Re: gengar and his slaves XD XD
Point A- This is the Pokemon General Board. You want the Pokemon URPG Stories Board, which is where you would post a Story made to catch a Pokemon.
Point B- Are you a member of the URPG? If you're not, this isn't even valid, as you need to be a member in order to buy/catch a Pokemon.
Point C- This is not going to be considered a story, sorry. There's no plot, no description, no real battle, and it is WAAAAAY lacking in characters (meaning it's WAAAAAAY too short to catch Gastly). Speaking as a Grader, I can teel you assuredly that this would be an automatic fail and you'd be told to work more on it. A LOT more.
I'll move this and make the appropriate edits to the thread.
EDIT: Thread has been moved, and since I'm here I'll now say it as a Grader and not a G-Mod: you need to do a LOT of work on this story. You need a solid plot, you need to add lots od description, you need to have proper grammar and spelling, as well as other things. Also, a Pokemon MUST be captured in a Ball somehow, unless you come up with a really clever way of getting around the PokeBall part. But no matter how you do it, the target Pokemon needs to be captured somehow. Another thing, Gastly is 10-20k I think, and you have much much less than that.
That being said, this really doesn't qualify for a Grade. You can PM/IM me if you want to talk about it more.
Last edited by Dog of Hellsing; 12-14-2007 at 07:31 PM.