I suggest you stop multi-posting in case the forum gestapo catch you.
Anyway. It is
an interesting concept. Something nobody has really covered before.
I am just concerned on how the story will play out, because it seems that the only planning you have done is the characters and the background. You need a stoy-board, per se. Good idea, just work on the presentation.
Can't wait to see it when you are finished. When shall it be released? If it has been, please; let me read it!