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Old 08-13-2006, 09:00 AM
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Hehe, I saw that the beta company is working. I wish I could apply for it, but I can't for a couple of reasons:

-I am going to be in college soon and I am not sure if I will have time to look at someone's work.

-My grammar is fairly weak. I tried my best to correct my grammar on my works, but I am still learning about it.

I am going to have a fanfiction coming up pretty soon, so maybe I will probably have someone beta my fic to check some grammar mistakes.
Yay...a first customer! But we have to wait for you to actually come up with the story. Anyway, take your time...the last thing I want is a rushed story to beta
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Old 08-14-2006, 02:54 AM
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So, go over to the Beta Reader thread and read the rules for writers. (The link shall be in my siggy soon). If you have fill out the form correctly, I'll gladly do it for you.

(I sort of feel bad for frying your fic and making you want to stop it. Sorry)

Deathspector is now a beta reader too, by the way, if he posts his profile in the 'company.
Thanx

Eh, dont feel bad. I did feel kinda bad so I thought I would read your review in one window, and correct my fic in another and I'm pretty sure I fixed the first chapter and im going to try to buff up the others b4 sending it through the Beta.

I hope I fill the form out right I'm not too good at them.
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Old 08-14-2006, 03:20 AM
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Don't worry, I haven't forgotten about the reviews I promised. I'll try and get to them soon, gots lots of stuff on my mind... :P
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Old 08-14-2006, 03:39 AM
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Don't worry, I haven't forgotten about the reviews I promised. I'll try and get to them soon, gots lots of stuff on my mind... :P
Yeah I can tell your really swamped over there
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Old 08-14-2006, 03:46 AM
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Hehe, yeah Deathspector. Don't want to do that to you.

Well, I will say the fanfiction coming up is this one shot I have called "Mori", and it will be in first person. I will try my best to not make it rush. So far it is about forty to fifty percent done (I had written it a while back but had not gone to write it for a while until now). The one shot should be done in a couple of days or so.

Oh, and Neo Pikachu. Don't worry- take your time on the reviews.
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Old 08-14-2006, 12:32 PM
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Like I said eariler, I also got accepted to beta if anyone wants me to...
*crickets* -.-
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Old 08-14-2006, 12:37 PM
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I'll be looking forward to that, Bay.

Right, I have nothing else to say, so I guess this post was completely useless...XD

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Old 08-14-2006, 03:04 PM
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Okay, Now and Forever just got a massive review by me. Quite a lot there already...

Now, I'll read RM's fic and then Bay's, followed by kattiekitten's. Rock on.
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Old 08-14-2006, 03:33 PM
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Okay, Now and Forever just got a massive review by me. Quite a lot there already...

Now, I'll read RM's fic and then Bay's, followed by kattiekitten's. Rock on.
Thanks a boat load, Neo. I really appreciate it, especially since you don't like journey fics. I'll have to go read it now.


And DS and Kayden, I'm betaing Th3DazeGrace's fic, Trials of Friendship. So you two can fight over any other requests.
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Old 08-15-2006, 08:38 AM
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Thanks a boat load, Neo. I really appreciate it, especially since you don't like journey fics. I'll have to go read it now.


And DS and Kayden, I'm betaing Th3DazeGrace's fic, Trials of Friendship. So you two can fight over any other requests.
So I noticed. *slaps on fighting gear* The next one's mine...XD.

And if anyone is up for reviewing my fanfiction, it would be much appreciated. The link is in my sig.

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Old 08-15-2006, 12:31 PM
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So I noticed. *slaps on fighting gear* The next one's mine...XD.

And if anyone is up for reviewing my fanfiction, it would be much appreciated. The link is in my sig.

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Then I get the one after that. XD
I'll give your fic a goood, long review. :)
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Old 08-15-2006, 03:39 PM
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Bay is next on my review list, followed by kattiekitten. After that, I'll give Betrayal by Deathspector a shot, but that's it then, I'm coming up with more ideas for my own fic. And its a new one, not one that I scrapped over a year ago.

I'll still do reviews here and there though, just when I'm feeling up for it... :P

EDIT: Got a review for Bay's, that was a great story.

Kattie, you need to show me what fic of yours you want me to read, I'm not quite sure which one you want me to look at.

EDIT 2: Gave DS a review on Betrayal. Keep it going, I can see you really want to write this and that's the kind of determination that helped me finish Trial of Juno II even while it was going through times of hell.
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Old 08-16-2006, 02:46 AM
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Kattie, you need to show me what fic of yours you want me to read, I'm not quite sure which one you want me to look at.
I don't think she's active anymore.

Also, on the Fantasy Dragonhearts show, I made an audio version of Evolution. In case anyone cares...
*crickets*
O_o Typical.
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Old 08-16-2006, 02:55 AM
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Thank you Neo Pikachu! Your review just made my day! Seriously, now I am having trouble keeping up with my avatar shop. Okay, I will post a reply to it later.

And Kayden, an auto verison of "Evolution"? I would like to hear that! Dang it, your website for your show thingy won't work.
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Old 08-16-2006, 02:57 AM
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Thank you Neo Pikachu! Your review just made my day! Seriously, now I am having trouble keeping up with my avatar shop. Okay, I will post a reply to it later.

And Kayden, an auto verison of "Evolution"? I would like to hear that! Dang it, your website for your show thingy won't work.
http://www.freewebs.com/kayden_the_a...pisode%201.wav
Try that. Yes, I know it looks like a WAV, but it's an MP3.
The converter-thing.... messed up. :P
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