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Old 06-17-2008, 12:10 PM
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I liked this chapter a lot, and I didn't see any typos or anything. I really like how you described when Balian was using telepathy and Zanna and Jarre hid from him. I'll look forward to the next one!
I'm glad you liked it. I like this one too, but the next four chapters will bring an end to part one. So prepare for a showdown and many surprises!

I'm not going to spoil anything though. ^_^
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Aww, that was a cool chapter.Zanna's adorable!

Rye's nice, too. Jarre's cool. I like all thre!

I can't wait for the next part!
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I'm glad you liked it. I like this one too, but the next four chapters will bring an end to part one. So prepare for a showdown and many surprises!

I'm not going to spoil anything though. ^_^
Oooooo! This is getting exciting! YAY!

How many parts will there be?
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Old 06-18-2008, 03:25 AM
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Cami and Shadow working together? Ahahahaha!!!

That's really a laugh. Looking forward to it. xP
Actually, I think it went pretty well. Shadow taking a blow that would've killed her? I think he respects her

Yeah, and now I'm poisoned...

Yeah, Sonic and Shadow's roles/personality's have been switched. I'll explain more if you don't get what it means...


Great chapter! Poor Zanna...Rely on your determination Zanna! It will always get you through! *Pokes Sonic and Cami* Just ask them!
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Oooo, the plot thickens!
I'm glad Zanna finally got the guts to make up with Jarre. It was kind of sad that they avoided each other so badly.
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Aww, that was a cool chapter.Zanna's adorable!

Rye's nice, too. Jarre's cool. I like all thre!

I can't wait for the next part!
Thanks Entei. ^_^
The next chapter might be a while though.

@Scalec ~ I'm not sure how many parts there will be, but there should be at least three or so.

@Grassy ~ Yep, the poor Pikachu is being hunted.

Zanna: Hey! That's not fair! And what does Jarre get? MORE POPCORN! O_o;

Jarre: Yeah, rell I rike my opcorn.....*crunches*

@K_pop ~ Yes, but they didn't really avoid each other. ^_^

Thanks for your comments everyone.
The next few chapters will be good to put an unexpected twist to the end of part one.
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Now the characters from your fic are talking in the posts too!?
Dang, maybe I should make up a character just so I don't get left out. :p
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Now the characters from your fic are talking in the posts too!?
Dang, maybe I should make up a character just so I don't get left out. :p
My characters have been talking for a while. ^_^
What can I say? They're just a bunch of chatterboxes.

Zanna: And who says?

Rye: Uh...our creator...

Zanna: Don't get smart with me holey ears!

Rye: Holey ears...?O_o;

You should make up a Furret character then. And mine can talk to you. ^_^
Sound good?
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You should make up a Furret character then. And mine can talk to you. ^_^
Sound good?
Funny you should say that... I've actually been working on a story with a Furret. Don't have enough complete to the point of posting, but I guess he could go ahead and pop in.

Well then, what are you waiting for? Introduce me.

Oh, sorry. This is Chip. Tell everyone a little about yourself.

Well, I'm very strong. Yeah I suppose.
I'm very smart. You're smart alright... smart aleck.
I'm also friendly and rather likeable. You forgot modest.
Oh, and Latias_Rider was nice enough to make my portrait, up in Kris's avatar, before she even met me. ^^


Well, that's mostly right.

Huh?

He's really very nice, and I like how his character is shaping up in my story.

Oh...tear.

But this is Latias's thread, so we should get back to that.

Ooo, yeah. I need to read it.

But I already have.

Well, now I need to.

Um, okay.
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xD How's it going Chip? I'd like you to meet the gang. ^_^

Zanna: Hey Chip! Would you like to be friends? I'm always open for a new sparring partner!

Jarre: Another for the gang! Yay, happy days! I'm not always like this, I swear. O_o;

Rye: Welcome friend. But I'd keep your distance if I were you. Some things can get nasty around here.

Jarre: Talking about my breath? *opens beak wide*

Rye and Zanna: ..............O_o;

Chatterboxes....they're really quite quirky characters. ^_^
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Aww, that's cute. ^^ Everyone's getting along so well.

Waits patiently for next part*
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What's up Chip? I'm Aggranium, Pokemon extrordanaire!

I'm Sonic the hedgehog, SEGA's mascot and longtime rival of Mario...Did I mention I'm the fastest thing alive?

...I'm Shadow the hedgehog, the ultimate lifeform. Enough said.

I'm Cami, new character in SonicX: Dark Storm. Determined and spunky, I have an attitude. I'm good friends with Sonic and Shadow, and I'm gonna play an important role in Grassy's fanfiction. I also one day hope to be accepted by SEGA and become an official character...

Yipes...Cami talks a lot. What do you expect, when she's designed in my image though? At least she's good at archery...

Can't wait for a new chapter, we are all awaiting eagerly!
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Aww, that's cute. ^^ Everyone's getting along so well.

Waits patiently for next part*
Next part soon. ^_^
I just have to put my ideas down on paper.

~And they all seem rather modest, Grassy. xD
Thanks. I'll have it up soon.
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'Ello Chip! My characters casa, soo characters casa.

Josh: What? Anyways, I'm Josh, the first human to be turned into a Pokemon.

Liana: I'm Liana, LR's special character. I'm more mature then everyone else in the fic, but I can still have fun!

Be nice, Liana.

Chance: I'm Josh's Turtwig, and I am the main character of the whole story. Seriously, the story couldn't funtion without me.

Yeah right. No he's not. AND if he continues like this, I'll have The Shadow Queen make mincemeat out of him.

Would you?...EEK!



Kairi and Sora: We are Sora and Kairi, the Electric Siblings!

Gardevoir, The Shadow Queen: And I'm your worst nightmare. And yes, I would make mincemeat out of you!

*Faints*

They get along so well!
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Yeah...they really get along.

Aw well.
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