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Old 09-07-2010, 08:31 PM
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:/ Me no like mine...
Thats kinda rude. You could elaborate on why, rather than just saying you don't like it >.>
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Old 09-07-2010, 08:37 PM
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Thats kinda rude. You could elaborate on why, rather than just saying you don't like it >.>
I'll explain here. The main text is covering the tiger, and the lyrics are covering the important parts of the face. It just looks bad that way.
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Old 09-07-2010, 08:39 PM
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I'll explain here. The main text is covering the tiger, and the lyrics are covering the important parts of the face. It just looks bad that way.
There we go, much better, and see how easy that was?
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Old 09-07-2010, 08:44 PM
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There we go, much better, and see how easy that was?
EASY?! Are you serious? It took ages (for me anyway) to think of the wording. I was like "Er.... iunno, too rude... yeah, take that out... hmmmmmm..."
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Old 09-07-2010, 09:52 PM
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What'd I say about chatting?
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Old 09-07-2010, 10:30 PM
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Not to much of a fan of mine either. :X The background doesn't match the image, and the lyrics really shouldn't be over lapping Smoochum. Also in most of your "Text banners" the text looks really bad, recommend downloading fonts and putting the text layers on screen or overlay and lowering the Opacity of the lyric part. That could also work for the Kat Deluna Part :3. Also I see no general flow or color Scheme, towards mine, you used red text on a blue background, and smoochum's colors really dont match the background either. Only part I kinda like it the kat deluna part, but its just too bold and needs a lower opacity.

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Old 09-08-2010, 08:14 AM
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What'd I say about chatting?
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I don't like this either. The lyrics not on Gardevoir just are too visible. I'd suggest making your lyrics nearly invisible on the focal, but just a little bit visible on the front. Try lowering the opacity of both text layers way more. That's it from me.
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I kinda agree with JJ here, you need some new fonts, and I think the text should blend in or something. I really like my banner personally, but I think you worked especially hard on it because its for me :3
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Old 09-10-2010, 03:22 AM
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Sorry about the double post but I want to revive the thread for my request :3

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Form:
Render(s): Uh, I'll get it up in second after I fix the problem with my computer. Whenever I try to upload anything, the internet crashes.
Size: Same as current
Text: Powerwolf
Sub Text: Lupus Dei
Anything else: I'd like the theme colors to be dark red an black, and for you to throw some Cd4's into the background and such, just make it as good as my last banner :3
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Old 09-10-2010, 07:46 AM
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Render(s): http://images2.fanpop.com/images/pho...86-300-483.jpg
Size: 360x148
Text: Adventure
Sub Text: It's not your weapon, it's YOU who decides the fate.
Anything else: GET THE PIKACHU IN!!!! Lol. Also, leave a small watermark or something because I won't be able to credit you. Btw, you liekz .pe2k// too right?!
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Render(s): http://i56.tinypic.com/2i3hci.jpg
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Text:Shikijika
Sub Text: Make up your freakin' mind!
Anything else: PR srews up my compy so I couldn't get a backround render, but can I have Autumn colours (orange,brown,red) starting in one corner and Spring colours in the other (pink,yellow,green) joining in the middle with the text ^-^ and um....could I please have a 156x143 avvie to go with it please thankies much!
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Hi. For starters, I'd just like to say that what I'm about to say are comments on your work, not spam/flame/chat. So...your art's quite nice, but there are a few things that can be fixed. First, non-main text (lyrics) should NOT overlap the render, or at least not be as visible. Second, you should either lower the opacity of both the lyrics and main text layers, or set them to Overlay (the main text layer could be duplicated for visibility, if it isn't that clear). And finally, please try to match the colors of the background with the render given, your art would look waaaay better. That's all, but this is just my own input on the matter, you can still continue with your own style since it's up to you. G'luck, then. :]
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Old 09-11-2010, 12:18 AM
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Sorry to dissappoint, but frankly, I suck at Graphics. 'Twas silly of me to make a shop, i'twas. But trust me: If you want a request done, you'd take your requests to someone better than me. Which is anyone who does banners here.

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Default Re: {--MR's Graphic shop--} {-CLOSED-} `See last post`

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Sorry to dissappoint, but frankly, I suck at Graphics. 'Twas silly of me to make a shop, i'twas. But trust me: If you want a request done, you'd take your requests to someone better than me. Which is anyone who does banners here.

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You don't suck, it's your art. No one is bad at art, because there isn't a right or wrong. That goes for every artist and writer, ect. anyone who creates a form of art. You might think you need some help, well, there's always room for improvement. You just gotta find a way to improve. You shouldn't think of you/your work so low like that, in your last sentence. Making a shop isn't all a silly idea, it helps you improve. Anyway, you don't have to listen to me, but I'm just saying. Anyway, if you need this unlocked, PM me, VM me, ect.

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