Originally Posted by TheStoneRegisteel
Cool, i'm creating the first Review topic in the history of this thread. Maybe we should sticky a Review main area, and there all the review areas could be linked, if someone's searching for a certain review area for a fic.
I would like to get my Eternity Bound reviwed please. It's a Pokemon Fan-fic about Shadow Pokemon.
Mmm. I read through it a little quickly, but I caught a few things you might want to fix:
1. Double space after each person/PokÚmon's/whatever's phrase when they are talking.
2. That intro about the Shadow PokÚmon situation thing seemed kinda terse. I wish there was more to it. =|
I'll say more stuff when there's more chapters.