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Old 06-30-2008, 10:23 PM
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Chapter 9: Under Fire is up. And two days after I posted Chapter 8: Better Late Than Never! I think I deserve a pat on the back ;D.

Nazo should be making his pwnsome appearance in Chapter 10: Mysteries and Monstrosities, alongside with the fusion CycloneSlash Cami. With any luck, Sonic will be healed by then (Shadow, probably not).

Feel free to ask about the story, I don't mind.

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Old 07-05-2008, 08:57 PM
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Hello peoples ^^

I've started writing a new fanfic, and want to know what you all think. There's only the prologue at the moment, but if people like it, I'll write more. Heck, I'm starting on a new chapter write now!

So if you could all tell me what you think, that'd be great! ^^

The link is here: http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/foru...ad.php?t=85458
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Old 07-06-2008, 12:23 AM
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What hoe? A new chapter is up!
Chapter 13: Breaking Point, where we officially learn Sonic is insane 0.o'

I've been getting new chapters up every two days...

Working on Chapter 14: Separation Anxieties, hopefully will be up Monday, although I may be seeing Indiana Jones...Hmm...
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Old 07-06-2008, 02:38 PM
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The newest chapter of The Untold Season is up, tell me what y'all think :)
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Old 07-07-2008, 02:33 AM
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I posted a short story called "Blood on the Paper". It's the pilot to a series I've been thinking of since I was in 3rd grade. I alredy wrote the sequel, but I decided not to post it until I have some opinions about the story. PLEASE GIVE YOUR OPINION.
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Old 07-19-2008, 06:57 PM
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I'm writing a fic called the Dragon Wars.
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Old 07-27-2008, 06:38 PM
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I'll will be writing a non Snake-related story called "Billy". It will be about a doll.
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Old 07-28-2008, 02:07 AM
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Well, the sequel to New Moon has a working title. It shall now be known (tentativily) as Dawn of Doom. Here is my planned schedule-

SonicX: Dark Storm (Current)
SonicX: New Moon
Aggranium: Rise of the Possessor
SonicX: Dawn of Doom (Working title)

On other words, fans of Dark Storm will not have to worry about running out of Sonic goodness.

Another announcement, Dark Storm now has a Table of Contents...I finally got off my lazy bum ^.^
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Old 08-01-2008, 03:11 PM
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Just put up my Fan Fic, Halo:Covenant Strike, if anyone's interested.
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Old 09-17-2008, 08:03 PM
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*sigh* Finally, a new post here...

I made a fanfic called "The Random Story (link here)". Now, I do NOT want it to end up like my other crappy chapter stories, which all ended on the first chapter due to lack of comments. NOW, if somebody besides Galactic Grunt would care enough to read and give whatever constructive criticism on it they want, I'll put the next chapter up. But if you don't, I'll be a sad Waddle Dee. 3:

So READ!!!!! If you want.
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Old 09-25-2008, 05:56 PM
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I'm possibly making a story about VIVI ORUNITIA! (and for those who hate vivicide, you masy wanna steer clear of this) It's about the world thast vivi goes to after he stopped. And how it's pummeling into chaos. (eido-angers and eidolices) I might ask for help. I'd want to get together with people for this.
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Hey Everyone!
I've posted my story called "Shadow Quest," please tell me what to improve on or just leave comments. (If you want to)
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I decided to put up the novel I'm writing to get feedback. It's well into the writing process (what's posted is a very small amount) and I'll update it very often. I'm just looking for a grade on structure. Not grammar, but how the story flows, and how it feels to read.

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Old 01-24-2009, 11:48 AM
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I've been writing a fanfic for some time now....

Actually, screw that, it's just a fiction. Everything in it is completely made up. Is it still okay to post it here?
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Old 01-29-2009, 10:36 PM
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I've updated "Fade" with a ton of new entries (At least 10). And with reviews like these, how can anyone refuse to read it?

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It's very original, it's a very original plot, and I hope you continue the feel of the first installment with the rest of them.

This is an amazing opening line, it amazes me now, actually. It's not descriptive, it's not detailed, it's Shauns thoughts, something we don't see much of in any story now-a-days. I don't really have much to say about the story, other than I will be looking forward to futhur installments.
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I understand the novel probably more than anyone else, and it's incredibly well-described and well written. Keep up the good work.
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Ugh, how could I have possibly missed this!? It's just lovely, Charbok, and AMAZING for a first fiction. You take advantage of first-person in a very fresh, intuitive way, not to mention that the protagonist seems like a REALLY deep thinker, an inquiring fellow. And that's always good. I'm really enjoying this.

Keep up the good work!
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I've never read anything more brilliant..and well, as mind-blowing as your story, Charbok. A pure stroke of genius. You must become an author and publish this book! Well, when your finished, of course. Do you think you could e-mail it to me so I can print it out? So I can read it whenever I'm bored? xD Just private message me. I love it! -faints-
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