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Old 07-19-2007, 06:46 AM
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Okay, I don't really have much to say, but I need people's opinion. I have an idea of a girl named Delilah. She's a twenty-one year old girl, who lives a basic life in Johto. She has Pokemon, and stuff, but one thing in her life is pretty crazy, her best friend Derek. He's annoying, but since they have so much in common, the two are best friends. The story I'm writing is Delilah's life, living her life with Derek ruining it most of the times. Is it good?
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Old 07-19-2007, 07:19 AM
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Default Re: Can it happen?

If you could make this into a comedy, then I'd definitely read it!

I love reading funny stories, and quite frankly, there aren't enough of them on here!

It sounds pretty original... =]

You could expand a little bit more on the plot, though. But this sounds good. I'd definitely read it.
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Old 07-19-2007, 05:36 PM
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Okay, I don't really have much to say, but I need people's opinion. I have an idea of a girl named Delilah. She's a twenty-one year old girl, who lives a basic life in Johto. She has Pokemon, and stuff, but one thing in her life is pretty crazy, her best friend Derek. He's annoying, but since they have so much in common, the two are best friends. The story I'm writing is Delilah's life, living her life with Derek ruining it most of the times. Is it good?
It is a good very basic idea but it needs a bit more depth, and make sure not to downplay the pokemon :). But please pikaalmighty, don't make her be able to talk to her pokemon or make them just like humans with fur-,-
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Old 07-20-2007, 12:28 AM
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Yeah like everyone else said this could be a very interesting and cute fic (kind of depends what genre this story of yours will be ). For now go to the drawing board and develop this idea a bit more and also think about how you can develop your characters too. Probably by the time you got those things figured out, it will turn out into a very good fic .

Well, good luck!
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Old 07-21-2007, 08:54 AM
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Since I LOVE comedy fics, I say go for it!

Add a plot to it and work on each character/pokemon and their personalities. A few twists, mess ups, andand problems for the character will equal into a very cute fic. :)
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Old 07-27-2007, 10:44 AM
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Good luck on it. I'll read it when it's published if I have time.
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