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Old 07-25-2006, 05:01 PM
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My new story is up! I would love it if it were reviewed. I am going to start chapter 1 now.
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Old 07-25-2006, 07:15 PM
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Hey Neo Pikachu! Yeah, I would like you to review my story "Take Fifty Five!". It's a comedy one shot fic. Here's the link:

Take Fifty Five!

Oh, and Rocket Meowth, I will try to review your new story as soon as possible. I had been quite busy now. <_>
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Old 07-25-2006, 07:52 PM
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Hey Neo Pikachu! Yeah, I would like you to review my story "Take Fifty Five!". It's a comedy one shot fic. Here's the link:

Take Fifty Five!

Oh, and Rocket Meowth, I will try to review your new story as soon as possible. I had been quite busy now. <_>
Let me rest Sceptile Frost's and RocketMeowth's first, they claimed a review first. I'll do theirs and then do yours. :P
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Old 07-25-2006, 09:04 PM
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Chapter 1 to Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: RM's Rescue Team is up. I am working on chapter 2 right now. It should be up later today or by tommorow.
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Old 07-25-2006, 09:43 PM
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Okay Neo Pikachu! Don't worry, take your time!

Oh, and Rocket Meowth, I managed to review your story. You can check my review out on your thread.
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Old 07-25-2006, 10:05 PM
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^^ Thank you. I'll go read it now.
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Old 07-26-2006, 03:08 PM
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...Could you review my story at some point Neo? After all of the other reviews are done, of course. =) I just know I have overdescribed in places, and could use some help ironing it out...

It's the link in my sig, which either says 'The Evil Bunny King of Doom' or C.H.A.O.S. =D

We need something to talk about...

How about this: Has writing on this forum had any effect on your life outside of here?
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Old 07-26-2006, 03:45 PM
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...Could you review my story at some point Neo? After all of the other reviews are done, of course. =) I just know I have overdescribed in places, and could use some help ironing it out...

It's the link in my sig, which either says 'The Evil Bunny King of Doom' or C.H.A.O.S. =D

We need something to talk about...

How about this: Has writing on this forum had any effect on your life outside of here?
Not really.

Anyway... new Nefarious Serendipity banner! :D And I got my new Wordperfect, so hopefully within a few days I´ll be back on my writing schedule!
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Old 07-26-2006, 04:42 PM
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...Could you review my story at some point Neo? After all of the other reviews are done, of course. =) I just know I have overdescribed in places, and could use some help ironing it out...

It's the link in my sig, which either says 'The Evil Bunny King of Doom' or C.H.A.O.S. =D
Sure, but you gotta give it some time, I have quite a bit of reading material now.

Still reading Sceptile Frost's fic, and once I'm done with that one, I'll be reading RocketMeowth's, followed by Bay's and then yours.

And I owe you reviews since you've read Trial of Juno all the way through and left enormous amounts of feedback. I'll return the favor.
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Old 07-26-2006, 04:47 PM
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Thanks, Neo, for reviewing (or working on it, I guess).

Nice banner, Kayden! Yes, more of Nefarious Serendipity is coming, eh? Can't wait.

Has writing on this forum had any effect on your life outside of here? Well, other than taking up lots of time, my writing is getting better all the time both because of reviewer's comments and at school. And practice makes perfect, so practicing, even if it is pokemon, will improve the writing I have to do for school and such.
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Old 07-26-2006, 05:36 PM
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Has writing on this forum had any effect on your life outside of here?

Well, not much here because I have only one fic here and I just joined a few days ago.

When I joined Serebii, however, I did improved on my writing after I had posted my first fanfic "Heart of the Sea". Yeah, writing that story took a chunk of my time, but at least I get to practice writing.

Maybe when I post more stories in this forum, then I will probably get to improved also.

Oh, and Kayden, I put a review up for your story. Hope its a good review.

And guys, I will try to review more stories here if I can. Just hold tight. Right now I have to work on two reviews for Serebii.
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Old 07-26-2006, 05:57 PM
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Oh, and Kayden, I put a review up for your story. Hope its a good review.
Thanks for reviewing my story. It was great how you pointed out the weaknesses! :)
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Old 07-26-2006, 07:09 PM
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Blar, my War songfic is kinda short...I'm hoping it's good enough though. I'm banking on the fact that I used the actual song lyrics in the fic might get me a point...
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Old 07-27-2006, 09:32 AM
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Has writing on this forum had any effect on your life outside of here?

In some ways. Honestly, I can't tell if I'm changing or not, but I feel that I am. In some ways, I feel that writing on the forum has made my skills get better, because of the reviews I've made, but in other cases, it seems that my outside stories are leaning too much towards anime, and I don't want that to happen. So in some ways its good, and in some ways, its bad, but it has definitely changed me.

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Old 07-27-2006, 12:00 PM
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Has writing on this forum had any effect on your life outside of here?:

Can't say really, I just started posting work here. But if I can convert the question to forums in general, then I'll say alot as whenever I actually got a review it was usually someone pointing out literary mechanics I messed up on. I'm grateful for that.

The ones who was telling me how I should be writing however...

EDIT: @Deathspector- Nothing wrong with making your story mangaish/anime-feel type in general. (I mean other animes just not the Pokemons though I'll be the first to admit that it did create a few good concepts that were thrown out the window before anything could be developed around it.)
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