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Old 12-29-2007, 07:35 PM
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Default ~*BlackPeak Wolves - The Tail Clan's Remnants*~

A little advice wanted, it's a wolf fanfiction that goes with my roleplay and what happened to Tail Clan. No, I didn't copy what happened to the Uchiha clan, or know Itachi's name meant weasel (Which, when I found out, made me do this) I had written this previous to when I began watching naruto. anyway, enough chat.

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“Smoke and fog filled the air all around, the apparent struggle between life and death was everywhere. Wolves were killed and slaughtered in every direction. The whole place smelled of death and disease. The Clan of the Tail was destroyed, the juvenile standing in the middle was the only one left, the last survivor, other than WeaselFang. It was a massacre.”

“Ah!” Shadowtail’s eyes shot open. He was in his den as usual, standing next to him was his older brother, WeaselFang. “Why were you screaming?” he said, “You woke me up, ShadowTail.”

“Sorry, WeaselFang. I just had the most terrifying dream, the entire Clan of the Tail… Never mind, I should go back to sleep.” ShadowTail replied.

“Alright, but you shouldn’t wake me up again. Who knows what the Alpha would say if the only Juvenile left in our pack was screaming his head off because of bad dreams and waking up the entire middle-rank den.” Said WeaselFang, wandering out of the den. I really am destined to the life of an Omega, aren’t I. thought ShadowTail. Though WeaselFang always treated him coldly, this time it bothered him. He’d seemed almost proud.

This time was the same as the last, maybe even a stronger feeling. ShadowTail forced himself to stop screaming at the terrifying scene. He felt like a mouse under a cat’s eye, the strong, great brown-furred wolf above him. “Run away, little brother. Runt. Run like the trapped mouse you are.” Shadowtail crouched, laying his ears flat back against his head. The fire and the death. “No…” he said to himself, “N-no more fire…no…no more death…”

Again, he woke, being scolded by his older brother for screaming and waking him up. Now he was terrified to go back to sleep, “What if it’s not just a dream?” he muttered to himself, “what…what if it’s actually going to happen?” he shuddered at the thought of it not being a dream. If it did happen, he would never forgive WeaselFang.

But it won’t happen…He thought.

But in that, he was deathly wrong.

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Might keep going, might not. probably will, but feedback needed
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Old 12-29-2007, 07:49 PM
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Nice, the names remind me a little of Warriors! If you write more, I'll keep reading!
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Old 12-29-2007, 07:50 PM
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Nice, the names remind me a little of Warriors! If you write more, I'll keep reading!
Yes! I like Warriors! that's actually where I got the name idea.
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Old 12-29-2007, 07:52 PM
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Yes! I like Warriors! that's actually where I got the name idea.
Very good prolouge! I just finished Sunset in the Warriors series!
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Old 12-29-2007, 07:55 PM
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Very good prolouge! I just finished Sunset in the Warriors series!
And, believe it or not but ShadowTail is also my Warriors OC. (Just, as a Cat)
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Old 12-29-2007, 08:01 PM
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And, believe it or not but ShadowTail is also my Warriors OC. (Just, as a Cat)
XD Cool. I have ALOT of Warriors OC's. (Over 50)
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Old 12-29-2007, 08:09 PM
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XD Cool. I have ALOT of Warriors OC's. (Over 50)
That is a lot...

yeah, This Fanfic was the base of my RP, But it's still in the "Sign-up" Stage.
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Old 12-29-2007, 08:12 PM
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That is a lot...

yeah, This Fanfic was the base of my RP, But it's still in the "Sign-up" Stage.
I know, I signed up.
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Old 12-29-2007, 08:20 PM
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I know, I signed up.
Yay! thank you! I'm starting it too.
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