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Old 06-08-2007, 06:58 PM
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Default Pokemon Advanced

Pokemon Advanced

Chapter One- Hoenn League Tournament

“ Time for the battle. All trainers send out ONE Pokemon please!” Yelled the announcer. A tall boy with brown hair entered. He was wearing a red vest and had untied sneakers. The other boy had whitish-blondish spiky hair with a black jumpsuit and colorful patterns.

“ Ready to lose, Red?” Asked the boy with spiky hair, his name was Jimmy. “ No, I’m not, how about you?” He asked. The paved flooring was smooth and the grass platforms rose. Both trainers got in position. “ Go Swampert! Use Mud Shot!” Yelled Jimmy. A Mud-Fish Pokemon appeared on the stadium. It was dark blue with orange gills. “ Ahhh, man! Go Blaziken!” Yelled Red.

“ Haha! Type advantage! Type advantage!” Exclaimed Jimmy. “ Blaziken use Fire Spin!” Yelled Red. A long blast of water and mud washed into Blaziken immediately knocking it to the Disqualifiers Platform. “ BLAZIKEN!” Red yelled out reluctantly. “ Ha! I beat you!” Yelled Jimmy.

“ Jimmy, please head to the lobby to collect a very special prize!” The announcer declared. Jimmy walked off the grassy platform. Everybody was clapping, except Red. Jimmy walked into a metal door. With a loud SLAM! Jimmy walked in he was given a ticket immediately that said “ Full pass to New Hoenn the new Hoenn Region.” Jimmy raced out the back door leaving another SLAM!

Jimmy walked up the path with six of 386 Pokemon. He walked out of the tall building and got on his Acro Bike. Speeding through the wind, a tall boy slammed down on the front tire. “ Stop, you are a Pokemon Master, right?” He asked. “ Yes!” Jimmy yelled. “ Autograph?” Asked the boy.

Soon, Jimmy had signed millions of autographs. Leaving them behind, Jimmy walked into the building that said NHT ( New Hoenn Teleporter). Quickly, he lifted a scanner and walked through a small indent in the wall. Walking through a teleporter, he landed flat on a rough surface.
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Old 06-08-2007, 07:19 PM
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Default Re: Pokemon Advanced

Its rather short and there wasen't enough description on the stadium
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Old 06-08-2007, 07:21 PM
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Default Re: Pokemon Advanced

Yeah it is kinda short
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