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Old 10-07-2007, 12:35 PM
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Plot:

Long ago when Arceus was shaping the Pokemon world ,along with Dialga and Palkia, the Dark One appeared and it's name was ---- . While the legendary trio was shaping the Pokemon World ---- was destroying it. When Arceus found out he was furious. Arceus, Dialga, and Palkia punished ---- by sending ---- to a maze that ran on and on so that ---- would never get out, or so they thought.

Long After

The year is 3000 in a peacful city named Furio just miles away from the fabled maze. A scientists in a library finds an ancient room and learns about the maze. He/She (Whoever wants the Position) sets out to find the maze. He/She finds the maze with the help of our hero and his friends. Then the cave starts rumbling and they know things aren't right.

Everyone is allowed one non-legendary partner Pokemon. They cannot be re-chosen once the story begins and it cannot be shiny.

Sign-Up Here:
Hero/Main:
Friend/Hero:Blue Latios/Minun
Friend/Hero:
Friend/Hero:
Scientist/Hero:
Villain:

Application:
Position:(Friend or Scientist)
Name:
Poke' Partner:
Personality:
Age:
History:

Have Fun! I will PM you when to start.

RULES:
1.All the Pe2k Rules.
2.No Swearing
3.Don't bring in another character without my permission.
4.Don't God-mod, Bunny, or any other form of basicly taking over the basic plan of the RPG.

Once Again Have Fun.
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Old 10-07-2007, 09:30 PM
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Plot:

Long ago when Arceus was shaping the Pokemon world ,along with Dialga and Palkia, the Dark One appeared and it's name was ---- . While the legendary trio was shaping the Pokemon World ---- was destroying it. When Arceus found out he was furious. Arceus, Dialga, and Palkia punished ---- by sending ---- to a maze that ran on and on so that ---- would never get out, or so they thought.

Long After

The year is 3000 in a peacful city named Furio just miles away from the fabled maze. A scientists in a library finds an ancient room and learns about the maze. He/She (Whoever wants the Position) sets out to find the maze. He/She finds the maze with the help of our hero and his friends. Then the cave starts rumbling and they know things aren't right.

Everyone is allowed one non-legendary partner Pokemon. They cannot be re-chosen once the story begins and it cannot be shiny.

Sign-Up Here:
Hero:Blue Latios/Minun
Friend:
Friend:
Friend:
Scientist:

Application:
Position:(Friend or Scientist)
Name:
Poke' Partner

Have Fun! I will PM you when to start.

RULES:
1.All the Pe2k Rules.
2.No Swearing
3.Don't bring in another character without my permission.

Once Again Have Fun.
Wow, this looks like what would happen if Monkey Boy made an RP. No offence, nothing that couldn't be fixed with a bit of work.

1.) You need a better sign-up sheet, try to include questions like "What do they look like?" (Appearance), "What do they act like?" (Personality) and "What waas their early life like?" (History). And maybe more.
2.) You need more rules so that RPers don't suddenly say "The bullet bounces off me" (God-Modding), "Your charecter kisses me" (Bunnying) and anything else you want to add.
3.) Why do all the other RPers have to be "Friends"? Aren't they heroes too? Also what about villans? Maybe they could be servants to the unknown Pokemon that I've heard so much about.
4.) One more thing, try to add to the plot. Make the charecters more involved in the events that are happening. Perhaps they were chosen by Arceus and the others.
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Old 10-07-2007, 10:44 PM
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Wow, this looks like what would happen if Monkey Boy made an RP. No offence, nothing that couldn't be fixed with a bit of work.

1.) You need a better sign-up sheet, try to include questions like "What do they look like?" (Appearance), "What do they act like?" (Personality) and "What waas their early life like?" (History). And maybe more.
2.) You need more rules so that RPers don't suddenly say "The bullet bounces off me" (God-Modding), "Your charecter kisses me" (Bunnying) and anything else you want to add.
3.) Why do all the other RPers have to be "Friends"? Aren't they heroes too? Also what about villans? Maybe they could be servants to the unknown Pokemon that I've heard so much about.
4.) One more thing, try to add to the plot. Make the charecters more involved in the events that are happening. Perhaps they were chosen by Arceus and the others.
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Okay thank you. I'll update the thread.
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Old 10-08-2007, 10:21 PM
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can u reserve me i really want to be in this rp the --- is so cool
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Old 10-08-2007, 10:22 PM
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can u reserve me i really want to be in this rp the --- is so cool
You may want to wait til he makes the changes. I'd like to be reserved if you do the changes.
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Old 10-08-2007, 10:35 PM
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When you fix this RP I would like to be reserved as the scientist.
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Old 10-11-2007, 11:43 AM
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Reserve me a Friend.
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Old 10-14-2007, 02:12 AM
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Wow, this looks like what would happen if Monkey Boy made an RP. No offence, nothing that couldn't be fixed with a bit of work.


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DONT EVER COMPARE ME KFC next time dont add in my name!
Takes out Torch HA HA *Eats*
Plus my RPs actully are BETTER than this sorry if im being mean
Longer Plot
and would you like to be Gary from Pokemon NO you want to be a hero too like would you like to be a person in Justuice Leauge while were all superheros NO so try fixing this not THAT bad but..... it wouldnt make it without any changes
Blue Latios even though you look like you just started RPing same we both cant make an RP well this is all the advice I can give otherwise my advice may be wrong though this looks neat
for me the problem of evreything I make is one detail *does pikachus sigh*
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Old 10-14-2007, 06:19 PM
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It would appear that getting banned Still hasn't improved your grammar. I understood less than half of that post
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Old 10-21-2007, 09:42 PM
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Okay I'm back and sorry for being so selfish. I'll be a friend instead. I fixed it a little and changed my position.
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Old 10-23-2007, 01:21 AM
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Okay I'm back and sorry for being so selfish. I'll be a friend instead. I fixed it a little and changed my position.
Fix it a bit more, and I would suggest changing it so all of the friends are main heroes.
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Old 10-23-2007, 03:25 AM
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Like a few said before me, if you fix it up a lil, I`ll reserved as a friend.
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Old 10-23-2007, 05:23 AM
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i would like to be a freind reserved. needs better application form o-o
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