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Old 02-02-2008, 11:55 PM
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Default Pokemon: Legends of Loria

This is the story of a group of Pokemon trainers seeking out their individual goals. Starting from rookies and hopefully to masters, these young trainers will encounter Pokemon, trainers, breeders, and Adventures that will help them realize their true potential.

The starting region is a continent called Loria. There are no indigenous Pokemon in the region, but several Pokemon from the other regions call this place home. Loria has a reputation of being a rather tough training ground due to the wildness of it's gym leaders who are not masters of a singular type, but rather an attribute of the pokemon they train.

Loria Gyms:

Unlike the Gym masters of other countries who specify in pokemon types, the Gym Masters focus on the traits of their favored pokemon, opening themselves up to a wider variety of pokemon and overall making battles much tougher than most. The Pokemon League has acknowledged the difficulty of the Loria gyms and has deemed it necessary that only 6 badges of this league be required before entering.


Linda Bonita: A Beauty to rival Erica of Celadon City- The Dorable Badge
Age: 24
Linda Bonita specializes in Pokemon that are considered to be pretty, cute, or overall pleasing. She has a strong dislike of ugly pokemon and people. Her cousin is Frederick Creeps. Linda’s gym is found in Fairitale City.
Pokemon: Eevee, Bulbasaur, Kirlia,
Reserved Pokemon:Goldeen, Roselia, Misdreavus, Togepi

Rio Amarillo: The Yellow Ray of Sunshine of Loria- The Sunlight Badge
Age: 17
The youngest of gym masters in the Loria region, Rio is a huge fan of most Yellow colored pokemon. Rio’s ambition is to one day reign as a member of the Elite 4. Rio dreams of catching Zapdos of Kanto and the legendary dog pokemon Raikoh of Johto. His gym is found in Comike City.
Pokemon: Sandslash, Elekid, Beedrill, Psyduck
Reserved Pokemon: Jolteon, Pikachu, Pichu, Minun, Plusle, Hypno, Sunflora

Largo Wates: The Heavy Weight of Loria-The Pound Badge
Age: 28
A rather portly fellow, Largo Wates specializes in pokemon who are, just like himself, very large and heavy in size and weight. He’s an easy going fellow who can make friends fast and likes to settle every confrontation with a large meal. His favorite dish is bbq pork ramen. Largo’s gym is found on the Legen Island.
Pokemon: Snorlax, Golem, Onix, Metagross, Hariyama
Reserve Pokemon: Nidoking, Graveler, Torterra

Frederick Creeps: The Frightening Prankster- The Joker Badge
Age: 25
A tall and thin man, Frederick’s personal favorite type of pokemon is the type that would usually scare his cousin Linda Bonita giving him the nickname “The Frightening Prankster”. He has a bad habit of creeping around people and surprising them by quietly showing up behind them and saying cryptic things. His Gym is found in Tall Tela City.
Pokemon: Ariados, Banette, Haunter, Wheezing, Houndoom
Reserve Pokemon: Lairon, Venusaur, Steelix

Frankie Speedman: The battling demon on Wheels- The Mile per Hour Badge
Age: 20
Frankie is a skater girl with a love of everything fast. She talks fast, skates fast, eats fast, and all of her pokemon are speed freaks. Though she is considered a gym leader, her “gym” is mostly in reality built as her own personal skate park. She hates battling inside and always prefers to take her battles outside where she gets to race along with her opponents hopefully leaving them in the dust. Frankie’s gym is found in Roma Town located beyond the Olympia Mountains.
Pokemon: Rapidash, Electrode, Grovyle, Swellow, Dodrio, Sneasel
Reserved Pokemon: Blaziken, Hitmonchan,


Martha Materna: The mother of all Gym leaders- The Birth Badge
Age: 43
The oldest of the gym leaders and unofficial head of the Loria gym leaders, Martha is a very caring woman with a family of 5 children, each one destined to become great pokemon trainers themselves, her oldest daughter, Rachel, being up and coming to head the gym once her mom retires. Her style is completely opposite from her natural demeanor using her pokemons naturally protective nature as her strength against her opponents. Her gym is located in Grecia City.
Pokemon: Blissey, Kangaskhan, Nidoqueen, Illumise, Wigglytuff, Jynx

The Elite 4 of Loria are legendary for their toughness. Each are masters of their chosen type and are ruthless in battle.

1st of the Elite 4:
Name:Michelle Materna: Master of Dual Water Types
Age: 24
Pokemon:Gyrados, Lapras, Kabutops, Walrein, Ludicolo, Empoleon

2nd of the Elite 4:
Name:Jackie Hail: Master of the Ground types.
Age:23
Pokemon: Dugtrio, Steelix, Flygon, Garchomp, and Rhyperior

3rd of the Elite 4:
Name: Kail Charger: Master of Electric Double Battles
Age: 30
Pokemon: Raichu, Ampharos, Lanturn, Luxray, Plusle, Minun

4th of the Elite 4:
Name: Ryan Ballinger: Master of the Grass type
Age: 31
Pokemon: Meganium, Vileplume, Victreebell, Exeggutor, Shiftry, Roserade


The native pokemon to the land of Loria are:

Capterpie- Metapod- Butterfree
Weedle- Kakuna- Beedrill
Pidgey- Pideotto- Pidgeot
Spearow- Fearow
Pichu-Pikachu-Raichu
Vulpix- Nintails
Eevee- Vaporeon, Jolteon, Flareon, Espeon, Umbreon, Glaceon, Leafeon
Abra- Kadabra- Alakazam
Geodude- Graveler- Golem
Onix- Steelix
Scyther- Scizor
Ghastly- Haunter- Gengar
Slowpoke- Slowbro, Slowking
Krabby- Kinglar
Sandshrew- Sandslash
Dratini- Dragonair- Dragonite
Zubat- Golbat- Crobat
Shellder- Cloyster
Staryu- Starmie
Meowth- Persian
Diglett- Dugtrio
Oddish- Gloom- Vileplume, Bellosom
Bellsprout- Weepinbell- Victreebell
Slugma- Magcargo
Mareep- Flaafy- Ampharos
Pineco- Forretress
Tyrogue- Hitmonchan, Hitmonlee, Hitmontop
Sentret- Furret
Skarmory
Sunkern- Sunflora
Corsola
Wooper- Quagsire
Elekid- Electabuzz- Electivire
Igglybuff- Jigglypuff- Wigglytuff
Swinub- Piloswine- Mamoswine
Sneasel- Weavile
Houndour- Houndoom
Murkrow- Honchkrow
Misdreavus- Mismagius
Skitty- Delcatty
Clamperl- Gorebyss, Huntail
Ralts- Kirlia- Gardevoir, Gallade
Corphish- Crawdaunt
Beldum- Metang- Metagross
Poochyena- Mightyena
Lotad- Lombre- Ludicolo
Seedot- Nuzleaf- Shiftry
Carvanha- Sharpedo
Cacnea- Cacturne
Snorunt- Glalie, Froslass
Aron- Lairon- Aggron
Bagon- Shelgon- Salamence
Trapinch- Vibrava- Flygon
Starly- Staravia- Staraptor
Bonsly- Suddowoodo
Mime Jr.- Mr. Mime
Pachirisu
Hippopotos- Hippowdown
Riolu- Lucario
Shinx- Luxio- Luxray
Gible- Gabite- Garchomp
Rattata-Raticate
Luvdisc
Ponyta-Rapidash


Legends
Kyogre
Groudon
Entei
Raikou
Suicune
Moltres
Articuno
Zapdos

Locations of notice in Loria:

Storii Village- A small farming community that is home to a few, including Professor Maggie Fern, the leading Professor in Pokemon communications. The Pokemon Academy of Loria is located just beyond the farms of Storii.

Poeta Town- A neighboring town to Storii Village. It is lies right on the outskirts of the Folktale Forest.

Dimgrey Town- The graveyard town of Loria. The memorial tower is populated by psychics who are drawn to it's spiritual energies. There have been problems with invading Ghost pokemon.

Novalice City- The leading medical town with the most up to date medical equipment for both humans and Pokemon.

Olympia Mountain Range- A Mountain range that snakes all throughout Loria. The northern part of the Olympia Mountains are ice cold and only accessable via a lift while the southern portion of the Olympia Mountains also contain active volcanoes. The eruptions and earthquakes that occur in this area have created a Fire Valley. There are many man made tunnels which give access to the other cities on the other side of the Olympia Mountains as well as a few made by different ground and rock types.

Folktale Forest- The first true step for most beginner trainers, this forest is known for harboring many different forms of wild life which include bug types, grass types, and herds of Girafarig and Stantler.


The Rules:

1. Follow ALL, count em', ALL PE2K forum rules!

2.No Swearing.

3.Keep romance to a bare MINIMUM! This is an RP about training Pokémon and becoming the champ, not a pornography!

4.If I or Rita Payne tell you to do something, do it! If you're not accepted, don't complain and copy paste the exact same sign-up. That's the reason why you weren't accepted.

5.Have fun, or else!

6.Rita and I have final say of who is in and who is out. There will be a maximum of 4-5 players at any given time.

7. Absolutely no ubers in your party. You must have an extremely, almost godly reason for having any legendary Pokemon in your party.

8. Mary-Sue's will be murdered in the head on sight. If you don't know what a Mary-Sue is, wikipedia it.

9. If you are to be making a post, there must be a 5 line minimum.

10. Bunnying will be allowed for this rp as long as you are using common sense. Keep in mind of the other characters past actions, and words. If you are not sure of something, go back and look at the profile of the character you are bunnying so that you may accurately play as that character.

11. If you have read through all of the rules, please put the words Beefy Coffee in your post.

This thread will act as sign up and meta-thread for this rp. Discussion of story, characters, and other things related to the story shall go on in here. The format for signing up shall go as follows:

Name:
Age:
Starting Pokemon Story:
Pokemon on hand:
Character Appearance:
Character's Background/personality:
Goal:
Likes:
Dislikes

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Old 02-03-2008, 12:18 AM
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Default Re: Pokemon: Legends of Loria

Name: Kori Gotcha
Age: 15
Pokemon on hand:Sandshrew

Starting Pokemon Story: One day, while going to work on the farms of Storii Village, Gregory Gotcha nearly tripped on a strange looking rock. However, Gregory learned that that rock was actually a lone poke'egg that was abandoned for whatever reason. Thinking that this would make for a great gift, Gregory took the egg and gave it to his son, Kori Gotcha, a young boy who dreamed of being a pokemon trainer. Everyday, Kori diligently took care of the egg, making sure it was warm and taking it for walks with him until one summer day, the egg hatched and from it came a baby Sandshrew. Kori and his Sandshrew have never been separated since.
Character Description: About 5'3, wild and messy black hair with brown eyes. He has a big mouth and protrudes a fang when he's being mischievous. He is currently wearing a sky blue shirt with brown shorts and red high top sneakers. He has a number of colorful rubber bands on his left wrist. His backpack is also red and inside he has a number of clothes to change into, his lunch and other essentials.

Character's Background/personality: Kori is a young, romantic dreamer. He can't wait to venture out into the world himself and see things that could not be seen in his small village. As a result, Kori has a tendency to rush things. He is the type to leap before he looks and this has resulted in many a slip up and harsh lessons for Kori. At a young age, Kori was chased by a wild Golbat and as a result has developed a fear of scary looking pokemon.

Goal: To see the world and all of the pokemon in it. His hopes are simply live the great life of a Pokemon Trainer.

Likes: Games, winning, Soy sauce, meat

Dislikes: Losing, spicy food, scary looking pokemon,

Beefy Coffee.

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Old 02-03-2008, 02:10 AM
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Name: Patricia "Paige" Alexander

Age: 14

Pokemon on hand Bagon

Starting Pokemon story: Patricia, prefers to be called Paige, was on her way home from school one day when her father stopped her after getting of the bus and told her he had a surprise for her for her birthday. Patrick Alexander took his daughter to her room and inside an incubator was a Pokémon egg from their uncle's farm, a famous Pokémon breeder. Patrick told Paige that the egg was due for hatching in exactly one month, 30 days until Paige's actual birthday. On that day, exactly 30 days later, on exactly 11:59 EST, the Poké Egg started to crack... and, thus, Bagon was born.

Character's Background: Patricia Alexander was born on August 31st of 1993 in Storii Village, Loria. She grew up around her uncle's two Salamence, the male and female Pokémon that would hope to one day be parents. Paige would always visit her uncle's ranch with her parents on holidays, family events, and every other Sunday to play with the Salamence. But once Paige started attending school and most visits were on either Wednesday or Thursday, the Salamence started getting without their best friend.

Paige attended 7 years at the Loria Pokémon Academy, which she then was kicked out of for too much day dreaming and lack of focus. Paige now knows what she wants to do with her life as a Pokémon, one day owning a Salamence.

Character's Personality: Paige can be defined in 3 words: aggressive, assertive, and angry. Those are her traits in battle, out of battle she's rather shy and tends to keep to herself. Paige doesn't have many friends and the one's she does have believe it is safe to say that she is the funnest person they've ever known.

Appearance: Click me, I'm hot! What's not shown: A small backpack Paige wears on her pack to hide most of the skin showing and a pair of some comfy SouthPole brand jeans with low-top World Industries shoes.

Goal: Become the Ultimate Coordinator and Pokémon Champion of Loria.

Likes: Her Bagon, Cheese, Money, shopping, and winning.

Dislikes: Other Bagons, vegetables, the lottery, spending money, and losing.

BTW, Okami and I have discussed it and we are BOTH in charge here. You may be accepted by either Okami or myself.
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Old 02-04-2008, 07:46 AM
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Default Re: Pokemon: Legends of Loria

Name: Austin "Eagle Eye" Elliott
Age: 14
Starting Pokemon Story: Austin Elliott born in Poeta Town, one day he was getting on the bus when bullies pushed him off so he had to walk, on his way he found a egg. He took it and ran, and after taking care of it for months it hatched. Out pops a little Starly, ever since then you can't see one without the other. Originally Starly was going to just be a pet. But with his mom's pushing, he leaves to go on his journey!


Pokemon on hand: Starly

Character Appearance:
Head- Short brown hair, blue eyes.
Body- Short for his age. A scar on his chest which he hides.
Backpack- Its not realy a backpack but more of a cage, it has the straps like a backpack but instead of a bag it has a small cage for starly.

Character's Background/personality:A shy boy. Growing up with cancer isnt easy the reticule the hard times... But Austin made it through, But in the process he became a different person. Were he was once outgoing, Friendly, and funny.. Now he's shy, distant, and sad. What he needs is to be surronded by friends, not just people but pokemon too. This journey is not only to be the best, but its to find his self... Even before he leaves he is already becoming determined, He awaits the challenges of a trainer and the friends he will make on the way.

Goal: Become a meber of the Elite four and show everyone that he's not Disabled

Likes: Meat, sweet tea,bird pokemon, and people who don't make fun of him.

Dislikes: People who make fun of him, Snake pokemon, and worst of all cancer.

Beefy Cofee

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Old 02-04-2008, 02:38 PM
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Default Re: Pokemon: Legends of Loria

Name:Thalia "Ella" Torontla
Age:15

Starting story:Thalia was just getting ready to go to school as she walked out the door she found something small and round. She took good care of it & hatched into a Mime Jr.

Appearance:Long blonde hair, lavender T-shirt,& a jean skirt.
Characters background:Abandoned as a young child, the rest is too sad.
Goal: To beat everyone & be the best at everything.
Likes:Pokemon, friends,& family
dislikes:Scaredy cats,people who abandon thier kids
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Srry about double posting but my Pokemon on hand is Mime Jr.
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Old 02-05-2008, 12:01 PM
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Name:Ryu"Cool Boy"Silent


Age:15


Starting Pokemon Story:At an early age, Ryu was abandoned in the streets of Poeta Town, with no family or friends there. At first, he had nothing. but he grew to have a pack of Garchomp and Gabite that lived outside the village as his only family. One day, when Ryu came home from the city, he noticed a newborn Gible was in the leader Garchomp's hands. The Gible jumped into Ryu's arms and ever since that day, they have been each other's only friends.


Pokemon on hand:Gible


Character Appearance:
Head- Ryu has black spiky hair, blue eyes, and a scar on his face from training with the Garchomp.
Upper Body- Ryu sports a black hoodie and on his back, another scar he tries to hide when he can.
Lower Body- From his legs down, Ryu has torn blue jeans and black shoes with a little strap on top.
Ryu has tan skin from being outside with the Garchomp a lot.


Character's Background/personality:Ryu's life is not known until the age of 5. At the age of 5, Ryu was abandoned in the streets of Poeta Town with nothing but the clothes he's wearing today and a Pokeball. Ryu was left wandering around the city until one day when he wandered outside the city. That was when he met a Garchomp who took him in as his own child. That Garchomp was part of a pack of Garchomp and Gabite that have made their nest outside the village.The Garchomp taught him strength and speed. But most important, they taught him the feel of lonelyness. From this training, Ryu's personality is calm and collected most of the time so he dosen't get phased easily. Other than the Garchomp, Ryu dosen't care about anyone else. And even though Ryu only had Pokemon family, Ryu graduated from Loria Academy in 7 years for major focus in work and excellence in school.


Goal:To find the most challenging opponenent for him and win.


Likes: A challenge, his Gible, and strong Pokemon.


Dislikes:Weak Pokemon, shy trainers, and a short fight.


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Old 02-06-2008, 03:37 AM
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I haven't been in contact with my dear Rita so I will give my opinion on the sign ups currently. Remember though that my word is worth only 50%. Rita will have to provide her opinion. If we disagree on a subject we will weigh the pros and cons and reconsider you.

(EagleEye13) Austin Elliot-I am leaning towards yes.

(dimondgirlofthefuture) Thalia "Ella" Torontla-no

(Charlie Silent) Ryu"Cool Boy"Silent-no
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Default Re: Pokemon: Legends of Loria

Quote:
Originally Posted by Charley Silent View Post
Name:Ryu"Cool Boy"Silent
Age:15
Starting Pokemon Story:At an early age, Ryu was abandoned in the streets of Poeta Town, with no family or friends there. At first, he had nothing. but he grew to have a pack of Garchomp and Gabite that lived outside the village as his only family. One day, when Ryu came home from the city, he noticed a newborn Gible was in the leader Garchomp's hands. The Gible jumped into Ryu's arms and ever since that day, they have been each other's only friends.
Pokemon on hand:Gible
Character Appearance:
Head- Ryu has black spiky hair, blue eyes, and a scar on his face from training with the Garchomp.
Upper Body- Ryu sports a black hoodie and on his back, another scar he tries to hide when he can.
Lower Body- From his legs down, Ryu has torn blue jeans and black shoes with a little strap on top.
Ryu has tan skin from being outside with the Garchomp a lot.
Character's Background/personality:Ryu's life is not known until the age of 5. At the age of 5, Ryu was abandoned in the streets of Poeta Town with nothing but the clothes he's wearing today and a Pokeball. Ryu was left wandering around the city until one day when he wandered outside the city. That was when he met a Garchomp who took him in as his own child. That Garchomp was part of a pack of Garchomp and Gabite that have made their nest outside the village.The Garchomp taught him strength and speed. But most important, they taught him the feel of lonelyness. From this training, Ryu's personality is calm and collected most of the time so he dosen't get phased easily. Other than the Garchomp, Ryu dosen't care about anyone else. And even though Ryu only had Pokemon family, Ryu graduated from Loria Academy in 7 years for major focus in work and excellence in school.
Goal:To find the most challenging opponenent for him and win.
Likes: A challenge, his Gible, and strong Pokemon.
Dislikes:Weak Pokemon, shy trainers, and a short fight.
Beefy Cofee....
Alright, very nice, but there are a few things that could be better. You misspelled a word *pokes rule 11* and the way you wrote the sign-up is ugly. You should double-space the sections, for example, hit enter/return twice after you finish line, like the name. After you finished the name, you should hit return/enter twice so there's a line in between so the grader is able to read it easier. Fix the two mentioned things and you have a yes from me, and maybe it will appeal better to Okami.

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Name: Austin "Eagle Eye" Elliott
Age: 14
Starting Pokemon Story: Austin Elliott born in Poeta Town, one day he was getting on the bus when bullies pushed him off so he had to walk, on his way he found a egg. He took it and ran, and after taking care of it for months it hatched. Out pops a little Starly, ever since then you can't see one without the other. Originally Starly was going to just be a pet. But with his mom's pushing, he leaves to go on his journey!


Pokemon on hand: Starly

Character Appearance:
Head- Short brown hair, blue eyes.
Body- Short for his age. A scar on his chest which he hides.
Backpack- Its not realy a backpack but more of a cage, it has the straps like a backpack but instead of a bag it has a small cage for starly.

Character's Background/personality:A shy boy. Growing up with cancer isnt easy the reticule the hard times... But Austin made it through, But in the process he became a different person. Were he was once outgoing, Friendly, and funny.. Now he's shy, distant, and sad. What he needs is to be surronded by friends, not just people but pokemon too. This journey is not only to be the best, but its to find his self... Even before he leaves he is already becoming determined, He awaits the challenges of a trainer and the friends he will make on the way.

Goal: Become a meber of the Elite four and show everyone that he's not Disabled

Likes: Meat, sweet tea,bird pokemon, and people who don't make fun of him.

Dislikes: People who make fun of him, Snake pokemon, and worst of all cancer.

Beefy Cofee
Nice, very nice, actually. Just fix the "misspelled word"*pokes rule 11* and you're in. Welcome aboard!

Quote:
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Name:Thalia "Ella" Torontla
Age:15

Starting story:Thalia was just getting ready to go to school as she walked out the door she found something small and round. She took good care of it & hatched into a Mime Jr.

Appearance:Long blonde hair, lavender T-shirt,& a jean skirt.
Characters background:Abandoned as a young child, the rest is too sad.
Goal: To beat everyone & be the best at everything.
Likes:Pokemon, friends,& family
dislikes:Scaredy cats,people who abandon thier kids
BEEFY COFFEE!
Alright, this is just FULL of errors! I know, we didn't put it in the rules, but the more effort you put in, the higher chance you'll have of being accepted. Except this is BEYOND laziness! I'm very sorry if I'm rude, but for background you said:

Quote:
Characters background:Abandoned as a young child, the rest is too sad.
You didn't even ATTEMPT to put in a history, and there isn't even a slot for a personality. You used "&" to replace words, which is frowned upon, and Okami, when you read this, I say you add a rule that states that you CANNOT use smiley's and pictures to sign-up with, excluding appearance. That's the only time you can use a pic, other wise, don't. Space up the sections for sign-ups, too! For example, double-space name from age. Makes it easier to read.
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Old 02-09-2008, 01:31 AM
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Default Re: Pokemon: Legends of Loria

Name:
Nanko Orcin

Age:
15

Starting Pokemon Story:
Upon reaching Storii Vilage from her small home in a little city outside Novalice City. She was happy to find Professor Fern's Lab. It had been a long trip, but it was finally worth it. Unfortuneately, the lab was completely dry of Pokemon. There was nothing for her. She wept for days. On the day she had set forth for going back home, a tall, slightly old woman, found her upset. She hugged her and asked what was wrong. Nanko explained her story. The woman hugged her and handed her a Pokeball. She said she could keep it. It was a newly hatched Pokemon of hers that she's like her to have. Nanko jumped for joy and tossed the Pokeball. A plump Happiny appeared.

Pokemon on hand:
Happiny

Character Appearance:
Check it out- Not in pic. A backpack containing normal supplies and a belt with her single Pokeball on it

Character's Background/personality:
Nanko's life had been simple for the most part. Until she had been 13, she had never left her little town. Her adventure into the city filled her with dreams and hopes. She had never owned a Pokemon. She had seen the other kids in her town with them though. She dreamed of the day she'd be able to get her own.

Nanko is a very outgoing person. She loves change and new. She's all about being in the moment. She can be oblivious at times. She has a good heart and can has wonderful work ethics.

Goal:
To live life with arms wide open ((if you will))

Likes:
Friendly people, moomoo milk, rice

Dislikes:
Meat, grudges

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Beefy Coffee
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Old 02-09-2008, 02:37 AM
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Default Re: Pokemon: Legends of Loria

Rita, you forgot the part where I disallowed Mary/Marty-Sues. I hate them with a passion. diamondgirlofthefuture and charlie silent reeked of Mary and Marty-Sues. It's not that I'm not up for a sad story, fine, give me something to cry about, but if it's the sole reason why your doing anything, your out.

GreenRampage, good job. I say your in.
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Old 02-09-2008, 03:57 AM
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Actually, you can't determine whether or not someone's a Mary/Marty-Sue unless they role-play. A Mary/Marty-Sue is someone who's invincible and never loses- How exactly can you tell if they're Mary/Marty-Sue-ing? diamondgirlofthefuture I say is out, bar none. Charley Silent, however, you can't really tell if they're going to Mary/Marty-Sue. The only hint I see is the Garchomp family. Garchomp is based off of a carnivorous dinosaur, therefore they would've more than likely ate you O_o.

GreenRampage is DEFINITELY out!!! *cough*someonedidn'treadtherules*cough*

My final conclusion:

GreenRampage: Out, you rule-skipper!

Charley Silent: Please redo your sign-up. The story about a family of Garchomp is ridiculous and threrefore is just plain stupid. I'd greatly appreciate it(and I'm sure Okami would too) if you did it over, making your character civilized.

diamondgirlofthefuture: Do I even NEED to repeat myself?

EagleEye13: I say you're in, and Okami, you should go over EagleEye's profile again.

So far, Okami and myself are the only people accepted into our Role-Play! I'm not surprised.
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Old 02-09-2008, 04:01 AM
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Default Re: Pokemon: Legends of Loria

Lol. I say eagle eye is in. I worked with him on his character and I think he'd be interesting.

Where did Greenrampage break the rules? If I see, then I'll agree with you that he/she's out but I liked what I saw so maybe you caught what I missed.

And as for charleysilent, I still say he's out. Sorry, but that's how I feel about that.
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Default Re: Pokemon: Legends of Loria

Here's my SU, I'm pretty sure I did everything right, if I didn't just let me know.

Name: Riley

Age: 15

Starting Pokemon Story: Riley liked to explore new places. He was on this adventure in the forest. It seemed like a great day for exploring, then out of nowhere it started raining, without any raining. Riley was halfway in the woods and the rain was coming down harder, and there was lightning and thunder now. Riley decided to go back home. He looked around and realized that he didn't know where he was. He started panicing and started running, but didn't know where he was running to. He slipped and fell into this cave. He landed on a Seviper and he had no pokemon with him to defend his self. The Seviper had started to attack, using Posion Sting. Putting his hands over his head, Riley waited for the attack to hit. He didn't feel anything. Wondering what happened he opened his eyes and saw a Ghastly protecting him and taking on the Seviper. Using his psychic powers he defeated the Seviper. Riley ended up spending the night there in the cave and the Ghastly stayed with him. He talked to the Ghastly all night until morning came. he was going to leave right before the sun rose. He told the Ghastly bye and started to walk away. Then he noticed the Ghastly following him. Riley smiled and asked the Ghastly if he wanted to join his team and the Ghastly said yes (or nodded).


Pokemon on hand: Ghaslty

Character Appearance: Riley is about 5'8 and weights about 125 lbs. He wears glasses and always has his black and yellow backpack with him. He has black spiky hair, but he normally wears a black hat. He wears black shoes and wears blue, black, red, green and yellow shirts. He likes to wear shorts most of the time, but occasionally will wears blue or black pants. He wears Ghaslty's
Pokeball around his neck as a necklace.

Character's Background/
personality: Backround: Riley has lived a pretty good life. He has seen many pokemon on his previous adventures. He caught Ghastly at age 10 and they have a close bond withe each other.

Personality: Riley loves going on adventures or doing anything that seems like fun. He likes being by himself or with his Ghastly, but wouldn't mind being with people. He wants to discover new pokemon. Riley is normally nice to everyone and if they need help he'll help them. He likes all types of pokemon and one day wants to have seen every pokemon at least once.

Goal: To get a Garchomp and Lucario, and to beat the all gyms and elites. He wants to see every pokemon at least once. Also to be the best trainer ever.

Likes: To battle and adventure. He also likes to move around a lot.

Dislikes[/QUOTE] people making fun of other people, losing, and staying in one place for a long time.

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That's a long list of goals, but hey, anythings possible! And you can't have Haunter, it must be a first stage, like Gastly. You may have Gastly if you want.
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