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Old 02-23-2006, 05:52 PM
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Default Twitchy's art (:

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In a random order

Naruto characters http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e322/Angelic_Skitty/Sasame.png http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e3...andRockLee.png http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e3...ataandNeji.png http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e3...rutobadguy.png

I want heavy crits. (:
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Old 02-23-2006, 06:46 PM
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Old 02-23-2006, 06:47 PM
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Old 02-23-2006, 08:37 PM
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Default Re: Twitchy's art (:

As requested.. I'll critize....
Though they look good.

The first one looks like his eyes are on his forehead, but that may be because of the low place of the nose. Maybe it wouldn't be noticeable if you colored it in.

Rock Lee's hat looks like it's lose on his head... or should that be his hair?

No comments on Ino.

Neii and Hinoto(sp?) seem a bit dead, without their eyes, and Hinoto has a rather skinny neck. Not that there's anything wrong with that, but I don't find it looking good on her.

And the elf has a bit of an eggshaped head...

Those are my 2 cents. I myself draw anime style, and I know how hard it can be.
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Old 02-23-2006, 08:44 PM
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Default Re: Twitchy's art (:

1. Sasame is a girl
2. It is his hair. Watch the Naruto opening, its my ref for Ino, Rock Lee, Neji and Hinata.
3. The last one is a guy, who was actually a girl. :P

Thanks for the crits. I'll keep them in mind. :P

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Old 02-25-2006, 07:00 PM
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Sorry for a double post but;



Miravana helped me with her hair colour <3 (Because I asked her xD)
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Old 02-25-2006, 08:18 PM
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Aww! Teh mew is cute. I love your choice of color, too.
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Old 02-26-2006, 08:41 PM
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Wow, u have talent, great drawings!
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Well, the shape's good... But I am so HEAVILY missing shades!! You should really try that!
The colouring could be done a bit better too.

Other from that, when I look at it I get the same feeling as when I look at other manga/anime, which is gooood cause your drawings have the same expression as regular anime. (And it is the expressions that make anime anime right? My opinion.)

I'd say, keep going and try to get better and better :)
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Well, the shape's good... But I am so HEAVILY missing shades!! You should really try that!
The colouring could be done a bit better too.

Other from that, when I look at it I get the same feeling as when I look at other manga/anime, which is gooood cause your drawings have the same expression as regular anime. (And it is the expressions that make anime anime right? My opinion.)

I'd say, keep going and try to get better and better :)
I dont normally colour. They look better IRL, because I shade using like.. 10 different shades/colours.

I'll go get my Shuichi sketch in the comp. :D:D

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YAY! Shuichi! ^o^

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Old 03-17-2006, 05:53 PM
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Yeah. Shuichi does rule.

Its just before he yells out YUKI IS MINE in the concert in the Manga.
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Old 03-25-2006, 04:40 AM
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Those pictures are great. I like the one with mew the best though.
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Default Re: Twitchy's art (:

And that is why youre called Klueless

\These are very good, but the one in the first post is going nowere, try adding a few darker colours and make youre pic's actiony

Youre critersizer

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Old 04-03-2006, 11:00 AM
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Default Re: Twitchy's art (:

That was hardly a crit. ¬¬

But they arent MEANT to be coloured or shaded. The ones that aren't inked can't be coloured. The pens I have dont go over pencil colouring.

And my mom threw them out. ): EVEN SHUICHI -cries-
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