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Old 10-27-2008, 08:14 AM
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In helpless terror, the growlithe tried to cover her ears with her paws to block out the horrible roaring noise as she lay on the ground, making cries of terror as small rocks pelted her huddled form.

Then suddenly, it stopped.

Snowcrystal coughed, freeing herself from the small bits of stone that now covered her. The cave was completely dark. The first pokémon she thought of was Stormblade. Lighting up the cavern with a small ember, she quickly spotted the scyther and ran over to him. “Are you okay?” she asked, nudging his shoulder carefully.

“Stormblade hasn’t been okay for weeks,” Rosie grumbled, standing up slowly near where Stormblade lay. To Snowcrystal’s relief, she didn’t seem hurt by the rockfall.

Stormblade looked up, but didn’t look at Snowcrystal. “Sure. I’m fine. Not hurt worse…” he replied quietly.

Snowcrystal glanced around and saw Thunder get shakily to her feet, and turned to look around for the others. There was no sign of them. Looking around, she quickly noticed a huge wall of rock and debris from the collapse, blocking off the small area behind them. Realizing that the others must be trapped on the other side, she hastily climbed the rugged boulders, hoping to find a way she could slip through to reach her friends. Rosie, meanwhile, was studying the cavern they were in, gazing into the dark tunnel that lay ahead of them, cool cave air ruffling her fur. The others, she realized, must still be back near where the stone column had fallen.

Snowcrystal pawed at the rocks, not seeing any place where she could possibly get through to the other side. She gave a small squeak of surprise as some of the smaller rocks near the top shifted, and using ember again, she saw Nightshade’s claws break through, then retreat.

“Nightshade!” she cried, running up to the hole. The heracross did not try to break through the rocks, but she heard his voice from the other side.

“Are you all right?” he asked. “Redclaw, Wildflame, and Spark are fine. So is that houndour, Blazefang.”

“I’m fine!” Snowcrystal answered. “Rosie and Stormblade aren’t hurt any worse…I don’t know about Thunder…but can you break through these rocks?”

Nightshade took a moment to reply. “There’s a very large rock near the top of this heap of boulders on this side,” he replied at last. “I can’t shift more than a few of these small rocks without causing it to fall over. I can move the rock itself, but it might make the whole tunnel collapse! There’s enough space for us to go back the way we came and find another route-Cyclone’s cronies are gone. I’m afraid we’ll have to go separate ways.”

“But-” Snowcrystal began.

“Just help the others,” Nightshade replied. “You’ll be fine if you stick together and make sure either you or Rosie provides light to see by. Be careful, and remember to mark the walls of the tunnels you pass by with your claws so you know you’ve been there and won’t end up going in circles.”

“I…I’m not sure I can-” she replied hesitantly, but Nightshade cut her off.

“Just lead the others,” he replied calmly. “Me and the rest of us on this side need to get going. This place could still collapse.” Another rumble was heard, and the heracross’s voice sounded more anxious. “We need to go now. Get the others and move further along the tunnel. You should be safe away from where the collapse started.”

“Ok…” Snowcrystal whispered uncertainly, and she heard Nightshade scramble back down the rocks toward the others. Snowcrystal then headed down the pile of boulders to the cave floor.

“Good luck, Snowcrystal!” she heard Redclaw call from behind the rocks as she and Rosie did what they could to help Stormblade get up, and along with Thunder, the four of them walked away from the scene of the collapse.

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A short while later, Snowcrystal’s group stopped to rest, safely away from the danger of falling rocks. Rosie had curled up near the wall of the cave to try and get some sleep, and Thunder had soon done the same. Stormblade sat away from the others, refusing to talk to anyone.

Leaning against the smooth and wet cave wall, Snowcrystal’s thoughts constantly wandered back to the group of friends who were separated. Were they all right? Would they find a way to reach her again? Had Blazefang left or was he still with them?

Sighing, she lay her head on her paws, listening to the soft sound of water dripping from somewhere further within the cave, as she closed her eyes and willed sleep to come to her. If there was anything she needed now, it was to have as much strength as possible for the journey ahead.

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(P.S.-I'm curious to know...who's everyone's favorite character(s)?)
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Old 10-27-2008, 08:48 PM
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Whoa, I just got through reading this. All I can come up with is: intense, xD
Hm... so far though, I'd have to say a favorite is Rosie, just cause I like Ninetales. Of course, I also like almost all fire-types, but meh.
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My favorite is Wildflame. She's so cool, and the struggles she has to put up with has really tested her levelheadedness. If thats a word XD.

I'm sort of scared for the group now. They have no one to trust, they're lost, and weak. Its like any moment one of them could croak...
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Old 10-28-2008, 02:35 AM
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I knew you could do it sis! And boy did you do it, this was an awesome chapter.
The way you ended the last one, I really thought Thunder was gonna kill Blazefang. I can't believe they've put up with him for as long as they have.
Rosie sounds as if she'd rather not put up with him at all.

I agree!

SHHH!
Anyway, is it just me or did it seem like that Scyther recognized Stormblade's name? What if she knew him? That would certainly be-

Exciting?

Good?

Interesting?

Ditto ditto?

A wedding!? oO

^_^
everyone else: o_O

Uhh... Moving on.
Poor Snowcrystal has just been thrust into a leadership position. I certainly hope she can step up to the task. Either way, she's sure to come out of that cave stronger in some way. ^^
As for my favorite character... I would have said Wildflame because I think circumstance is the only thing holding her back. (when I say circumstance, I mean coming from the Houndour tribe ^^')
But it seems that Nightshade is starting to grow on me. He's knowledgable, helpful, and level-headed. ^^


Snowcrystal's the best! ^^ *snuggles*
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But it seems that Nightshade is starting to grow on me. He's knowledgable, helpful, and level-headed. ^^

Oddly enough, I don't really like Nightshade for the reasons you just mentioned. Isn't he being a little too helpful? I don't really trust him.
He did lead them into a cave that could very well kill them. But assuming he is bad, he did all of this helpfulness very well...I just don't trust him.
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Old 10-28-2008, 03:21 AM
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Whoa, I just got through reading this. All I can come up with is: intense, xD
Hm... so far though, I'd have to say a favorite is Rosie, just cause I like Ninetales. Of course, I also like almost all fire-types, but meh.
Yay, a new reader! I hope you enjoy the future chapters! And I think you're the second person who said their favorite character was Rosie. =3


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My favorite is Wildflame. She's so cool, and the struggles she has to put up with has really tested her levelheadedness. If thats a word XD.

I'm sort of scared for the group now. They have no one to trust, they're lost, and weak. Its like any moment one of them could croak...
Yeah, I think it's a word.^^ I'm glad people like Wildflame-well, I'm glad when people like any of my characters too. xD And yeah, Snowcrystal has to be in charge of her little group now, and she's really not sure what to do..


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I knew you could do it sis! And boy did you do it, this was an awesome chapter.
The way you ended the last one, I really thought Thunder was gonna kill Blazefang. I can't believe they've put up with him for as long as they have.
Rosie sounds as if she'd rather not put up with him at all.

I agree!

SHHH!
Anyway, is it just me or did it seem like that Scyther recognized Stormblade's name? What if she knew him? That would certainly be-

Exciting?

Good?

Interesting?

Ditto ditto?

A wedding!? oO

^_^
everyone else: o_O

Uhh... Moving on.
Poor Snowcrystal has just been thrust into a leadership position. I certainly hope she can step up to the task. Either way, she's sure to come out of that cave stronger in some way. ^^
As for my favorite character... I would have said Wildflame because I think circumstance is the only thing holding her back. (when I say circumstance, I mean coming from the Houndour tribe ^^')
But it seems that Nightshade is starting to grow on me. He's knowledgable, helpful, and level-headed. ^^


Snowcrystal's the best! ^^ *snuggles*
Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it! ^-^

Yeah, they did sort of forget about Blazefang in their rush to avoid Cyclone's pokémon, but yeah, Rosie certainly doesn't want him around. (Neither do the others, for that matter...)

And journeying through the cave will definitely be a test for Snowcrystal. *excited to write the next part*

I know what you mean about Wildflame, and I'm glad you like her character. ^^ (And Nightshade too!)

Rosie: Yeah, that Scyther did seem to recognize Stormblade's name...

Spark: Why? Was she his girlfriend? *starts laughing*

Redclaw: By the way she looked at Stormblade I highly doubt she's a "friend" of any kind, if she does know him.


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Oddly enough, I don't really like Nightshade for the reasons you just mentioned. Isn't he being a little too helpful? I don't really trust him.
He did lead them into a cave that could very well kill them. But assuming he is bad, he did all of this helpfulness very well...I just don't trust him.
I like hearing(well, reading) theories! You'll find out more about Nightshade later.. ^^
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Redclaw: By the way she looked at Stormblade I highly doubt she's a "friend" of any kind, if she does know him.

I like hearing(well, reading) theories! You'll find out more about Nightshade later.. ^^
Yeah. More like a fiend.
Why is R nice?
Because it makes fiends, friends!

LOL

So I'm right! Something weird is going on!
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Yeah. More like a fiend.
Why is R nice?
Because it makes fiends, friends!

LOL

So I'm right! Something weird is going on!
Well, you'll see..it may or may not be a bad thing. *says no more*

Spark: So she's his girlfiend?

Snowcrystal: *facepaw* No. And besides, she didn't even seem to recognize him until someone said his name...
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Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it! ^-^

Yeah, they did sort of forget about Blazefang in their rush to avoid Cyclone's pokémon, but yeah, Rosie certainly doesn't want him around. (Neither do the others, for that matter...)

And journeying through the cave will definitely be a test for Snowcrystal. *excited to write the next part*

I know what you mean about Wildflame, and I'm glad you like her character. ^^ (And Nightshade too!)

Rosie: Yeah, that Scyther did seem to recognize Stormblade's name...

Spark: Why? Was she his girlfriend? *starts laughing*

Redclaw: By the way she looked at Stormblade I highly doubt she's a "friend" of any kind, if she does know him.
Yeah, I'm sure it will be really hard for her. She'll have to keep on her toes.

Aw! Poor little Snowcrystal! I'd ask Joey for help, but he didn't even know where we were in those ruins.

I didn't realize okay! Sheesh! >.<

Oh, and I didn't think Nightshade was being "too helpful." In fact, at first, he was only trying to help Stormblade cause he was hurt. He seemed reluctant to travel with the group.

*thinking* That is true. I don't think he's too helpful. He's just helpful. =^-^=
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Yeah, I'm sure it will be really hard for her. She'll have to keep on her toes.

Aw! Poor little Snowcrystal! I'd ask Joey for help, but he didn't even know where we were in those ruins.

I didn't realize okay! Sheesh! >.<

Oh, and I didn't think Nightshade was being "too helpful." In fact, at first, he was only trying to help Stormblade cause he was hurt. He seemed reluctant to travel with the group.

*thinking* That is true. I don't think he's too helpful. He's just helpful. =^-^=
Snowcrystal: I think so too! Plus he was going to leave in a few days...after he was sure Stormblade got better from the poison, but then the whole thing with Blazefang and those other pokémon happened...

Blazefang: Well I don't trust any of you, so there.

Snowcrystal: *to Abby* Thanks for offering to help though. ^^ I'm still pretty worried...
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Snowcrystal: *facepaw* No. And besides, she didn't even seem to recognize him until someone said his name...
How would anybody recognize him? He looks like he was trampled, diced, thrown down the well, and put in a blender.
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Yay, a new reader! I hope you enjoy the future chapters! And I think you're the second person who said their favorite character was Rosie. =3
Heh, I actually like all of them... as is the case with most Pokemon. Even Blazefang.
I can't help but feel sorry for the guy, even if he's a jerk. Getting chased down by an insane army of Pokemon doesn't look good on anyone's record, xD
Solus and Cyclone - although I love the Eeveelution family - are really creeping me out!
Snowcrystal though... it'll be interesting to see how she's changed by the time they get where they're all going... Oh? one of my characters wants a word with Justin.


I'm not normally against humans, but if you ever deliberately injure another Pokemon in your life again, you'll regret it!

O.O Whoa... anger issues. Not that I can blame her though.
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How would anybody recognize him? He looks like he was trampled, diced, thrown down the well, and put in a blender.
Stormblade: Oh...thanks. -_-

Snowcrystal: Yeah, I know..that was my point. ^^;

Stormblade: ....

Spark: Stormblade, what he's saying is true.


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Heh, I actually like all of them... as is the case with most Pokemon. Even Blazefang.
I can't help but feel sorry for the guy, even if he's a jerk. Getting chased down by an insane army of Pokemon doesn't look good on anyone's record, xD
Solus and Cyclone - although I love the Eeveelution family - are really creeping me out!
Snowcrystal though... it'll be interesting to see how she's changed by the time they get where they're all going... Oh? one of my characters wants a word with Justin.


I'm not normally against humans, but if you ever deliberately injure another Pokemon in your life again, you'll regret it!

O.O Whoa... anger issues. Not that I can blame her though.
That's Mitsumae, I believe you've met her and her three Pokemon companions on Character Chat.
Thanks! And yeah, Blazefang's not in the best predicament now. D=

And I love the eeveelutions too! *huggles Spark* I'd hug Cyclone and Solus but they might try to kill me. o.o

Justin: *backs away slowly* Uh...calm down...it was just a wild scyther...

Katie: Justin, I suggest you be quiet now. >.<
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And I love the eeveelutions too! *huggles Spark* I'd hug Cyclone and Solus but they might try to kill me. o.o

Justin: *backs away slowly* Uh...calm down...it was just a wild scyther...

Katie: Justin, I suggest you be quiet now. >.<
OH! I know! You should have Cyclone and Solus meet Justin and they either team up or they destroy him!

Then, when Cyclone and Solus lose (lets face it, we can't have them win), Justin will end up being killed along with them! Its fool proof! A complete win-win-lose.

The lose is Spark.
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Stormblade: Oh...thanks. -_-

Snowcrystal: Yeah, I know..that was my point. ^^;

Stormblade: ....

Spark: Stormblade, what he's saying is true.



Thanks! And yeah, Blazefang's not in the best predicament now. D=

And I love the eeveelutions too! *huggles Spark* I'd hug Cyclone and Solus but they might try to kill me. o.o

Justin: *backs away slowly* Uh...calm down...it was just a wild scyther...

Katie: Justin, I suggest you be quiet now. >.<
Aw, don't worry about it. You can hug me instead of those two psychos, xD

Well said, Hakumei. He's a shiny Umbreon.

No argument there. Justin, you would be wise to follow Katie's advice-

Like that's ever gonna happen.

xD, anyway, no one will like my Umbreon Monogatari friend here if she loses her temper.

Got that right. *glaring at Justin*

Wow, and I thought Thunder was bad.
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