Fan Fiction Chat/Feedback

[Sceptile Frost]

Does that mean the Review Roundup is back in action?

[Neo Emolga]

Considering the fact that Trial of Juno II was recently and finally completed, that gives me some time to read the work of other people.

So, I'm up for grabs as a reviewer, first come first serve. Only thing is, like in the past, I'm really not keen at all on Trainer fan fictions. I've read SO many of them in the past and while I know people try to do their best to make it uniquely different, to me... it's still the same thing. Out of preference, I'd really want to read something new and different in style.

So, if you want your story to have a very detailed review from me, just tell me. I'm not not sure what I'm going to do as far as future fan fictions go but until then, I share a few reviews.

[Snow Fairy Sugar]

Originally Posted by Neo Pikachu

Considering the fact that Trial of Juno II was recently and finally completed, that gives me some time to read the work of other people.

So, I'm up for grabs as a reviewer, first come first serve. Only thing is, like in the past, I'm really not keen at all on Trainer fan fictions. I've read SO many of them in the past and while I know people try to do their best to make it uniquely different, to me... it's still the same thing. Out of preference, I'd really want to read something new and different in style.

So, if you want your story to have a very detailed review from me, just tell me. I'm not not sure what I'm going to do as far as future fan fictions go but until then, I share a few reviews.

sweet,Neo! please rate mine

http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/foru...ad.php?t=18497

[Kayden Javlaíakín]

Meh. Nefarious Serendipity is on the second or third page, now....
Overflooded by cliché trainer fics...

With it being my newest work and all, I´d be honored if you would take a look at it, Neo.

http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/foru...ad.php?t=17868

[Neo Emolga]

Sure, I'll give those both a look. Expect a pretty long and detailed review, that's just how I like doing things.

[Snow Fairy Sugar]

Originally Posted by Neo Pikachu

Sure, I'll give those both a look. Expect a pretty long and detailed review, that's just how I like doing things.

yeah,thanks that's how I like it

[Kayden Javlaíakín]

Originally Posted by Neo Pikachu

Sure, I'll give those both a look. Expect a pretty long and detailed review, that's just how I like doing things.

Thanks, Neo.

Also, if anyone hasn´t voted in the Fanfiction contest and you´re wanting to, please do it soon. The voting ends in 5 days.

[RocketMeowth]

My legend story idea is already running into problems. So I am going to start and type up a new story idea that I got last night.

[Neo Emolga]

Originally Posted by May Norman

yeah,thanks that's how I like it

Reviewed.

And Kayden, if you want to know what you're in for, you can see how I review. I'll be reading yours next.

[Kayden Javlaíakín]

Originally Posted by Neo Pikachu

Reviewed.

And Kayden, if you want to know what you're in for, you can see how I review. I'll be reading yours next.

Like I said, thanks a ton. Those are the kind of reviews I like to see.

And btw, Neo, you´ve already won three catagories in the fanfiction contest. Just telling you in case you were wondering.

I believe they were Best Fic, Best Author, and Best Adventure Fic.

[Neo Emolga]

Originally Posted by Kayden Javlaíakín

Like I said, thanks a ton. Those are the kind of reviews I like to see.

And btw, Neo, you´ve already won three catagories in the fanfiction contest. Just telling you in case you were wondering.

I believe they were Best Fic, Best Author, and Best Adventure Fic.

Awesome, thank you.

And your review is ready. Keep going with that story, it's got lots of potential.

[Kayden Javlaíakín]

Originally Posted by Neo Pikachu

Awesome, thank you.

And your review is ready. Keep going with that story, it's got lots of potential.

Wow... thank you, Neo!

And that was a great review. You went into a ton of detail, which many of the new reviewers aren´t doing enough of...

They just say things like, 'ZOMG! It was thez bestthing eva!!!111´.

If only HMG were here...

[Neo Emolga]

Originally Posted by Kayden Javlaíakín

Wow... thank you, Neo!

And that was a great review. You went into a ton of detail, which many of the new reviewers aren´t doing enough of...

They just say things like, 'ZOMG! It was thez bestthing eva!!!111´.

If only HMG were here...

HMG pretty much left writing, as I have been talking to her and wondering if she'll ever get back into it. Things like a few bad reviews on her work... she takes too much to heart but she has the determination to go far with it.

Trust me, I've been looking at most of those other reviews on both your story and May's and I just shake my head. I know exactly what you mean.

But I'm glad it helped, I find a review is only helpful when things are pointed out and explained further, maybe even beyond what the author intended. People need to think outside the box when writing these things, there's likely way more to your story than what meets the eye and I see that potential to go in so many different directions. Good luck with it, I want to know what happens to that Bagon.

And if anyone elses wants a review like that, I'm ready for more if anyone wants one.

[Sceptile Frost]

Neo, if you want to you can review mine. Bewarned, its a trainer fic, so feel free not to. LINK

Man, I HAVE to think of a good song for the WAR...

[Neo Emolga]

Originally Posted by Sceptile Frost

Neo, if you want to you can review mine. Bewarned, its a trainer fic, so feel free not to. LINK

Man, I HAVE to think of a good song for the WAR...

I'll give it a read, and I PROMISE I will not be biased because its a Trainer fic. However, that may slightly affect the "How much I really, honestly, and truthfully enjoyed the story based on my personal opinion" rating. But that definitely doesn't mean the fic would be bad, it's just based on my own perferences. Like they say in my marketing classes, one person who speaks up about not liking something represents eight others who didn't speak up.