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Creative Writing Share your fan fiction, stories, poems, essays, editorials, song lyrics, or any other related written work. All written must be your creation. Start a new thread, and keep replying to that thread as you add on more chapters. Anyone can join in at anytime.


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Old 11-24-2006, 03:27 AM
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Default Re: Pokemon UA!: Ultimate Annihilation

Thanks alot.
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Old 11-24-2006, 08:59 AM
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Awesome job so far! I forgot to mention Marina's hair is shoulder length.

There's also a small device on her belt thats called a PHPC, short for Portable Holographic PC. It's about the size of a Pokenav, but has all the functions of a pokedex, a PC, and a pokenav. Whats more? it can store unlimited pokemon & items (gee, sure could use something like that in real life...). Anyway it works the same way a regular Pokemon Center PC would work in the games, but when you're withdrawing things, it shows the item in holographics, then it solidifies, allowing you to grab it. When you're putting things back in there, it goes from a solid to a holographic. Pretty much the exact opposite. Basically it stores unlimited necessities & accessories, anything from A-Z that has to do with pokemon. that's alot o' stuff.

But, there's a secret she's probably gonna have to tell, (please reveal this at what you deem is the appropriate time). Marina's a former Team Snagem member, but she quit when she realized what was happening to the Pokemon she snagged. She still has the snag machine she stole when she took off. It's a black glove on her right hand that has some marks on it like Kyogre has.

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http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kyogre

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Old 11-24-2006, 02:20 PM
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You didn't forget the shoulder length part at all, but you did forget that other stuff. I'll make sure that she uses it during the story. Angel comes in this chapter.

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Old 11-24-2006, 05:19 PM
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Nice... I wasn't expecting Tori to come in until chapter three, but this works too. You're a pretty talented writer, I'll tell you that much. Keep it up!
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Old 11-24-2006, 05:21 PM
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Thanks. Your characters actually helped my story, lol. Chapter3. I'm writing it now.
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Old 11-24-2006, 06:44 PM
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you're doing awsome so far. you got Persian and Surge's personality to the dot. just don't forget about they're special abilitiyes. ya know, how Surge has blue eyes, the scar on his right eye, and can combine fire and ice and Persian's Partner Rocovery.
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Old 11-24-2006, 06:45 PM
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How could I?
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Old 11-24-2006, 08:20 PM
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I would hope not. They're awesome!
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Old 11-24-2006, 08:34 PM
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CHAPTER 3 & 4 ARE ALMOST DONE! I did both of them this time, lol.
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Old 11-24-2006, 09:39 PM
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yay! I can't wait!
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Old 11-24-2006, 10:52 PM
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CHAPTER #3-Team Attack Part1-Pokemon

" Huh? Who are you guys? Asked Charmander and Pikachu.

" No! Surge roared. " The question is who are you? And why do ya need to know? Surge growled.

" Calm down Surge. I don't think they're enemies at all. Persian said with a smile. " I'm Persian, and we have trainers. This tough blockhead overhere is Surge, and as you can see. he's a Houndoom.

" I think they can see Persian. Surge said.

" So if you have a trainer. Why isn't she here with you? Pikachu asked.

" Thats because.....Persian tried to say, but got rudely interupted by Surge.

" I'm handling this one. Thats because we got separated from her. Team Rocket was chasing after us three, but then there was an explosion. Thats all we remember.

" So are you usually in this attitude? Charmander asked Surge.

" Ewe...you bite. Said Surge with a grin. " But I crunch, he said trying to scare Charmander.

" Well..since we all got separated from our trainers, how about we make up a team. To reunite with our trainers and to rescue the helpless Pokemon. pikachu suggested.

" So um...surge! How does your trainer look? Asked Charmander.

" Are you sure your not a cop? Asked Surge.

" A co.....Have you been doing illegal stuff lately? asked Pikachu and Charmander.

" Bah! Just smoking on a pile of green, hahahahah! said a Meowth that belonged to Jesse and James.

" Meowth! Exclaimed Charmander and Pikachu.

" Hey furry wonder! If you ever want to have a hairball again I suggest you disappear. Surge said threatening Meowth.

" So sorry, Said Meowth running off.

Then out of nowhere, a Team called Team leafstone, attacked Persian, Surge, Pikachu, and Charmander.

" Uh-huh! Charmander exclaimed. " I'm gonna kick some as....

" Don't even say it Charmander. Pikachu said catching Charmander.

Shiftry who is the leader used bulletseed. The attack hit Pikachu 5 times!
The two Nuzleaf's did the same, and hit Pikachu 5 times too.

" Okay you stuck up, walking tree branches. It's time for me to show ya what I working wit! Surge shouted, using a ice-flamethrower attack!

" Are you okay Pikachu? Asked Persian. " This will help you. She said using partner recovery to heal Pikachu!

" I'm finishing them off, said Charmander after jumping off of Surge's back. " FLAMETHROWER! He shouted.

They were still standing. But one more attack,a nd it'd be over.

" You'd better give up now Team Leafstones, unless you want to be barbecue. Surge said warning them.

" I like fried. Charmander added, licking his lips.

they all ran....

" Pi, pi, pika pi, pik, pika, pi, chu! Pikachu laughed.

" Now let's make up a team name, said Persian and Surge.

" HM....Said pikachu thinking.

" Ah! Charmander exclaimed.

" TEAM POKE'MASTERS! shouted Charmander, and yelled Pikachu.

" Thats a wonderful name, Persian said with a smile.

" It's a punk name if ya ask me, Surge mumbled.

" Next stop! Pokemon Square! Charmander yelled.
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Old 11-24-2006, 11:06 PM
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this is a really cool story!
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Old 11-24-2006, 11:09 PM
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Default Re: Pokemon UA!: Ultimate Annihilation

Thanks! You can make a character to be in it. They could be on a team Bad/Good or a regular trainer. Or maybe just a Pokemon that'll meet up with Charmander & Pikachu and their gang.
Chapter #3-Team Attack Part2-Trainers, coming soon.

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Old 11-24-2006, 11:10 PM
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ok. how about a vaporeon named Mist on the good team
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Old 11-24-2006, 11:23 PM
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Sure! She'll be in CHAPTER 4! sINCE cHAPTER3 PART 2 is for the trainers.
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