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Old 06-30-2008, 10:05 PM
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Never say never Azurai! (I just said it twice!) Your story won't be bad! Just figure out the plotline, and fill in what you think is necessary.

I'm hoping for a new chapter! I've never been very patient...
Back at you. xD

Don't worry, I'll try my best. :P I'm actually getting more ideas about it so I might be able to figure out the plot soon.
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Old 06-30-2008, 10:09 PM
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Well I'll be. Never seems to be a favorite word of mine
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Old 06-30-2008, 10:10 PM
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Back at you. xD

Don't worry, I'll try my best. :P I'm actually getting more ideas about it so I might be able to figure out the plot soon.
Well that's good! ^-^

I'm going to try working on finishing my chapter now, then fixing a bunch of the mistakes I left for later...

And well, I'm gonna try to keep updating sorta-fast! ^-^;
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Old 06-30-2008, 10:15 PM
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Okay dokey! Feel free to check the new chapter I posted as well, it needs love.

I got beat up. AGAIN.

XD He doesn't get a break, even in the story!
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Ok, everyone, I'm having some major problems with the chapter I finished. I thought it would be easy to fix it later but the whole chapter is...crap. I really struggled writing this, and I knew if I could just get past this chapter, I could write the next ones much easier (I'm really excited to write chapter 25), but I couldn't even read through this whole chapter...it's not really written well at all and I have absolutely no inspiration to work on it more and I just want it DONE. >_<

Really, I've tried fixing it but had to give up for now...for some reason this is a really difficult chapter to write. So sorry, it's going to be longer until I can post it. I honestly have no clue what to do now as this is extremely hard to write and I don't know how I'm going to fix it...
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Old 07-01-2008, 03:36 PM
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Ok, everyone, I'm having some major problems with the chapter I finished. I thought it would be easy to fix it later but the whole chapter is...crap. I really struggled writing this, and I knew if I could just get past this chapter, I could write the next ones much easier (I'm really excited to write chapter 25), but I couldn't even read through this whole chapter...it's not really written well at all and I have absolutely no inspiration to work on it more and I just want it DONE. >_<

Really, I've tried fixing it but had to give up for now...for some reason this is a really difficult chapter to write. So sorry, it's going to be longer until I can post it. I honestly have no clue what to do now as this is extremely hard to write and I don't know how I'm going to fix it...
If you PM the part to us, maybe we can help you fix it. :3 That way, when you post it, it'll all be fixed and stuff.
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Ok, everyone, I'm having some major problems with the chapter I finished. I thought it would be easy to fix it later but the whole chapter is...crap. I really struggled writing this, and I knew if I could just get past this chapter, I could write the next ones much easier (I'm really excited to write chapter 25), but I couldn't even read through this whole chapter...it's not really written well at all and I have absolutely no inspiration to work on it more and I just want it DONE. >_<

Really, I've tried fixing it but had to give up for now...for some reason this is a really difficult chapter to write. So sorry, it's going to be longer until I can post it. I honestly have no clue what to do now as this is extremely hard to write and I don't know how I'm going to fix it...
Dun worry Scy,you'll get through it.
Trust me,I've been in this spot plenty of times >.<
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Old 07-01-2008, 06:52 PM
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Keep at it Scy! I know what you mean, I'm scared to write the next chapter for mine...I dread describing CycloneSlash Cami, and I have to make Nazo all cool...Argh! To much pressure! *Pops*

Nasty...
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Old 07-01-2008, 11:22 PM
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If you PM the part to us, maybe we can help you fix it. :3 That way, when you post it, it'll all be fixed and stuff.
The problem is...I think it's beyond fixing. I know what it needs but I can't fix it! >_< I know I'll need to add in other parts of the chapter because some are too short...but I don't know how. It's just really, really difficult to write...and I'm worried I'm going to have to start over...
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Old 07-02-2008, 12:09 AM
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You can fix it!

And if not, sometimes you just have to start again. v_v
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You can fix it!

And if not, sometimes you just have to start again. v_v
Yeah, but I really don't think I can re-write 12 and a half pages of something I already took forever on and really struggled with. >.< This is the hardest chapter I've had to write.
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Yeah, but I really don't think I can re-write 12 and a half pages of something I already took forever on and really struggled with. >.< This is the hardest chapter I've had to write.
Well maybe Azu's right.

We might be able to help if you send it to us.
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Old 07-02-2008, 12:29 AM
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Well maybe Azu's right.

We might be able to help if you send it to us.
I might do that, it's just really, really embarrassing to send this to anyone...I can't even stand reading through it! >_<
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I have been in your situtation so much I cant count. But even though its long, I think you should rewrite it...
But if you can't bring yourself to do that, then do what Azurai Wolf said and send us the chapter to help you.
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I have been in your situtation so much I cant count. But even though its long, I think you should rewrite it...
But if you can't bring yourself to do that, then do what Azurai Wolf said and send us the chapter to help you.
Well the problem with that is that it will be no easier to write. I still can't think of how I'm going to be able to do what I need to to make it better, rewrite or not. Basically, this is the hardest chapter I've ever had to write, and I have no inspiration or motivation to work on this whatsoever...yet I'm excited to write the chapters after this...
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