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Old 02-23-2007, 08:24 PM
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Default Yu-Gi-Oh: The Sacred Realm

Chapter Index:


Prolouge: The Sacred Realm
Chapter 1:

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Old 02-23-2007, 08:36 PM
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Default Re: Yu-Gi-Oh: The Sacred Realm

Prolouge:
The Sacred Realm

Cannon Soilder roamed the halls of Kynfun Palace. A place in the world of Duel Monsters, Kynfun Palace was ruled by the Duel Monsters of Light, and anything else but Dark. The Dark creatures constantly prepared to attack the Palace, and try to destroy it at all costs. Cannon Soilder was the Head Guard, and he had been informed that a Dark Monster was in the Palace. Two Two-Headed T-Rex's stood behind the mettalic warrior, and he signalled for them to check the corridor ahead. They marched forward, and a piercing screech filled the air as one was pierced with a thrown knife. It slumbered, then got up again, it's second head picking up the knife off the floor. Suddenky, the other was hit, and soon Sanwitch reared the corner, only to run into Element Dragon. The giant beast roared at the small creature, before being thrown aside into the wall. Cannon Soilder was next. He charged his gun, but it was too late. Sanwitch used her wand to throw him at the wall, and ran off. He laid there, waiting. The prophecy would come true, very soon.
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Old 03-16-2007, 10:57 PM
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Lightbulb Re: Yu-Gi-Oh: The Sacred Realm

I think this story is O.K. You could spend a little more time adding detail to the prologue. It's good... but it could be better.
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Old 03-16-2007, 11:01 PM
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Default Re: Yu-Gi-Oh: The Sacred Realm

Nice use of both knowlage and imagination. Although many yu-gi-oh anime series use the cards as real creatures fighting a war, so try new ideas.

Maybe try to use more detail and describe stuff.
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Old 05-28-2007, 04:11 AM
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Default Re: Yu-Gi-Oh: The Sacred Realm

I really don't know what to say just a prolouge???? add more.
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Old 05-28-2007, 04:50 AM
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Default Re: Yu-Gi-Oh: The Sacred Realm

Don't listen to these people. I'm a HUGE Yu-Gi-Oh! fan (Second best Duelist in my town) and I think it's a great prolouge!
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Old 05-31-2007, 02:39 AM
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Tai sky there not saying it's bad. What they are saying it could be better. (But they're saying its good)
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