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Creative Writing Share your fan fiction, stories, poems, essays, editorials, song lyrics, or any other related written work. All written must be your creation. Start a new thread, and keep replying to that thread as you add on more chapters. Anyone can join in at anytime.


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Old 06-13-2007, 10:40 PM
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Question: How many characters does it have to be and with or without spaces.
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Old 06-14-2007, 01:07 AM
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I decided to just write a new story. Here is my entry:

More Then One Way

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Old 06-14-2007, 01:11 AM
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And another question is, "can we simply present a URPG story, as opposed to continuing it?"
xD I wish.
I think it has to be a new story.


Edit: In case the answer's no, I already started a dif. story...
But if I want to use a URPG character, but rewrite her stories in a new style/ with lots of different events/ and more seriously, may I, for this? ^^;
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I have yet to sow green fields, yet to raise a city, yet to plant a grapevine on each chalky hill... There is so much to build and so much to be, and my love is just beginning.
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Old 06-14-2007, 06:15 AM
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I said URPG continuation stories would be ok, but I'd prefer something other than everyone entering capture stories. Last I checked, this isn't the URPG section.

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Old 06-14-2007, 07:44 PM
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I said URPG continuation stories would be ok, but I'd prefer something other than everyone entering capture stories. Last I checked, this isn't the URPG section.

~Jack~
I wasn't gonna enter a capture story. ;P I wanted to rework a URPG character/storyline without the inane captures, and make it more serious, and fan-fiction style. ^_^ T'would involve reusing a bit of old info, though rewritten.
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Old 06-14-2007, 08:06 PM
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I'm entering my fan-fic: May Norman's Crush I'll try and post two chapters a week.

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Old 06-14-2007, 08:10 PM
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Entering my Fanfiction, The Ancient Shoji Empire
http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/foru...ad.php?t=44495
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Old 06-15-2007, 01:09 AM
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Entering my fan fic.

The League Strikes Back
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Old 06-15-2007, 03:40 AM
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I'm here.

The Repentant Shadow

I've got a really good storyline in mind.
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Old 06-15-2007, 05:44 PM
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Entering my fan-fic

http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/foru...84#post1220284
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Old 06-16-2007, 05:04 AM
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Just in time, KOR...
No more entries allowed for week 1. Jack, if you can post the results on Saturday Night, it'd be appreciated.
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Old 06-17-2007, 07:30 AM
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Week 1
I enjoyed readin the first week. You guys have some good ideas. I hope you choose to continue, even if you don't win.

One of the more important aspects of reading a story, is knowing whether you actually want to keep going. Does the story hold your interest? That's why the first week I juding mostly on the ability to draw the reader to your story.

*AruseusFactor: Wish: A Corrupt Destiny
I like the idea, and I can imagine the suspense and trouble this wish may have, but it wasn't too strong of an opening.
*Diesel_34: The League Strikes Back
This was a fair beginning, with a general plot.
*FireflyK: Agony & Anquish
Maybe a little overdetailed, it slowed down the pace of the story. I like the transfer of perspective.
*KingofRohan888: Pokemon Hunter
I enjoyed this. Starting with a battle, while introducing what I think the protagonist vs antagonist.
*Knightblazer: The Hunter and the Hunted
Interesting set up, which was unique. The descriptions are very well thought out.
*Marth: The Ancient Shoji Empire
I like the way you started the story, introducing the character, the history, and suspense. I can tell you put a lot of effort into the storyline.
*Neo Pikachu: The Repentant Shadow
The main character really has some problems to face. Good introduction and story idea.
*RocketMeowth: More Then One Way
While a battle is a nice start, no other information was given. Which leads me to wonder, why are they fighting? Hmmm.

Overall, I was impressed with Marth's ability to hook me in, as well as create a unique look into the Pokemon world. Wonderfully written. +2 Points

And in second, comes Knightblazer with his one-shot song fic. It left a great impact on me, questioning why... why would a anybody do this? Descriptive enough to get the point across without looking bulky. +1 Point.

Noteable entries were KingofRohan and Neo Pikachu.

And so, we start week 2.
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Old 06-17-2007, 01:42 PM
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Well, I'm a bit late, but I suppose I'll enter during week two. We can update during the week, before Saturday, right?

Obligation

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Old 06-22-2007, 04:13 AM
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Taking a different route from here on in, I think The Repentant Shadow kind of stumbled out with the intro and I have a feeling that's where I lost the chance to earn points. Plus... a major lack in character. Marth and Knightblazer ate it up last week, making sure I don't make the same mistakes here.

Entering The Brotherhood March instead. It's a StarCraft/Pokemon crossover, mostly because I'm not doing too well waiting here for the sequel to come out. XP

And thankfully, I know Jack's played it before, so he knows what he's going to be reading. :P
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Old 06-22-2007, 06:06 AM
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Entering Dreamtime Stories: I. The Ancient Curse ^^
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