(comic) Legend hunting!!issue 3 is up!!

[Arceus the All powerful]

hello, heres issue 1!



issue 2:



issue 3





i will be accepting buddies the first will be in issue 4, sorry not issue 3

application form

Name:

gender:

personality:

favorite legendary:

Pokemon(up to 4)

(optianal)legendary Fakemon overworld, battle scene, and name

[camds]

Hmm...it doesnt look very good.

Before you start making a Whole collection try making your comics look a Bit Betta.
Like mine:
http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/foru...ad.php?t=49722

[Arceus the All powerful]

Originally Posted by camds

Hmm...it doesnt look very good.

Before you start making a Whole collection try making your comics look a Bit Betta.
Like mine:
http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/foru...ad.php?t=49722

gee, thanks

[da ink]

Good comic man
You accepting guest stars??

Also i would up date it a bit cause in some pages you just put a box and wrote in it

[Blaziken Knight]

umm dude, i dont see in your post that your giving credit for the overworlds, that look like there from spriters resource, and where they are shown it says give credit >.<

[Azumao]

Originally Posted by camds

Hmm...it doesnt look very good.

Before you start making a Whole collection try making your comics look a Bit Betta.
Like mine:
http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/foru...ad.php?t=49722

Don't be rude. That didn't help by saying "be like me", and it was also very discourteous of you to post a link to your comic in his comic thread.

The main problem I have with this comic is that it looks messy; like it was put together in five minutes. More effort would help a lot.

[Arceus the All powerful]

Originally Posted by Blaziken Knight

umm dude, i dont see in your post that your giving credit for the overworlds, that look like there from spriters resource, and where they are shown it says give credit >.<

yeah the person i got them from said i didnt have to give credit

[camds]

Hmm...I agree a Little more efort would help.

Also what was the Name of that Person?

[Ace327]

umm use word bubbles not just stamp the words on it and toss it aside or use Text Bars from www.spriters-resource.com/nintendo/pokemon/ and crop the page...

[Arceus the All powerful]

Originally Posted by camds

Hmm...I agree a Little more efort would help.

Also what was the Name of that Person?

his name is Jake, my real life name, NOT JACOB!!!!!!, JUST JAKE!!!!!!

[camds]

Ok thanks...