Ideas and Premises

[Shiny Loser]

I was just wondering, has anybody written about Zowayix and his life with a glitchy pokemon? You know, the Skeleton Missingno that shows up when you have Zowayix as a name? It was just an idea i got recently..

[Deathspector]

Originally Posted by Shiny Loser

I was just wondering, has anybody written about Zowayix and his life with a glitchy pokemon? You know, the Skeleton Missingno that shows up when you have Zowayix as a name? It was just an idea i got recently..

There have been MissingNo stories. Infact, there was a barrage of them sometime back, none of which really got off to a start. But if you do it well without using the cliched capture if MissingNo (you know, the same one as they way you had to capture it in the game – people usually used a Charizard here) then I'm sure you'll do well

Deathspector

[pixlepix]

i got a idia for a story in wich tom of fortee city gets sucked in to misterous regon my a abra but the regon has all sort of gliches will he be able to become the champion of the leage and discover the power hidden in the 2 orbs

[Shiny Loser]

what a ripoff of my Unown idea...

[pixlepix]

Originally Posted by Shiny Loser

what a ripoff of my Unown idea...

this does not have anything to do with unknowns

[Neo Emolga]

Originally Posted by pixlepix

this does not have anything to do with unknowns

It's still very similar...

And I recommend improving your writing before trying to take on another story...

[LordZangoose]

*gasps*, but Neo, why would anyone want to accept good advice and actually improve? The mere thought is ridiculous. I mean, that's something only a good author would do.

[Shiny Loser]

Originally Posted by LordZangoose

*gasps*, but Neo, why would anyone want to accept good advice and actually improve? The mere thought is ridiculous. I mean, that's something only a good author would do.

Not only that, that's only something someone with a school record of over kindergarten would do!!

[pixlepix]

Originally Posted by Neo Pikachu

It's still very similar...

And I recommend improving your writing before trying to take on another story...

it is digla and pilga that are causeing the trouble (first i thought it would be missingo)

[Deathspector]

Originally Posted by pixlepix

it is digla and pilga that are causeing the trouble (first i thought it would be missingo)

And, LZ, whoever did that would have to actually read the advice, wouldn't they?

Deathspector

[pixlepix]

Originally Posted by Deathspector

And, LZ, whoever did that would have to actually read the advice, wouldn't they?

Deathspector

what advice are you talking about and this is going to end up in a flame war

[Neo Emolga]

Originally Posted by pixlepix

what advice are you talking about and this is going to end up in a flame war

Phew, clear proof he hasn't...

Look at our past posts in your fics and your preview threads. The ones that tell you what's wrong with your story. THAT advice. Read the guide, fix your grammar, your spelling, your layout, the size, detail, and plot. We've told this to you dozens of times, but you keep ignoring it. Sorry, but if you continue making very poor quality fan fictions, I'll just keep locking them until you do heed the advice.

Also, may I ask you what goals you're trying to achieve with your story? Is it to improve your writing, or allow others to enjoy it? I'm interested to know, since if you really want to achieve that goal, you're going to need to improve your writing here and now.

[LordZangoose]

Originally Posted by pixlepix

what advice are you talking about and this is going to end up in a flame war

It pretty much is a flame war already since you attempt to argue and make sarcastic comments towards me, and then we respond, although our posts are actually useful. Neo, is there any way for him to have the permission of creating threads in the Fanfiction section taken away?

[pixlepix]

Originally Posted by Neo Pikachu

Phew, clear proof he hasn't...

Look at our past posts in your fics and your preview threads. The ones that tell you what's wrong with your story. THAT advice. Read the guide, fix your grammar, your spelling, your layout, the size, detail, and plot. We've told this to you dozens of times, but you keep ignoring it. Sorry, but if you continue making very poor quality fan fictions, I'll just keep locking them until you do heed the advice.

Also, may I ask you what goals you're trying to achieve with your story? Is it to improve your writing, or allow others to enjoy it? I'm interested to know, since if you really want to achieve that goal, you're going to need to improve your writing here and now.

ok my goal is to have something to do well i guess i will just write it on paper the olny fanfic i wanted to do so i quit fanfic

[Scourge of Amaranth]

Err... I'm new here, and I have a fic I've been posting on several sites. It's called 'Administration of a Legend.' http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/foru...ad.php?t=35361

It's set quite awhile after the current Pokemon movies/games/series. By that time, Magma, Aqua, and Rocket have migrated to a new continent. Magma and Aqua had long since given up their environmentalist views; now they just use them for cover, so they attract less attention from the authorities. Magma and Aqua participate in more... surreptitious thefts/sabotages/etc, and give Rocket the credit. Rocket happily accepts said credit, and most people focus on them, ignoring Magma and Aqua.

I've implemented quite a few new technologies, such as Vitality Aureoles, which are used to help prevent Pokemon deaths in battle. They're explained in detail in the fic. There are also new types of Pokeballs, etc.

So, we've got several interconnected stories going on at once. On the one hand, we have the Black Lucario, or, Jacob, an ambitious young man who's grown up on the streets. On the other side of the spectrum--or, possibly a different part of the same side--we have Nealan, (Neal) the second in command of Magma.

A businessman has been building a huge luxury hotel. It's an architectural feat; fifty floors, thousands of rooms, brand new battle technology, the works. The businessman is throwing a large, year long tournament at his new hotel, the Chrysafi. Said businessman is really our young friend Jacob, who has a mastermind plan that only started with the hotel. Or, technically, it didn't start with the hotel... but that's for another story. (which I may or may not write)