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01-30-2007, 01:39 AM
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CEG's poems!
Why did you do this to me?
Why can't you see?
What did you want to acheive?
Why did you make us leave?
I'm trapped in my mind.
You left us behind.
You said this was going to last forever.
Maybe to you it seemed like for the better.
Why did you lie?
Inside, I'm starting to cry....
How could you end it?
Our adventures are over?
Because days come and go...
But my feelings for you are forever!
Trapped in my head, nowhere to go.
Never did I think it would be such a blow.
I guess it is true.
Even though it was out of the blue...
The journey is truly over.
Um, yeah since pokezone closed, writing makes me feel better. T_T
Left out, Pushed back
How can anybody stand that?
Kicked aside, Shoved away
I don't think it is Okay.
It's true, everybody suffers.
Can't we just love one another?
Sometimes you are made to begin again.
Start from scatch, not from the end?
It's confusing, It's frustrating.
Aren't you done with the waiting?
You trained hard to acheive your goals,
Now you are like an empty bowl?
You made your dreams come alive,
Now your hopes are shoved aside.
It seems like no big deal.
But when you are the one trying to heal,
Is it really fair?
Yay, another one.
Last edited by Hakken; 01-31-2007 at 12:58 AM.
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01-30-2007, 01:43 AM
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Re: Um, depressing poem?
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Originally Posted by Crystal_Eon_Guardian
Why did you do this to me?
Why can't you see?
What did you want to acheive?
Why did you make us leave?
I'm trapped in my mind.
You left us behind.
You said this was going to last forever.
Maybe to you it seemed like for the better.
Why did you lie?
Inside, I'm starting to cry....
How could you end it?
Our adventures are over?
Because days come and go...
But my feelings for you are forever!
Trapped in my head, nowhere to go.
Never did I think it would be such a blow.
I guess it is true.
Even though it was out of the blue...
The journey is truly over.
Um, yeah since pokezone closed, writing makes me feel better. T_T
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i didnt lie. and scratch out the last line. then you have it sortof right.
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01-30-2007, 01:51 AM
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Re: Um, depressing poem?
It's just a poem. Not saying it's true.
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01-30-2007, 01:55 AM
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Re: Um, depressing poem?
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Originally Posted by Crystal_Eon_Guardian
It's just a poem. Not saying it's true.
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oh, ok, otherwise its good. but please take out your mood. in your sig, please?
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01-30-2007, 01:59 AM
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Re: Um, depressing poem?
;_; Not until I stop crying like a maniac.
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01-30-2007, 02:26 AM
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Re: Um, depressing poem?
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Originally Posted by Crystal_Eon_Guardian
;_; Not until I stop crying like a maniac.
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I loved that poem. ^^ Your talented. (Better than me. >>)
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01-30-2007, 11:16 AM
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Re: Um, depressing poem?
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I loved that poem. ^^ Your talented. (Better than me. >>)
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? I am? Mabey I'll post some more stuff here then, when I get home. I have one about Garaa. >.>
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01-30-2007, 11:34 AM
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Re: Um, depressing poem?
You wrote a 'depressing' poem over a site closing? Ooookay...it was well written though.
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01-30-2007, 07:06 PM
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Re: Um, depressing poem?
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Originally Posted by Aiikari
You wrote a 'depressing' poem over a site closing? Ooookay...it was well written though.
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I changed the title because it didn't make any sense. ^^; Um, i'll get another one soon. I guess.
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01-30-2007, 08:05 PM
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Re: Um, depressing poem?
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Originally Posted by Crystal_Eon_Guardian
I changed the title because it didn't make any sense. ^^; Um, i'll get another one soon. I guess.
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your sig, why wont you stop crying.?
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01-30-2007, 08:43 PM
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Re: Um, depressing poem?
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your sig, why wont you stop crying.? 
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T.T I'm still slightly.... Emotionally withdrawn, let's put it.
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01-31-2007, 12:58 AM
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Re: Um, depressing poem?
Left out, Pushed back
How can anybody stand that?
Kicked aside, Shoved away
I don't think it is Okay.
It's true, everybody suffers.
Can't we just love one another?
Sometimes you are made to begin again.
Start from scatch, not from the end?
It's confusing, It's frustrating.
Aren't you done with the waiting?
You trained hard to acheive your goals,
Now you are like an empty bowl?
You made your dreams come alive,
Now your hopes are shoved aside.
It seems like no big deal.
But when you are the one trying to heal,
Is it really fair?
Sorry for 2x post BTW. Um, another one.
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