like Selphie."Riku confessed to Sora.
"Are you talking about the one with anger management problems,Riku?responded Roxas.
"Alright,so we like one of those three girls.But face it,Kairi is hot.Alright,here is the thing.Tonight, we tell our crushes that we love them.Deal?"asked Sora.
Roxas and Riku looked at each other,nodded their heads,and said:
"Deal!"
They spit on their hands,and shook each others hands.
Sora walked up to Kairi.
"Hey Kairi,can I see your schedule?"
Kairi nodded,and handed Sora her schedule.Kairi looked over at Namine,who waved at Roxas,and Roxas doing his famous "cool boy" impression.Namine laughed and blushed,and walked over to Kairi.
"Looks like we have the same classes,Kairi."
"We better hurry to class,we are gonna be late!"
Sora met up with Roxas and Riku,and they went off to class.

When they walked in the class,Sora,Riku,and Roxas sat in the middle of the room.Sora was sitting next to Riku,and Roxas was sitting behind them,forming a somewhat triangle.Kairi,Selphie,and Namine sat the same way.Selphie looked over at Riku,and Riku winked at her,making her blush.
Kairi's P.O.V
I was really happy.Sora was in my classes,along with Namine,Selphie,Riku,and Roxas.I had a real big crush on Sora,but I was afraid to tell anyone.I was afraid,afraid Sora might not like me.I wanted to tell someone.Finally,I took out a piece of paper,ripped a small piece of paper from it,and wrote:
Dear,Namine
Have you ever had a crush on someone,and was too afraid to tell someone?Well,that is how I feel right now.I need to tell you something,please don't tell anyone.

I passed the note to Namine,and Namine wrote back,and passes the note back to me.
She replied:
Kairi,You can trust me.Tell me,who is this big crush of yours?
Kairi was nervous,and finally,she wrote:
Namine,I have a really big crush on Sora.But I don't know how to tell him...
Namine's P.O.V
Kairi passed the note to me,and it read:
Namine,I have a really big crush on Sora.But I don't know how to tell him.
Namine nodded,and wrote back.
You are not the only one,Kairi.The truth?I know I can trust you,instead of Selphie,who is an A1 gossip.All we have to do is make sure Selphie does not know.
Kairi,I have a crush on Roxas.

I passed the note to Kairi,and when she finished reading it,the bell rang.
Norml P.O.V
Kairi walked up to Sora,and said:
"Nice day,right?"
"Yeah.Kairi,I heard there is a play going on right now."
"Oh,right.I heard.Isn't it that one when Prince Jeremy tries to save the Princess Jennifer's life,but ends up dying doing so?"
"Yeah,that one.When are the tryouts?"
"I think they start today,after lunch!"
Roxas P.O.V
I walked up to Namine,and said:
"Hey,Namine.I heard that the play tryouts are today".
Namine blushed,and looked at me funny.
"So,I'll uh......see you at lunch."
I walked away,and banged my head on my locker.
"STUPID STUPID STUPID!Why didn't you ask Namine out while you still had the chance!"
Namine stopped in her tracks,and walked over to me,blushing.
"You....wanted to go out with me?"
I blushed.She was blushing too.
"Alright,I'll admit it.I want to go out with you...."
I felt Namine hug me,and she asked me:
"Can I speak to you...in private?"
Namine and I walked to the darkest corner in the school,and we sat down.
Namine's P.O.V
"Roxas...I...I l-l-o..."
Roxas interrupted me,by placing his lips over mine.He kissed me!My love actually kissed me!He pulled away,blushing.
"I love you,Roxas...."
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Old 06-17-2008, 08:08 PM
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You can double post when making your chapters in the fan fiction section so hurry and make your next chapter. But if you want more people to look at it you need to make it like 4 pages like in microsoft. Your doing good just need to make it longer.
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Old 06-19-2008, 01:30 PM
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I don't like double posting. I wait until I get good comments, then I post a new Chapter.
Alright, time for chapter 3!

Chapter 3:The (daring) kiss
Sora and Kairi walked near each other, and headed to lunch. They looked at each other, blushed, and looked away. When they arrived at lunch, they sat at the table with Roxas and Namine. Roxas and Namine were holding hands, which gave Sora and Kairi a hint that they were a couple.
Namine's P.O.V
"So, who wants to play truth or dare?"
Sora, Kairi, and Roxas looked at me as if to say
"Sure....."
I looked over at Kairi.
"Alright, Kairi, you go first. Truth or Dare?"
Kairi's P.O.C
I was sick in the stomach. If I choose truth, I will tell a lie, and I will have to do a dare. If I choose dare, Namine will probably make me do something gross. I took a deep breath, and replied:
"Truth"
Namine gave me big eyes, and began thinking. She they gave me a sly smile.
"Alright, Kairi. Is it true that you like Sora?"
I got nervous. I had to steer my way into the truth, but if I say yes, Sora will know my secret. I knew this would come to bite me, but I said:
"No....."
Namine gave me a sly smile, because she knew that was a lie.
"That is a lie, Kairi. now for your punnishment..."
She thought for a moment, then said:
"Alright, for your punishment, you have to kiss Sora, on the lips!!!!!!!"
Sora's P.O.V
I gave Namine a surprised look. Kairi, the love of my life.... is gonna KISS me!?
I blushed at that thought. But I didn't think she was going to do it. But I was dumdfounded when I felt her put her hands on my chest, her lips locked with mine. She kissed me. But I knew it was not a real kiss, just a dare, which made me upset. After about 20 seconds, she pulled away, blushing. The class bell rang, and she walked to class, holding hands.

Sorry is is short. I didn't have very much time, so cut me some slack...
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i love kingdom heart!!and i read ur other one"Abusive Love,it was so touching!!
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i love kingdom heart!!and i read ur other one"Abusive Love,it was so touching!!
Thanks, but please don't revive a thread that hasn't had a post in over a month....
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