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Old 11-25-2004, 05:45 PM
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Default A new legend

No-one knew what it was, or where it had come from. All they knew was it was so powerful that it could destroy the world, the universe. And Team Rocket also knew that it would be useful to them. Very useful.
You will find out the main character later. So, what do you think about the buildup?
p.s My others will be longer, this is just the introduction.
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Old 11-25-2004, 07:09 PM
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Default Re: A new legend

Well, very short introduction. It was about one sentence long. You need details, and everything.
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Old 11-26-2004, 07:30 PM
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Default Re: A new legend

Chapter 1
Chrystalpaw was lonely. No-one would play with her and all because of this 'blessing'. It was her front right paw. It was crystalised. When she was young, it had just been her pad, but now she was older it had spread to her paw. No doubt when she was older she would have to be renamed Crystalleg. What made it worse was the fact that she was always able to hear whispering behind her. Nearly always, she would hear something that sounded like Chrystalpaw. She sighed and padded off to the forest. In the forest was her special place. The Glade.
As she entered The Glade, she let out a gasp. A tree had been wrenched out of the ground and lay in the middle of The Glade. As Chrystalpaw looked, a figure emerged. The figure of a Mew.
"Mew" Gasped Chrystalpaw.
"Yes. I have come to warn you. There is a shadow passing by. YOU are the only one who can save the world. I only have one piece of advice. See. Swing away. Belive." Replied Mew. And with that, he faded away. As soon as he had gone, Chrystalpaw jerked into life. Mew had visited her, and trusted her. She would not let Mew down!
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You're welcome to post anything about my story, but please, tell me if you like it.
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No-one's replied, so
Chapter 2
Crystalpaw went home and gathered up her things. She knew she had to go, but she would miss her mum...
But as she walked away, she heard something. A desperate cry for help! She looked around, all thoughts of home gone, and saw a Chicorita fighting... thin air? She was about to walk away, when something popped up inside her head.
"[I]See.[I]"
Suddenly, Chrystalpaw knew what she had to do. She took a deep breath, and hurled a fireball at the air. Nothing happened. She tried again, and this time, it hit something. The something appeared. It was a...
Find out in Chapter 3.
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STILL no replies...
Chapter 3
Haunter! The Haunter shot the shadow at Chrystalpaw, angry at her for interfering, but she retaliated with a Fireball. The Haunter recoiled in pain, and shot another deadly shadow. This time, it wouldn't miss...
The second word of Mew came to Chrystalpaw.
" swing away "
She relaxed completely and the shadow that had killed so many pokemon simply washed over her. It did, however touch the Chicorita. The Chicorita gasped, as a cold feelinc of dread come over her. The world went black for her. The last thing she saw was Chrystalpaw standing over her looking anctious, the Haunter fleeing... before she fainted.
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