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Old 10-30-2006, 10:59 PM
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Yo,
My name is Daniel Carroll, and I am an Aussie MC.
My lyrics are good, but i am afraid to post them on the net, cos people might steal them. Its happened before..., What do you guys think. My signature is a taste of my lyrics...
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Old 10-30-2006, 11:04 PM
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This should be in he mixed written work board. And nobody would take those lyrics; they force the rhymes and don't have much depth. They sound really... fake, like they were just forced onto paper, not really coming from the heart.
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Old 10-31-2006, 10:13 PM
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Im sitting in my bed, looking at my greasy grimey pad.
Sittin here thinking why I got people soo mad.
Looking at their lives it gets me soo uptight and mad.
****, It sprung from the debt they owe soo bad.
Cant we just forgive and forget, lets not go and regret.
The things we say to some people, gets them real upset.
I can go bet the regret you own will go and set.
Into our character. Barrister ballif and the judge
your not the people who go, trudging through the sludge.
Talking bout ethiopia, dopier, your stupid not to know.
The girls who goto bed hungry, the boys without a home
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Old 10-31-2006, 10:26 PM
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Im sitting in my bed, looking at my greasy grimey pad.
Sittin here thinking why I got people soo mad.
Looking at their lives it gets me soo uptight and mad.
****, It sprung from the debt they owe soo bad.
Cant we just forgive and forget, lets not go and regret.
The things we say to some people, gets them real upset.
I can go bet the regret you own will go and set.
Into our character. Barrister ballif and the judge
your not the people who go, trudging through the sludge.
Talking bout ethiopia, dopier, your stupid not to know.
The girls who goto bed hungry, the boys without a home
Where's the music? @_@
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Old 11-01-2006, 12:08 AM
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Waiting for a reply from my producer...
Ive got a sort of beat at home, Ill try to post it from there...
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Old 11-01-2006, 12:41 AM
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I don't think people will be stealing your 'lyrics' - don't worry.

Also..

'Sittin here thinking why I got people soo mad.
Looking at their lives it gets me soo uptight and mad
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That's just wrong. :O

Ah! And another thing~~ This is a Pokémon forum, by the way. ;P
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Old 11-01-2006, 02:07 AM
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Typo, its supposed to be

Why I got people soo SAD, not mad...
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Old 11-01-2006, 08:10 PM
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Typo, its supposed to be

Why I got people soo SAD, not mad...
aight i as well do music and i am signed to a hip hop label......

www.myspace.com/referee1mind
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check it out sometime and let me know what you think....
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Old 11-02-2006, 10:32 PM
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aight i as well do music and i am signed to a hip hop label......

www.myspace.com/referee1mind
www.soundclick.com/thereferee


check it out sometime and let me know what you think....
Cool, but your album cover is SO ugly. I'd love to take whoever made that's spot and make it look professional, or maybe on your next one. =P That's my talent, though I do write song lyrics as well. Just not rap.

EDIT: Oh DAMN you're.......big.
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Old 11-02-2006, 10:36 PM
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Cool, but your album cover is SO ugly. I'd love to take whoever made that's spot and make it look professional, or maybe on your next one. =P That's my talent, though I do write song lyrics as well. Just not rap.

EDIT: Oh DAMN you're.......big.
big??? as in fat? lol ummm ok....and the cover is a effect i wanted...its a lp so i wanted the rugged distorted look.
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Old 11-02-2006, 10:39 PM
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big??? as in fat? lol ummm ok....and the cover is a effect i wanted...its a lp so i wanted the rugged distorted look.
Yea, and if you say so, your call, though grunge effects can be achieved without ruining the quality/colors of the picture and adding on some ameteur type. But whatever, if you want, here's my number: http://fense.deviantart.com
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FrozenChaos703: I AM ONE INCH TALLER THAN THE MIDGET IN MY CLASS. D:
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FrozenChaos703: Without falling.
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Old 11-03-2006, 12:42 AM
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Well, its good to know people dont share my SPECIAL lyrics.
I was expecting to get support, instead I got ripped for being different, thanks everyone for making me feel SOO good about myself...
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Old 11-03-2006, 03:20 AM
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Yea, and if you say so, your call, though grunge effects can be achieved without ruining the quality/colors of the picture and adding on some ameteur type. But whatever, if you want, here's my number: http://fense.deviantart.com
well i see your a regular ass...thats cool...you run your mouth about everyone? Just wondering and to snoopy dont worry bout what others say just keep doing your thing....
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Old 11-03-2006, 06:44 AM
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Thanks man, that made me feel better...
But It still doesnt male what they siad right...
*tear*
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Old 11-03-2006, 01:16 PM
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Thanks man, that made me feel better...
But It still doesnt male what they siad right...
*tear*
oh stop it already dude...if you didnt know we as humans are very opinionated and if not everyone is going to like your stuff.
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