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Old 06-03-2004, 08:05 PM
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Author Aleyquala: Thank you for the wonderful compliment! Yes, Lustar was very mysterious since he did used to protect Rayquaza during his lifetime after his pokemon training. I'll make sure to make Kevin lose after Chapter 10, and I'll keep watch of my mistakes.
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Chapter 4: The Cherrygrove Rivalry Begins!
Kevin was eating breakfast down in the Lobby of the Pokemon Center. After getting in the Pokemon Center of Cherrygrove City last night, Kevin and his Trapinch had a great peaceful, cool sleep.

Kevin had changed into the same outfit he was wearing only it was red. He was still wearing his all-white AirForceOnes while his hat was made of white jeans material.

Evidentially, Kevin’s outfits consisted of the exact same outfits, except they were different in color, style, fitting, and design layouts.

The Pokemon Center was one of the best places to eat breakfast in. The floor tiles were nicely polished that sparkled a silver marble in color. These tiles that were on the floor were also on the ceiling, only a dazzling hot flame red color that glittered throughout the entire place.

The walls were beautifully, specifically painted white and red, with such elegant wall paintings of pokeballs. There were many photos that were hanging from the walls throughout the Pokemon Center, like for example, a Johto League photo.

There were a Venusaur, Blastoise and Charizard battling against each other. These three pokemon were in some golden arena, with a crimson burner emitting such a hot, flammable white and red fire that appeared to burn massively.

The caption was:
<Come one trainer, come all trainers! Come and battle here with your impressive skills, strategic defense, quick attacks and ending special attacks! Enter the Johto League’s new division: The Golden Conference!>

So, many trainers and other people viewed this large photo and began to get excited that the Johto League had made a new division called the Golden Conference that would lead strong-enough trainers to the Victory Tournament, Challenge Cup and X-Terminator Finals.

There were other photos, though they weren’t as interesting as the one that attracted many trainers and other viewers.

The Pokemon Center was also great when it came to healing hurt pokemon, fainted pokemon or pokemon with side-effects like a burn, or pokemon that have been poisoned by an attack like Poison Tail or Poison Fang.

The front desk was very professional, having a black stone countertop and the bottom of the counter consisting of brown, polished wood. There were regular fanlights that were twirling on the roof, releasing cool air around the entire Pokemon Center.

On the counters, there were about two HP-Pavilion Computers that had flat-screen monitors. These two computers were basically for typing in the pokemon’s data, problems and possible, correct solutions that take the fewest amounts of days to make the pokemon heal.

At the front desk standing there was Nurse Joy, standing there with her long, pink ponytails that were nicely wrapped up with hot pink colored scrunches. Wearing her nurse outfit and with her determinative attitude for help healing pokemon, Nurse Joy was one of the best pokemon nurses to have in a Pokemon Center, even though that all Pokemon Centers had a Nurse Joy.

Also, Nurse Joy’s assistants of the Pokemon Center happened to be pokemon known as Chansey and Blissey. This really showed how people and pokemon could work together for the good of all.

Kevin began to clean up his plate that once consisted of his breakfast. Kevin ate scrambled eggs, 2 slices of toast and small pancakes that were neatly cut into smaller unit segments.

The booth was made of red leather, having a rectangular tabletop to the booth. He neatly left his plate on the booth table and being considerate and thoughtful, left a $4.92 tip for the Pokemon Center Donation Organization to help get the Pokemon Center new machines that can heal pokemon with severe problems like early dehydration.

“Trapinch Trapinch.” Trapinch yelped out nicely, having an early-morning voice tone.

Kevin looked down at his pokemon, seeing that he needed to heal it before it could engage into another battle. So, he took Trapinch to the front desk of the Pokemon Center. Nurse Joy arose from her computer chair and smiled with her sweet face.

“Welcome to the Pokemon Center’s front desk! How may I help you?” Nurse Joy asked.

“Um, I was wondering if you could heal my Trapinch for me.” Kevin replied nicely.

“Sure, we’d love to do so!” Nurse Joy responded, taking Trapinch away from Kevin’s possession.

She placed in on a tray and put it on some machine. Kevin watched as white electricity shocked Trapinch and began flowing it healing power to give it its full strength back. Finally, the healing was done, and Trapinch was fully healed!

Nurse Joy picked up the tray, with Trapinch sitting on it, and placed it back on the front desk black stone counter.

“Trap Trap Trapinch!” Trapinch said happily, letting Kevin know that it was 100% better.

Kevin picked up Trapinch and began holding it to his strong chest. Nurse Joy smiled and began speaking in her sweet, young voice.

“Your Trapinch is fully healed! Thank you for your patience and please come again!” Nurse Joy announced.

“Thanks and I will, Nurse Joy! Bye!” Kevin replied, waving back at Nurse Joy.

Trapinch happily looked around, seeing the beauties of its world. Seeing Chansey and Blissey walking around made it comfortable with its surroundings now. Kevin and his Trapinch went through the automatic-open glass doors, exiting the Pokemon Center…

Kevin loved his view when he left out of the Pokemon Center. The day was actually a warm one, meaning that Kevin was enjoying this day already! Kevin loved warm days because it would feel a lot better rather than walking in the hot, blazing temperatures during the summertime.

The sun was out, beaming brightly among the entire city. A flock of Ledyba began buzzing around, flying over Cherrygrove City. There were mobile homes, having a green roof, rectangular shape and a green door to match. Even though these were mobile homes, they were pretty expensive and looked their prices as well.

Kevin also noticed the majestic view of the river with leaping Magikarp coming from under the water. As the river flowed nicely, a fisherman was sleep, having his fishing line in the river.

The river sparkled dark blue, having one of the most interesting views ever. And finally, there were many Royal Highness roses, blooming wonderfully around the mobile homes, near Route 30 and around the Pokemon Center.

Thanks for the small rain showers that came in throughout the night, that helped brought the almost-to-die roses to new life of blooming wonderfully with style and prettiness. Kevin seemed like he would enjoy this day, but as soon as he took a few steps away from the Pokemon Center, he heard a voice that seemed more familiar than ever.

“So it’s the chomp again, the one who apparently took a Trapinch, the weak ground pokemon…” a voice said.

Kevin lowered his head, closed his eyes and began to smirk. Meanwhile, Trapinch heard this insult and began to get angry, growling angrily at the shady character.

“Oh hush up, you small little rat thing!” the voice said meanly, upsetting Trapinch even more!


“Trappppp Trapppp!” Trapinch roared out, seeing that this character had went too far!

Trapinch was on the verge of leaping out of Kevin’s arms, ready to use a Bite attack on this person when Kevin released a few laughs.

“Trapinch,” Kevin began. “Don’t let Jason’s words get to you…his words are meaningless and just nothing to be worried about.”

Trapinch gazed up, hearing its trainer’s thoughts, and it appeared to calm down easily rather than taking action and risking itself to danger. Then, Kevin opened his eyes and looked up, seeing that he was right.

Kevin was staring into the eyes of a person that he always had a debate with; a person that shared some similarities with Kevin, only different in many actions and strategies.

Wearing a red ‘Fubu’ shirt with his baggy blue jeans, and with his backwards all-blue cap with matching red-on-blue low-top AirForceOnes, this person was known other than Jason Trias, a person with attitude and talking back abilities.

Jason Trias wasn’t a person to mess with; only people with enough bravery dared to give Jason a challenge. Luckily, Kevin wasn’t scared of Jason at all. In fact, he was never scared because he knew what Jason’s weakness was…this weakness was called fear.


Though Jason was tough on the outside, beating up little kids and attempting to go after young adults, on the inside, Kevin knew that Jason was a scared little boy, trying to fit in when there’s nothing to fit in with.

Jason was the kind of person to talk back whenever in an argument conversation with an adult. He was a troubled child though his parents knew that one day, he would stop.

Luckily, Jason had pulled his act together, though not losing the same attitude with kids under the age of eighteen. This meant that even though he wouldn’t talk back to adults, he would talk back to kids under the age of eighteen to pick an easy-defeating fight.

So Kevin saw that this shady character was his upsetting associate, known as Jason Trias. Jason grinned as he made his announcement.

“Well, looks like Kevin actually became a trainer! Looks like dreams do come true for losers like him!” Jason announced, trying to embarrass Kevin.

Trapinch was getting angrier and angrier, trying its best to hold back all of its power on Jason.

Kevin smirked and replied, “Kevin, your words don’t hurt me at all! But, at least I became a trainer and have an occupation as an official pokemon trainer!”
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Old 06-05-2004, 02:47 AM
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Jason then smirked and began laughing out loud.

“What’s so funny? You finally saw how stupid your face looks and you are now laughing?” Kevin said, seeing that he didn’t find anything funny with what he said to make Jason laugh.

But, Kevin gasped as he saw a pokeball in Jason’s palm of his hand.

“What’s wrong? I proved you wrong again? Or is it the fact that I have a pokemon myself?” Jason asked angrily, seeing that Kevin thought that he wouldn’t become a trainer himself.

But, Kevin was beginning to get an idea…even though they were rivals, they could actually settle their eight-year argument with a battle!

So, Kevin looked down at his angry Trapinch, seeing that his brown sand dig pokemon was highly angry about what his rival said to his trainer.

“Trapinch, are you ready for another battle?” Kevin asked.

With its angry face, Trapinch nodded, ready to beat down whatever pokemon Jason had in his possession.

Then, Kevin looked up at Jason and said, “How about we settle all of this over a battle? I’ll show you what being a trainer is all about!”

Jason smirked once again and said, “Fine. I’ll wipe you out as quickly as an Arcanine’s Extremespeed attack! You’ve been messing with the wrong person, Kevin. And now’s your time to pay for it!”

Kevin and Jason stood there on the cement of the city that was beige in color. Suddenly, a flock of Pidgey began flying over the place known as Cherrygrove City, passing over this city to get to Violet City a lot faster.

“Pidgggg!” Pidgey chirped out loud, creating a musical, dazzling tone of their voices combined together.

“Alright, you ready?” Kevin asked, seeing that Trapinch was already ready for battle.

Trapinch was on the ground, growling furiously at Jason.

“I’m ready…let’s go, Cyndaquil!” Jason said, suddenly tossing up his pokeball.

It opened, releasing a shining-white pokemon from inside. This color began fading away, adding the true colors of this pokemon. Kevin noticed that this pokemon was a bit odd to be a fire-type pokemon.

Its small body was yellow that shined brightly in the sunlight. There was a long, black stripe that was from the tip of its nose to the very back of its body. Its head was similar to an aardvark’s, only the nose wasn’t as along as the nose of this specific animal.

It had little hands with one dull nail on its feet that were nicely polished. But, what made this pokemon even more interesting was the fact that fire emitted from the entire area of its back, making trainers know that this was a fire-type pokemon!

Trapinch growled at this Cyndaquil, seeing that it was a pokemon of Jason’s.

“Cyndaquil Cyndaaa!” Cyndaquil yelled out, sensing that something was wrong with Trapinch.

But, since it knew that it was better than Trapinch, then it had nothing to worry about in this battle. As the red and yellow flames burned strongly on Cyndaquil’s back, Kevin looked in astonishment at this unusual fire-type pokemon.

“Wow…so this is Cyndaquil…” Kevin thought to himself.

To find out more information, he took out his pokedex. The red, highly advanced technology scanned the data of Cyndaquil, saved it and repeated the data through a mechanical voice.

{Cyndaquil, the flame pokemon. Cyndaquil is of the fire-type pokemon and can intimidate its foes by blasting the flames from out of its back. Cyndaquil’s attacks are Tackle, Leer, Smokescreen and Ember. Grass pokemon should never try to challenge a Cyndaquil, unless they are ready for a burn.}

Kevin understood this and knew that Trapinch could win against a Cyndaquil, since ground took the advantage over fire. Then, as the winds began to lose wind speed, their battle had begun!

“Cyndaquil, use your Tackle attack!” Jason ordered determinedly.

“Cyndaaaa…quilllll!” Cyndaquil screeched out angrily.

Suddenly, Cyndaquil began running on its heads and legs, leading its Tackle attack straight for the brown sand dig pokemon. Running with magnificent speed, Cyndaquil was ready to take down this Trapinch!

“Trapinch, use Sand-Attack!” Kevin commanded immediately.

To stop Cyndaquil, Trapinch took command and turned around, now facing the Pokemon Market. Calmly, Trapinch began kicking its back legs repeatedly, kicking up piles of dirt.

As they soared across towards the fire mouse pokemon, Cyndaquil had no choice but to stop its attack and to counter the Sand-Attack coming from Trapinch.

Cyndaquil covered its thin eyes to block the Sand-Attack from coming in contact with its eyes. Now this was both Trapinch and Kevin’s chance!

“Trapinch, try your Pursuit attack!” Kevin barked out.

Trapinch took command and immediately proceeded with the Pursuit attack Kevin told it to use. The brown sand dig pokemon suddenly evaporated into the atmosphere, collecting dark powers to use this attack.

Noticing that the Sand-Attack was over, Cyndaquil lowered its small arms from its eyes, seeing its entire atmosphere. But, the core of the situation was gone!

“Cynda?” Cyndaquil said, confused about where Trapinch went.

But, something really surprised it when Trapinch suddenly reappeared right in front of it, having a black veil around its brown body.

“Tra…pinch!” Trapinch roared out, tackling Cyndaquil with all of its might.

Cyndaquil fell on its back pretty hard, screeching out its name angrily. Kevin began getting excited, since his Trapinch was taking the lead of the battle! But, he had to stop this now that Cyndaquil was back on its feet!

“Cyndaquil, use Smokescreen!” Jason yelled out.

Cyndaquil opened its mouth, releasing a thick, black smoke around their entire battle area. This made the battle even more interesting…

As the thick black smoke began invading their battle area, Trapinch’s black body veil disappeared from around its body. Looking around in confusion, Trapinch didn’t know what to do in this situation!

Blinking its star pupil eyes in confusion, Kevin had to deal with this situation. But, Kevin knew that Trapinch could do something even though the thick, black smoke had crowded the area.

Meanwhile, Jason was very happy with this attack decision. He knew that Kevin wouldn’t have anything to do to stop this attack, so by using it, it would determine to outcome of the battle.

“Cyndaquil, use Ember!” Kevin commanded immediately.

Heating up the burning, dazzling flames on its back, Cyndaquil began to open its mouth. Abruptly, a series of orange, hot ember missiles came flying out of Cyndaquil’s mouth, leading straight into the smoke where Trapinch was.

Kevin couldn’t see anything much, but he heard a sound that didn’t sound too good.

“Trappp!” Trapinch yelped out, being stricken with the Ember attack harshly.

But, things began lighting up when Kevin developed a plan!

“Trapinch, use Pursuit again!” Kevin commanded.

Trapinch began to emit a black shield around its body as it evaporated into the atmosphere once again. Unfortunately, Jason couldn’t hear the command so he didn’t know what to prepare for. But, as the smoke cleared, Jason knew that Trapinch was gone again!

“Cyndaquil, use Smokescreen again!” Jason hollered out.

But, it was too late. Trapinch reappeared, tackling straight into Cyndaquil with great power. Cyndaquil crashed on the ground on its back, aching in pain.

“Now, use Bite!” Kevin yelled.

Trapinch scampered away towards Cyndaquil, opening its large mouth. Too weak to get up, Cyndaquil was bitten furiously by Trapinch, being thrown back on the ground. Unable to get up, Cyndaquil was defeated!

Angrily, Jason returned his Cyndaquil back into its pokeball. He began getting upset, and ran out of the small city.

Kevin looked back and said, “This isn’t the end…I know it isn’t.”

Then, he walked over towards Trapinch, who was now feeling like he was a king! Kevin picked Trapinch up and hugged it, happy that it won its second battle!

“Trapinch, you are the greatest!” Kevin complimented.

As the sunny skies beamed on the city, with the Royal Highness Roses blooming beautifully and with the lake having a class of Poliwag dancing around underwater, Trapinch was feeling the new love that its trainer was developing for it…
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Awesome chapter Aley! You have just shown me more ways of writing that can make me a better author. The way you described the Pokemon Center and Cyndaquil was truely amazing. You did an excellent job on the battle but still keep in mind that loses help more then wins do. Great work overall and keep doing this great stuff because right now, every trainer fic at this forum is in jeopardy of losing event the thoughts of being the #1 trainer fic with this great fic on the rise.
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Thanks for the wonderful compliment, KCash! I'm glad that I helped you. But, like I mentioned before, he won't start losing until Chapter 11, because I made the chapters up to Chapter 10. I'm very sorry for this, but Kevin is just off to a very good start.
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Author Aleyquala: Due to recent, multiple attacks at www.serebiiforums.com, the Serebii Forums has been closed until further notice. Since I was getting my chapters from that place, updates won't be coming for awhile. Apparentally, someone found a Mod's password and began deleting the best Fan-Fictions of Serebii Forums, which happened to be this story at this site. Until they can get their acts together, I won't update as rapidly as I could.
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