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Old 07-08-2011, 06:27 PM
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WAR Team: VILE
Title: Juice Fence
Form: Short story (dark)
Link: Here

((Uh, by way of explanation: the opposites are both between the two parties, (but mainly) as well as the child vs adult mindset sort of thing))

Er... if I got the submission date wrong (am/pm always messed me up)... just pretend this never happened. ._.

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Old 07-09-2011, 04:57 AM
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Contest is now closed ^^ (I hope I got it right, this time around xD Time zones get to me, too xD)

Results and next week's theme will be posted tomorrow ;)
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Old 07-10-2011, 07:44 AM
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I've posted my poem but I forgot to post it here before you closed the contest. Can I still submit it because I posted it on PE2K before you closed the contest? If I can, read on. If not, ignore the spoiler.

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Username: IceKyurem
WAR Team: Elemental
Form: Many haikus forming a bigger poem.
Link to submission http://pokemonelite2000.com/forum/sh...d.php?t=114892
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Old 07-10-2011, 06:04 PM
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Sorry, IceKyurem--I've already graded this week's results. Try to get your stories posted in this thread before the deadline.

And so, here are this week's results:


XaiakuX (The Cullen) - - - “Opposites Attract”

Creativity/Theme— 9/10
Grammar— 8/10
Use of literary devices—7/10
Flow—7/10
Reader Appeal—9/10 (D'aw..... :3)

TOTAL: 40/50
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Alaskapidove (VILE) - - - Cradle

Creativity/Theme— 7/10
Grammar—8/10
Use of literary devices—7/10
Flow—8/10
Reader Appeal— 8/10

TOTAL: 38/50
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Grassy Aggron (The Armada) - - - War for Life, Freedom by Death

Creativity/Theme— 8/10
Grammar—7/10
Use of literary devices— 8/10
Flow— 9/10
Reader Appeal—8/10

TOTAL: 40/50
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White Wolf of the Snow (The Cullen) - - - “Where Our Loyalties Lie”

Creativity/Theme— 8/10
Grammar— 8/10
Use of literary devices—7/10
Flow—7/10
Reader Appeal—8/10

TOTAL: 38/50
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Gokudera-Kun (Octopus Babies) - - - “The Dragon and the Bard”

Creativity/Theme— 9/10
Grammar—8/10
Use of literary devices—9/10
Flow—9/10
Reader Appeal—8/10

TOTAL: 43/50
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Kai-Mei (VILE) - - - Juice Fence

Creativity/Theme— 9/10
Grammar—7/10
Use of literary devices—8/10
Flow—8/10
Reader Appeal— ;^; <--translates to 9/10

TOTAL: 41/50



1st Place - - - Gokudera-Kun, Octopus Babies

2nd Place - - - Kai Mei, VILE





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--Week Three’s theme: Truth---

*In honor of the release of Pokémon Black and White, this week’s theme will be about truth. In the Unovan Legend of the twin heroes, the master of Reshiram believed in the pursuit of truth. Similarly, this week’s prompt will be about either the pursuit of truth, or of an existing truth.

Deadline: July 15th by 12:00 PM EST
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Old 07-10-2011, 08:07 PM
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Oh, OK.

*is sorry to self* *infinity facepalms isn't enough*

Anyway, I'll start work on my entry and edit post with form.
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WAR Team: Elemental
Title: Destiny Journey
Form: Playscript
Link: http://pokemonelite2000.com/forum/sh...03#post3314403

It's about someone discovering their destiny (guess what their name is), which is like a truth. So yah.

Extra: It doesn't seem like many others are entering ATM.
/inb4 next theme is Ideals.
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Old 07-15-2011, 07:56 AM
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WAR Team: Octopus Babies
Title: The Undying Truth
Form: Short Story
Link: Right here
Other: I decided to go a little darker with this one. People believe things differently, and they each have their own version of the "truth".
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Old 07-16-2011, 06:21 PM
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Hmm, only two entries? Well... okay then. ^^' Week Three is closed now.

And yes, IceKyurem, next week's theme is...


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---Week Four’s theme: Ideals---

*The ancient Unovan legend tells of another hero, who believed in the pursuit of ideals. Similarly, this week’s theme is Ideals—the pursuit of an ideal, or the exploration thereof, you decide.
Deadline: July 22 by 12:00 PM EST
Betcha didn't see that one coming, eh? ;D
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Old 07-17-2011, 10:38 PM
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(I believe that I reserve the right to double post here)

Here are Week Three's results!

IceKyurem (Elemental) - - - Destiny Journey

Creativity/Theme— 5/10
Grammar— 6/10
Use of literary devices— 5/10
Flow—5/10
Reader Appeal— 5/10
TOTAL: 26/50
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Gokudera-Kun (Octopus Babies) - - - The Undying Truth

Creativity/Theme—9/10
Grammar—8/10
Use of literary devices—8/10
Flow—9/10
Reader Appeal—9/10
TOTAL: 43/50




1st Place - - - Gokudera-Kun, Octopus Babies

2nd Place - - - IceKyurem, Pokemon Elemental


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Old 07-20-2011, 08:36 PM
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WAR Team: VILE
Title: Reminders
Form: Another short story, bahahaha
Link: Ohhai?

I decided to play around a bit and focus on how a young child's ideals in the world are so different from how things actually go. I guess that would fit under exploration of an ideal, then... lol. It made a lot more sense in my head... ._.
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Old 07-23-2011, 01:07 AM
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WAR Team: Octopus Babies
Title: Consume
Form: Poem
Link: http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/foru....php?p=3317673
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Old 07-23-2011, 04:54 PM
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Week Four is now closed.
Here's is next week's theme!

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--Week Five’s theme: Lost and Found

*Life grows bitter when we have lost something precious to us, but new joy can be found when we find something new. For this week’s theme, write about the losing something, but regaining/gaining.
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Old 07-24-2011, 06:59 PM
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Okay, here is Week Four's Results:

Week Four

Kei Mei --- Reminders

Creativity/Theme—8/10
Grammar—8/10
Use of literary devices—8/10
Flow—8/10
Reader Appeal—9/10
TOTAL: 41/50

Iso --- Consume


Creativity—8/10
Grammar—8/10
Use of literary devices—8/10
Flow—7/10
Reader Appeal—8/10
TOTAL: 39/50


1st Place - - - Kei Mei, VILE

2nd Place - - - Iso, Octupus Babies



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Old 07-27-2011, 10:05 PM
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War Team: VILE
Title: Piece of the Heart ((I'M SO PUNNY)
Form: Short Story
Link: Here.
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Old 07-28-2011, 04:10 PM
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War Team: The Armada
Title: Throne Out of Time (I'm punnier)
Form: (really) Short Story
Link: http://pokemonelite2000.com/forum/sh...d.php?t=115304
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Old 07-31-2011, 02:34 AM
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You guys are both pretty punny xD

But! As for the results...


Week 5:

Kei Mei --- Piece of the Heart

Creativity/Theme— 9/10
Grammar—9/10
Use of literary devices—8/10
Flow—9/10
Reader Appeal—9/10
TOTAL: 44/50

Lusankya --- Throne Out of Time

Creativity—8/10
Grammar—8/10
Use of literary devices—9/10
Flow—8/10
Reader Appeal—9/10
TOTAL: 42/50


1st Place - - - Kei Mei, VILE

2nd Place - - - Lusankya, Armada
(Wait, that was the first [and last] Armada entry :o)


Thanks for the entries, guys! They have been so interesting to read! :D If I had my druthers, you would all be winners! YOU ROCK MY SOCKS! <3
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