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Old 07-05-2004, 08:22 PM
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Welcome to WAR Creative Writing.

Here, post your poems, short stories and songs each week, according to the theme. The two best poems win a point for their teams. Please include your team in your post (with the poem).

Week 1 Theme: Chaos [All that have submitted poems, please resubmit.]

[Past Winners]
Week 1 (Theme: Chaos)
- Saya, of Team Tri-Blade, for her poem, "Chaos"
- Fair, of Team Elite, for his short story, "Midnight"

Week 2 (Theme: Love)
- mLugia, of Team Nox, for his short story, Untitled
- Jack, of Team Elite, for his short story and poem, Untitled

Week 3 (Theme: Loss)
- Duke, of Team Flora, for his poem, "The Home Front"
- Neo Pikachu, of Team Nox, for his poem, "One Among Many"

[Hall of Fame]
Duke - 1 Point
Neo Pikachu - 1 Point
mLugia - 1 Point
Jack - 1 Point
Fair - 1 Point
Saya - 1 Point

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Old 07-05-2004, 08:35 PM
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Okay, I'll post it again. =/

Chaos' Glimpse

The Chaos shares it's destruction with everyone
It's evilness and destruction allows no fun
Love and tranquility go away
While hate and turmoil will stay

Why does Chaos have to stay this near?
I want everything nice to be dear
I don't want all of this Chaos stuff
I might look like it but I'm not that tough

Right now my purpouse is as clear as mud
It seems like my life is one big dud
There is no purpouse for the light anymore
The light had a purpouse...... before

But now there is nothing we can do or try
Chaos will come, and light will die....
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Old 07-05-2004, 10:16 PM
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Chaos, prison of the damned.

Land where fire has its homes
Darkened pads where evil roams
Scorching eyes seen everywhere
Do nothing more then just stare
Land of waste, doom and cries
Full of delusion and much lies
No more hope, has this land
Where great and good simply can’t
Behold the thrown of the evil gods
Where growth of live only rots
Is this the place we awakened in
Telling us we must now win
Is this our future, our destined path
Are we meant to defeat evils wrath…


- Ruben V.
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Old 07-05-2004, 11:01 PM
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The Song of Destruction.


Blood in pools spread around on the ground.
Bullets soaring though the town.
Awful sounds screaming in the night.
The wind tells of a deadly plight.
...
Screams of terror, explosions and more.

...

A shrieking whistling sound is heard
Everything stops, there is not a word.

...

A death-head soars towards the battle,
The only sound now is the noise of nearby cattle.

...

The mother of all explosions exclaims,
All die without a trace of pain.

...

War is a terrible thing,
Its the song of death, hear it sing.

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Old 07-05-2004, 11:30 PM
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I am part of Team Tri-Blade! IO hope to actually win some points!
Chaos

Gina pinched Tim,
And Tim pinched Sarah,
Sarah hit Lynn,
Who screamed, “Rutabaga!”

Lynn punched Mike,
Who then kicked Foss.
Foss scratched Ike,
Who yelled, “Chaos!”

Ike yelled at Matt,
Who screamed right back.
Lori ran over,
And trampled him flat.

Lori flicked Jennifer,
And Jennifer hit Sam,
Who told he was a cougher,
And didn’t like SPAM.

Nora complained,
Loud above the group,
That chaos was plain
So go jump a hoop!

Then above the din,
Came a knock on the door,
And who should come in,
But Mr. Shulor!

The children all yelled
And ran to their seats.,
‘Cause Mr. Shulor held
The teacher’s receipts!

“What’s going on here?”
He asked with a scowl.
“You all look so queer,
With eyes like owls!”

So he turned and he left,
And all the children, with sauce,
Grinned at the theft,
Of mere chaos
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Old 07-05-2004, 11:50 PM
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alrighty then, team nox

real quickly i would like to make it known that the hel mentioned in this poem is not the christian hell, and is therefore not misspelled so... yeah. If you really want to know what some of the scheiss here means pm me and i might tell you. : P


The Burden

The day begins anew,
night swallowed by azure rays.
A pale dogs crazy eye hung
in the night sky...
replaced by day.
entropy in the streets,
Feelings of hope...incredulity,
nary but a stage backdrop.

She must bear the burden,
weight of atlas upon her shoulder.
Fellowship with the serpent of midgard,
and fenrir gives her comfort.
she finds solace in hel,
but must walk the streets.
her burden in tarry.

She must bear the burden,
her crusade ends in death.
The bells of the church,
what a pandemonius sound they make
marking the end.
The final stand of valhalla.

Thunder heads gather in company,
the reds and the oranges of daybreak ,
gone with the setting of the sun,
bleak passages of night.
Odin ordained in black shades,
ragnorok released from her bosom.

How many tears have been shed?
How many lives snuffed out?
Candles erased from existence with a puff of breath.

Chaos in its purest form,
hidden in peace, hope, prosperity.
The mischief maker lying in wait

And so as it was told,
as it often does,
disorder reigns supreme.
Illogicical prejudices rule the lives of men,
but are swept aside, as the hand of god draws nearer.

Cant we give ourselves one more chance?
Or is it too late to change?
Too late to turn the chaos,
too late to stop an inevitability...
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Old 07-07-2004, 12:45 AM
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Where the Light Shines No More

Where the light shines no more
And the spirits of those had died
When time becomes meaningless
And Love has never survied

I walked upon a path of grief
Of Destiny, of hope, of Fear
There were no others beside my feet
There were no one else as near

War! Utter Chaos!
The Extreme Problems of the day
No rules, no glory, no pattern
Simply death and revenge to pay!

No life, no glory, no help, no love
To send them off to a place far off
Only to die for no purpose at all
What foolishness, I scoff

And in those twisted fields of dirt
Panic and destruction reign
The King of Darkness and The Queen of Fear
Shall bestow the horror of pain

Chaos...

Chaos is the battlefield
Chaos are the foes
Chaos are the dangers
Chaos is the war

Dare I weep for my fallen comrades
Dare I weep for my fallen enemies
Dare I weep for the children I slayed
Dare I weep for the innocence I gave

Forgive me Mother, Father, Sister, Brother!
I did not know the truth
I did not see the pattern before me
For in war, there is no pattern...

Only chaos...
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Old 07-07-2004, 04:00 AM
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Chaos

It was a blur.
The heart beats again.
Music pauses on the slur.
It was the bane.

The radio ran with the beats,
with the heart racing again.
Hummings within the brain
allows one to see strange feats.

I would like to sigh again,
while my heart stops again.
It is another try,
for me to leave and die.

I cannot sleep.
My mind is in chaos.
I am now in deep,
deep within the recesses of chaos.

Who am I?
No answer.
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Old 07-07-2004, 09:08 AM
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I was, in all my childhood, never confused. Incomprehensive? Maybe. Disoriented? Sometimes. But never, truly, confused. Not until that fateful afternoon.

It was about 3 o'clock. It was a normal day; I was on my way home from school, kicking the trash on the ground as I trudged across the pavement. My books weighed down heavily on my frail shoulder blades, but time had given me enough endurance for me to make it to my house without collapsing...or so I thought.

I had just turned the corner of the public library, when...it happened. Some traffic stopped; other vehicles kept going; all of them crashed. Faces...casual, innocent faces, turned to the darkened skies at what they soon realized was far beyond a mere thunderstorm.

You could have stretched the moment of anticipation, that air of uncertainty, accompanied by the hushes and murmers of everyone in the square that day, for an infinite amount of time. The event that followed, however, happened in an instant.

The large metallic spheroid came down fast, plowing into the entourage of demolished automobiles like a rock being thrust into a anthill. The asphault was literally torn apart, and the crater that followed spread open in an eccentric formation of destructive celerity.

Thrown off my feat from the very impact of the thing, I flew into a nearby mailbox, which I had to scramble away from as it promptly succumbed to assimilation with the now overbearing pile of debris, a compound of raw neighborhood that had collected in as little as seconds.

I hadn't even begun to run when the sphere--opened up. I was already shaking uncontrolably at the time, but I completely lost all feeling when I saw the alien. Yes, that's right: the alien. Forget everything you've ever seen on TV, this was the real thing. It stood about 7 feet tall, was a beige-gray color, had an arched backbone and webbed claws jointing out of metallic limbs connected to its torso. Its legs were oddly arranged, and extremely muscular. It was like a lizard or a bird trying to emulate a human. Whatever it was, it didn't look friendly, and it wasn't, either. Armed, it exited the pod and proceeded in mass destruction. Hundreds more followed suit.

Panic now. People ran. Holes were shot in buildings by whatever weapons the aliens were wielding. I dropped my heavy bookbag and jolted as fast as my ten-year old legs could carry me.

My mind disturbed; my purpose undefined...I didn't know where to go and half the time the rubble didn't let me go anywhere...screams, implosions, car alarms, water jetting out of broken fire hydrants...I quickly found an ally and scrambled to the darkest corner of it I could find--I hid. I hid there for the whole rest of the afternoon, covering my eyes sometimes, and being mortified by the alien acid-spit that was spewn upon civilians when I opened them.

I lived through it. Armed forces were dispatched and somehow, miraculously, the catastrophy was brought to an end...

I am among the few who remember that fateful afternoon. Most of the witnesses had their memories erased by special machines, and as comforting a thought it is to be able to forget the madness I've seen, I was too scared and stubborn then to want to cooperate with adults. When asked about it I simply said I had been sleeping the whole time. The truth was, I would not sleep again for a long time to come. They had lied to me when explaining what happened; saying someone had gotten into a car accident...But I knew that wasn't what it was. What was it, then, exactly? To this day, haven't the faintest idea--but in a word: it was chaos.

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Team Nox

Lost and Far Away Minds


I lost my two best friends today.
The pain and hatred never goes away.
They would have spent their time in a better way
If they knew there was something left that day.
My God, after all we’ve endured we’re still so behind
We’ve abandoned our brotherhood and we’ve lost our minds.

James is in the hospital now, and Freddy is out cold.
Nathan died in his sleep is what I was always told…
Craig fell and died just before the machine gun nest.
And today we laid another fifty good boys to rest…

I see the sky grow gray and the clouds shroud the sun.
I look at the fallen bodies and realize no one ever won.
I’ve seen young men buried by the digger.
All because we pointed and pulled a trigger.
We watched with our eyes as the young boys fell,
As we embarked on the one great crusade to Hell.

Dear God, where on Earth are we?
I’ve seen nothing but fire as far as I can see.
I’m one battle short of losing my humanity,
In this one vast, endless field of such futility.

Home. Home. I want to see my wife.
Before the enemy decides to take my life.
What I wouldn’t do to give her one last kiss?
What did I ever do to deserve this?
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The Chaos of my Domain

The colors of the blackened sky,
The cheering of the wind,
The trees that tower oh so high,
The sinners that have sinned.

The flames that bathe the tortured ground,
The pouring rain that falls,
The silence of the very end,
The chaos that is found.

All the signs of endless bliss,
And yet no happiness around,
The demon's breathing on my neck,
That piercing harmful sound.

All the sings of endless chaos,
When nothing does remain,
And this will be the chaos...

The Chaos of my Domain.
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Old 07-09-2004, 04:39 PM
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Chaos

Oh... When Chaos comes for you!
Dont Feel Blue!
Chaos can be entertaining
Or it can be shmentertaining
And that's not even a word!
And you're a nerd! Dadadada!

Oh... Oh... Oh.....

Chaos is very fun!
I bet it would be tasty wrapped in a bun!

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There's my song about chaos ^

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Midnight


[America]
"Good evening, I apologize for breaking into your normally scheduled programming, but this is urgent. Channel 4 news has just heard from a credible astronomer that an asteroid will collide with Earth in a matter of hours. When it does, our planet will have no chance of survival. WE'RE ALL GONNA DIE!"

[Mexico]
"Buenas noches, interrumpimos nuestra transmición regular para brindarles está urgente noticia. El canal 8 de mexico ha reportado lo siguiente: Un famoso astromono ha predicho que un asteroide collisionara con la Tierra en pocas horas. Al hacerlo, toda la vida del planeta se extinguira. !TODOS VAMOS A MORIR!"

[Russia]
Добрый вечер, прошу прощения для того, чтобы врываться в ваше обычно намечаемое программирование, но это срочно. Канал 11 новостей только что получили известие от вероятного астронома, что астероид столкнется с Землей в течение часов. Когда это делает, наша планета не будет иметь никакого шанса на выживание. МЫ ВСЕ СОБИРАЕМСЯ УМИРАТЬ!

[Germany]
Guten Abend entschuldige mich ich für Brechen in Ihres normalerweise hat geplant Programmierung, aber dies ist dringend. Kanal 3 Nachrichten haben nur von einem glaubwürdigen Astronomen gehört, daß ein Asteroid mit Erde in einer Frage der Stunden kollidieren wird. Wenn es macht, wird unser Planet keine Chance des Überlebens haben. WIR SIND STERBEN ALLE GONNA!

[France]
Buona sera, chiedo scusa per irrompere nel suo programmare normalmente pianificato, ma questo è urgente. Il canale 6 notizie ha appena sentito da un astronomo di credible che un asteroid si scontrerà con la Terra in una questione di ore. Quando fa, il nostro planet non avrà probabilitá di sopravvivenza. SIAMO TUTTO IL GONNA MUORE!

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It started slowly, at first. In prehistoric times, it might not have happened at all. But due to the modern marvel known as television and the fact that bad news always travels fast, it did happen.

The news made it's way around the world, and the silence of a would-be calm April day was shattered as people took to the streets in large crowds. Screaming for some kind of protection, some kind of answer. Riots started breaking out - it seemed that many former law abiding citizens decided this would be a good time to try out looting before they died. Underground buildings were broken into as the panicked people tried to take cover, but it was all just a waste of their time. They would have been better off just joining the looters. The police couldn't stop any of this because, well, they were looting too. Any hope of order was lost in the confusion.

But not everybody was panicking. No, some people decided to just stay in their homes and take it easy. Some even went back to bed. These people were the smart ones. These people had calendars. These people knew that the day was the first of April, and they definitely weren't fools.

They caught on and got the joke. Did you?
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Old 07-10-2004, 11:31 PM
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Creative Writing Results - Week #1 - Chaos

Many good poems, short stories and songs were entered this week. They all reflected the theme, Chaos, and everyone had different sights. Some talked about war, others about aliens, and even a joke about April fools. But they all had the same common point.

There were four or five entries that stood out this week, and I had to only pick two winners. It was a very, very difficult task, but here are the two winners:

- Saya, of Team Tri-Blade, for her poem simply titled "Chaos". It had a fun feel to it, even with the topic, and I liked how she did with it.

- Fair, of Team Elite, for his short story, "Midnight". It had sort of a 'twist' ending to it, and I found it very amusing.

Good job both of you! Also, there were some others than had good entries that I think deserve to be mentioned: Neo Pikachu, for "Lost and Far Away Minds", E8 for his short story with no title, and Harry, for his poem "Where the light shines no more." Everyone did a good job, entirely, and it was a very hard choice to make.

Also; notice: ALWAYS INCLUDE YOUR TEAM. There were a few entries with no team name included and had they had won, it would have been difficult to reward points.

The theme for week two is: "Love". I'm sappy for romance, 'kay?
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Old 07-11-2004, 02:53 PM
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Love
By Vex, of Team Trainer
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How can such a little thing
Cause such confusion
When it seems such a simple thing
Not some strange infusion

Love is a complicated way
Of saying thank you
Love is just a word away
From an excuse to stab you

If you should underestimate
Then you will pay the price
For love is not always
Sugar and all things nice

You'll find it comes with just a glance
When she looks your way
But if you give it half a chance
You'll find it blows away

Love is a complicated way
Of saying thank you
Love is just a word away
From an excuse to stab you

It would be a fool who said
You can never have too much
And he would pay for what he said
Love didn't like him much

Treat it with respect and you'll see
The lightest side of life
Nurture the words "you and me"
And you may find your wife

Love is a complicated way
Of saying thank you
Love is just a word away
From an excuse to stab you
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