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Old 05-02-2008, 07:57 PM
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Default A collection of Random Pokemon stories...

Hello. This thread is... well, read the title. If you want to post a story here, please PM me. Anyone can. Please, use proper grammar, and don't swear. Use these --> ******

Story 1 ~ The Fall of Swellow

Swellow was circling the Wurmple below it. He always knew which Wurmple had the most flavour. He swooped and caught the Wurmple in his sharp talons. While he was flying back to his nest, he heard someone shouting, a human, probably a boy.
"Oi! Swellow! That's my Wurmple!" the boy shouted. Swellow looked at him, and thought 'Why must humans always be so predictable?' So, without further ado, he dropped the Wurmple. The Wurmple landed in the boy's arms.
"What? A scratch? Grr... SWELLOW, YOU'LL PAY FOR THIS!!!" the boy bellowed. Swellow, with no food left for his 3 children, turned and started to fly away.
BANG!!! Swellow suddenly felt a sharp pain in his back. The pain was so overwhelming that he fell to the floor. The boy stood over him, the gun in his hand pointing at Swellow.
Swellow's life flashed before his eyes. What would become of his body? What would happen to the boy? And what would happen to his children?...


BANG! Everything went dark, and Swellow lay still on the floor.
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That was unpredictable. Who gives their child a gun?!
Poor Swellow...
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Default Re: A collection of Random Pokemon stories...

How can a child get gun?

It's not that long and not much detail..
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Old 05-02-2008, 10:29 PM
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Default Re: A collection of Random Pokemon stories...

I feel bad for Swellow and it seems like the kid is violent and a spoiled brat. It should be longer though. How does a kid get a gun?
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Default Re: A collection of Random Pokemon stories...

Maybe he had a net gun...?

Very short. Post more in the first chapter/prologue. And you should use pronouns. At the beginning, I heard 'picked up Wurmple' and 'grasped Wurple with its talons' and 'Wurmple fell into the boy's arms' and such. But it could turn out interesting.
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It's a random story. Like this is random -->

The boy had a gun because I wasn't thinking at the time. Maybe his dad is in the Army? I dunno.
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Here's my random short story.

Once Upon A Time,
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Default Re: A collection of Random Pokemon stories...

It's true! By the way, Wurmple actually do taste nice if you put ketchup on them ^.^
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... Thats all I can say ..., dot dot dot...

WHERE DID HE GET THE GUN?!.... BB gun maybe?
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I'm sorry, but the gun just doesn't make sense, since there's not much detail about how a 'boy' acquired a gun. I think it should have been a cop (like eating pokemon is illegal or something), but it's your story, an you're probably fond of it. But the structure was okay, from my point of view.
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I'm sorry, but the gun just doesn't make sense, since there's not much detail about how a 'boy' acquired a gun. I think it should have been a cop (like eating pokemon is illegal or something), but it's your story, an you're probably fond of it. But the structure was okay, from my point of view.
I think I can defend this for you =3!

Have you ever been bought a BB gun?No, then you don't know.And what do you think pokemon eat?Berrys all they're lives?A pokemon's Pokedex entre is:
Its uses it's sharp tallons to catch fish Pokemon like MAGIKARP.

Or something.
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Default Re: A collection of Random Pokemon stories...

Aha. Never said it was like that; I had said what I would have done in my story. On one of the guides by..HoennGirl (or something like that), she said you on't always have to copy the iea of someone else's. For example; it was the makers of pokemon that ha the idea of trainers. You could be copying that idea (nothing wrong with that, I love those stories) but you don't have to have that same iea. It could be pokemon with a whole new genre.. So concludes.

PS: Did you say I've never bought a BB gun? Well, you're wrong. Don't pretend you know me ^-^
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Aha. Never said it was like that; I had said what I would have done in my story. On one of the guides by..HoennGirl (or something like that), she said you on't always have to copy the iea of someone else's. For example; it was the makers of pokemon that ha the idea of trainers. You could be copying that idea (nothing wrong with that, I love those stories) but you don't have to have that same iea. It could be pokemon with a whole new genre.. So concludes.

PS: Did you say I've never bought a BB gun? Well, you're wrong. Don't pretend you know me ^-^
Eh? You're saying words me no likey >.<

You bought a BB gun? *backs away slowly*

I need some ideas for new stories. Just post stories. Any Pokemon-related stories. My brain is dead
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May I post a Poem?
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Yes. Poem. Post. 4WordRuleStreched.
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