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Old 04-03-2008, 02:31 AM
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Hey Everyone!

Most of you who hang around in the Pokemon Fan-fic section will know that I have a Mystery Dungeon story titled Team Stormriders.

It seems to be growing more popular, but what it lacks is feedback. That's why I'm asking you, as official storywriters, reviewers, or just onlookers of PE2K, to tell me what you think.

This means reviews, comments, suggestions, errors, questions, chatting, or anything you think the story needs.
Evey input will be put into careful consideration to make my story better for all. So please, if you have the time, take a look and help me out. ^_^

Team Stormriders Summary:
For those of you who don't know, my story is set in an entirely different world populated only by Pokemon.

The lead character was a girl, now transformed into a Pikachu named Zanna. Her trusty Pokemon partner is Jarre, a Torchic with a troubled past.

Zanna doesn't know why she was brought to the world or how she got there. But she does know that she used to be a human.

Apparently at the same time, a terrible pure evil Pokemon called Deoxys is terrorising the world.
While the rest of the Pokemon world rallies armies and rescuers to fight him off,
Zanna embarks on a journey to discover who she really is and what will happen if Deoxys isn't stopped.

With the story full of evil, good, war, romance and secrets, you can bet this will be the journey of a lifetime.

After all, destiny is only the beginning...

Below is a link to check out my story. Feel free to comment and review as you wish.
http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/foru...ad.php?t=35760
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Old 07-19-2008, 04:14 AM
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Default Re: Team StormRiders ~ Read, review, chat and questions! Ask here!

While I REALLY hate to double post (and will probably delete this later), would anyone like to ask a question?

I'm open to ideas, too. ^_^
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Old 07-19-2008, 04:24 AM
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Idea stealer

Just kidding! I think in the story that Zanna and Rye should get together. I mean, they would make such an adorable couple, and many fans want to see it happen.

I would also like to see more Scythe and Raze action...Those two are funny together!
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Old 07-19-2008, 05:30 AM
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Idea stealer

Just kidding! I think in the story that Zanna and Rye should get together. I mean, they would make such an adorable couple, and many fans want to see it happen.

I would also like to see more Scythe and Raze action...Those two are funny together!
Am not! If you noticed the date of the post, it was up WAY before yours! :P
Well, I'll take your ideas into consideration.

As for the Raze and Scythe part, chapter 19 will be full of them!
You'll see.


Rye: Again...me...with her?

Zanna: Oh, come on! GROW UP PEOPLE!

Oh shut it.
You guys don't get to decide anyway. xD
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Old 07-24-2008, 03:38 AM
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Is Rye gonna be alright? I was actually kinda worried with the way you ended that last chapter. ^^'
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LR wouldn't kill of Rye yet. She still has to have a romance between Rye and Zanna written.
Oh yeah, I went there Zanna.

You know I have a feeling theres going to be a Archie-prize-Betty vs. Veronica here...if you've ever read Archie comics then you'll get this.
Imagine Zanna is Archie(DON'T HURT ME!) and Rye and Jarre are Betty and Veronica(DON'T HURT ME EITHER!). Zanna will probably like both of them at some point, and they'll fight for her.
That may sound sexist, but I'm not trying to.
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Old 07-24-2008, 07:53 AM
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Is Rye gonna be alright? I was actually kinda worried with the way you ended that last chapter. ^^'
Rye...is in a bit of a rough spot at the moment.
I'll leave it to the next few chapters to decide that.

And Scalec, cut it out already.
That is one WEIRD idea...


Zanna: PLEASE don't tell me I'm a guy....

Jarre: *snorts* Fight over Zanna? I like her...but she's my best friend.
That would be slightly awkward.


If Rye could talk, I'm sure he would.
Apparently he can't though. Being in his unconscious state and all. :/
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Old 07-26-2008, 08:15 AM
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Okay, where did Jarre go running off to?

I wanna know what that Torchic is doing! =>.<=
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shock: I like chocolate milk...*looks at Zanna with a face*

Whirlwing: Shock is in a weird state that he is cheese of fosters home for imaginary friends. Cheese is her fave character. i hope rye will be ok and will fully recover.... I....like....cerial...

Pearl: Is it just me or am i the only character who james1111 made up that is not acting weird today??

no, Pearl i have just made them both into mindless zombies and i might do it to you MWAHAHAHAHA.... just kidding. like Whirlwing said before she went weird that i hope rye gets better it would be good if he did and also when is the next chapter up?
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Old 07-28-2008, 07:14 AM
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Okay, where did Jarre go running off to?

I wanna know what that Torchic is doing! =>.<=
Jarre didn't go too far off. He was just trying to talk to Groudon, I think.
But that Torchic could be up to anything, so who knows. ;)

Rye will get better (hopefully) soon.
The next chapter might be a while.

As of right now, I am focusing on an URPG story that I'm currently writing.
I can't tell you exactly HOW long, but it could be a bit.
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Old 08-26-2008, 06:45 AM
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I just started reading, sorry I was so slow. Lol
But I have to say, your descriptions, words, everything in your story had feelings. I could almost feel them and almost picture the whole event happening before my eyes.

You really have worked hard for this Gem, I can almost feel it. An Amazing Fan-Fic, by an amazing author. Well Done
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Old 08-26-2008, 06:57 AM
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I just started reading, sorry I was so slow. Lol
But I have to say, your descriptions, words, everything in your story had feelings. I could almost feel them and almost picture the whole event happening before my eyes.

You really have worked hard for this Gem, I can almost feel it. An Amazing Fan-Fic, by an amazing author. Well Done
No, that's okay. ^^

Thanks! I try to get as much across as possible. I really like to show it as if it were a movie.

Thankyou, Sam. =)
I won't give up on this, either!
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