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Old 06-04-2007, 08:52 PM
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Default Ace's Adventures

This is a story I play out with my pokemon cards(weird, I know). Ace has lots and lots of pokemon, but, of course, he has to choose 6 to journey with. It sometimes changes, but not much anymore. OK, first chapter.

Ace, the tall trainer, walked along the dusty path. Pidgey and Starly twirled above. Suddenly, a trainer spotted him.

"Hey!" the nice-looking girl called. "Wanna battle?"

"Sure." Ace said, tossing out his stronger of the Arcanines he had on hand.

"Go Whiscash!" the trainer said. "By the way, my names Mirina."

"My name's Ace, nice to meet you. Now, let's battle!" Ace replied. "Arcanine, use Take Down!"

Arcanine shot forward so fast, he started to glow a little, then a little more, and in a few seconds, he was surrounded by yellow beams. Arcanine hit the Whiscash with lots of force, knocking himself and the Whiscash backwards. Getting up quickly, Arcanine prepared for Whiscash's attack.

"Whiscash, use Hydro Pump!" Mirina shouted.

A huge spray of water came from Whiscash's mouth, knocking down Arcanine in tons of water. Arcanine fainted.

"Oh no, hmm, come back Arcanine, good job, go Umbreon!"


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Old 06-05-2007, 01:47 AM
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Default Re: Ace's Adventures

Not to be mean, but the battles could be longer. And more desprictive.
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Old 06-05-2007, 02:36 AM
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Its not finished, I put -Uninished- at the end of my post.
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