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11-23-2006, 02:51 AM
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Re: Pokemon UA!: Ultimate Annihilation
Yeah I've been waiting on this all day 100/1
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11-23-2006, 02:56 AM
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Re: Pokemon UA!: Ultimate Annihilation
Awesome work so far. Can you put my character Crystal in it? If you are, I’ll give ya the info now-
Name: Crystal Momoyia
Gender: female
Pokemon: Persian and Surge/Houndoom
Attacks Persian knows: Pay Day, Water Pulse, Hyper Beam, and Thunder
Attacks Surge knows: Shadow Ball, Fire Blast, Sunny Day, and Solarbeam
Crystal could meet up with Devan and Ash while Persian and Surge meet up with Pikachu and Charmander, Crystal getting separated form her Pokemon too.
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11-23-2006, 02:57 AM
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Re: Pokemon UA!: Ultimate Annihilation
Thanks alot! I have to post your character in chapetr two. I forgot I would have to put how they got separated in the first chapter. Chapter 2 coming soon. Very soon too!
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11-23-2006, 02:58 AM
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Re: Pokemon UA!: Ultimate Annihilation
Yeah your character is in. I'll put both of your characters in chapter 2.
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11-23-2006, 08:53 AM
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Re: Pokemon UA!: Ultimate Annihilation
Sounds like the makings of a good story. Think you could put my character in?
Name: Marina
Age: 14
Pokemon: Eevee, Pidgeotto, Pikachu, & Torchic.
Attacks:
Eevee-double team, agility, quick attack, and iron tail
Pikachu-thundershock, thunder bolt, thunder, and thunder wave
Torchic- ember, flamethrower, fire blast, and fire punch
Pidgeotto-fly, steel wing, aerial ace, and sky attack
Evolutions: Eevee-Umbreon (black with blue rings cause' it's shiny)
Pidgeotto-Pidgeot
Torchic-Combusken-Blaziken
All of em' can evolve with the exception of Pikachu
Note: Pikachu is shiny so it can be distinguished from Ash's own Pikachu.
Eevee is a shiny as well, so it's snow white
The trainer herself has black hair, brown eyes, and is wearing a black t-shirt under a very dark blue jean jacket (you know, those ones that people want so bad but are too expensive...) as well as black jeans. She has a blue pair of runners.
Last edited by Michelle8936; 11-23-2006 at 10:33 AM.
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11-23-2006, 01:50 PM
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Re: Pokemon UA!: Ultimate Annihilation
Yeah! Thats the last character who'll be in chapter 2, unless you are going to be on another team like galaxy, rocket, magma, ect....Three new people and Pokemon in chapter 2. Chapter will have to wait since today is Thanksgiving.
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11-23-2006, 02:15 PM
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Re: Pokemon UA!: Ultimate Annihilation
I agree with everyone else. This looks like a great fic in the making. Could I go ahead and sign up for chapter three? If I wait, I may forget about it.
Name: Tori
Age: 14
Gender: female
Description: Tori has shoulder length golden blonde hair and emerald green eyes. She is usually seen wearing a tight red tanktop with a pair of faded out jeans and red and white trainers. Around her waist, she has a yellow fannypack (much like May's) strapped around her waist. On her head, he first Pokemon, Pikachu, is normally seen.
Pokemon: Pikachu, (starter) Torchic, Taillow and Rapidash
Move sets:
Pikachu: Thunderbolt, Thunder, Iron Tail and Volt Tackle
Torchic: Ember, Quick Attack, Peck and Scratch
Taillow: Peck, Quick Attack, Wing Attack, Focus Energy
Rapidash: Stomp, Flamethrower, Take Down, Fire Blast
Note: Tori's Pikachu has a chip in its tail, so it shouldn't get confused with Ash's.
All Pokemon may evolve except Pikachu. (Rapidash can't evolve)
Tori can meet up with your characters whenever and however you want. I can't pick any specific time and place, 'cause I don't know what's gonna happen in chapter two yet.
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11-23-2006, 02:19 PM
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Re: Pokemon UA!: Ultimate Annihilation
Yes. You're in.
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11-23-2006, 05:06 PM
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Re: Pokemon UA!: Ultimate Annihilation
CHAPTER #2-MORE FIRENDS AND MORE ENEMIES
" Pikachu! Charmander! Are you there? Devan shouted saying their Pokemon's names.
" Pikachu! We'll find you. Ash says to himself. " Lets go on this adventure. Now we have two quests. One to go to Cameron Palace, and the other is to find Pikachu and save the world. So thats three. Ash says.
" Lets go. We'll find them. Devan says trying to cheer himself and Ash up.
They walk far, until they see an abandoned Pokemon Center. No one seemed to be in it. They walked up to it.
" Whoa! For this place to be abandoned, It's in pretty good shape, Devan exclaims.
" Yeah. I know! Ash agrees.
They then read a sign that says....NEW MOON ISLAND POKE'CENTER
" WHAT!? They both yell. " How'd we get here? Devan asks. " The explosion blew us all the way to Shinou's New Moon Island! Ash exclaims. " We'd better sleep here for the night.
Later that day. Three more people start to go inside the Pokemon Center. One who had shoulder length blonde hair, and emerald green eyes. She also had a tight red tanktop with a pair of faded out jeans and red/white poke'balls inside of her yellow fanny pack, which was strapped around her waist.
The other was a boy. And the last one was a girl who had black hair, brown eyes, and is wearing a black t-shirt under a very dark blue jean jacket. she also had black jeans on, and a pair of blue running shoes.
One of them stepped on a leaf that made a crunch noise. Devan had heard it, and looked out of the window.
" Huh? Wake up Ash! Devan quitly yelled, shaking Ash.
" Huh? Whats wrong? Asked Ash, sounding very tired.
" Outside. Devan answered.
" Huh? Ash asked, and then looked out the window. " uh-oh. Hopefully they aren't bad guys.
" We'll see soon enough Ash. Devan told him.
The door opened, and the three people walked in.
" Hello? Is anyone there? Asked girl#1.
" Hm...Elekid search around. Said the boy.
" Who are you!? I asked them, in a heroic voice.
" The two girls giggled at me and Ash because we were talking heroicly, and in our pajamas.
" I'm Tori! Nice to meet ya! Tori said nicely.
" I'm Tyler! Whats up!? He said, and asked.
" And I am Marina. How ya doin? She asked, with a smile.
" Oh. Well I'm Ash, and this is my twin brother Devan! Ash exclaimed.
" Do you have Pokemon? They asked.
" Yeah! Devan replied.
" What about your first Pokemon? Marina asked.
Another girl walked in. " Sorry I'm late Tori, Marina, and Tyler. She said with a smile.
" So who are you? I asked her nicely.
" How rude of me. My names Crystal, and I got seperated from My Houndoom named Surge, and My Persian. She answered.
" You to? Asked Ash.
" What do you mean....you to? Asked Tyler.
" Well....We got seperated from our best buds, and first pokemon. Devan answered. Mines was a strong, blazing Charmander, and Ash's was a strong, electrifying Pikachu!
" I wonder what our Pokemon are doing now, Ash thought to himself.
MEANWHILE. AT POKEMON SQUARE
" Huh? Where are we? Asked Charmander.
" I...I have no clue at all...Pikachu answered.
" We'd better look for Ash and Devan. Charmander suggested.
" I miss them already, Pikachu added. " Well lets go!
Both Pikachu and Charmander searched Pokemon Square. They soon heard a Pokemon scream for help.
" H-help! Please someone save me! The Pokemon said.
" It's a babyMeowth being chased by a Shiftry. Charmander pointed out.
They ran towards them but before they could say anything two pokemon saved the Meowth.
" We did it surge. The Persian exclaimed.
" Yeah, yeah. Whatever! Surge replied.
" Huh? Who are you guys? Asked Pikachu and Charmander.
They turned around..
TO BE CONTINUED........
Last edited by ashketchum; 11-24-2006 at 02:32 AM.
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11-23-2006, 09:12 PM
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Re: Pokemon UA!: Ultimate Annihilation
I forgot to give you Crystal’s description.
Appearance- about 5’5”, 156lbs; black hair with blue streaks and bangs, true blue eyes; wears a jungle cameo tank top, dark blue faded jeans, denim vest, black combat boots, black fingerless gloves, wears hair in a high ponytail, wears a long jungle cameo bandanna around her head and puts the two-foot long access through the ponytail holder and lets it hang down with her hair, and her hair is about waist length.
stupid me on forgetting that. lol. can't wait for you to write more.
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11-24-2006, 02:33 AM
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Re: Pokemon UA!: Ultimate Annihilation
Thanks Crystal!
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11-24-2006, 03:14 AM
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Experienced Trainer
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Re: Pokemon UA!: Ultimate Annihilation
This does appear to be a great fan-fic in the making... Good work! ^^
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11-24-2006, 03:19 AM
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Master Trainer
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Re: Pokemon UA!: Ultimate Annihilation
Wow this is great
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11-24-2006, 03:20 AM
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Re: Pokemon UA!: Ultimate Annihilation
Tjanks alot. I think my mind is getting fogged now, since it's getting late. So Chapter 3 will probrably come tomorrow. But there is a possibilty that it could arrive tonight!
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11-24-2006, 03:22 AM
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Re: Pokemon UA!: Ultimate Annihilation
This is pretty darn good.
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