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Old 10-18-2011, 01:43 AM
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Since you mostly got rid of the black outlines, which makes it look nice and soft, maybe you should also do that for the hair? Just cos the hair's such a light colour. I think the fluff around Evumbreon's neck shouldn't be so.. um... fluffy XD on the left side. It seems like it's sprited as if the Pokemon was facing forwards, but the Pokemon's on a bit of an angle, so maybe that left-hand side should be shaved off a bit since it's turned away... but otherwise it's really cute! Do I make sense? I don't know! Anyway, I like the trainer's colour scheme too. =) Sorry I'm not very good at criticism, but hopefully that was useful somehow!
Thanks for the criticism!

Actually, the Eevee was meant to be a disguise, thus the outlines can't be messed with. Some of the rings, though were custom xD (The shading...I kinna derp at shading, and I was stupid enough to make everything but the outlines white when I made it)

On the trainer...I think that's a good idea! It was honestly meant to look like Cinderella, but I didn't know if I would be good enough at shading the evil color of the sun to do it, most of the time I fail at shading yellow (Who agrees that yellow...it looks weird when its almost black?).

Imma change that up right now...-opens paint-

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Now some fail crits.

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I really like it overall; it makes seel seem cute (I highly dislike how their tounge is always sticking out and that the seel's fangs stick out).

Like Mawie said, I think the head dissapears too quick; maybe a frame between it disapearing and the one currently before that?

Another suggestion, maybe a fishing pole or something neerby? That is, only if you want to take the time to add it.
Sorry if this didn't help. at all.


The circle, as I can see myself, is wonky. Its meant to be a creeped out Ghastly, but I was too lazy/failed at doing the smoke, so I had an idea; Make it a glow and add smoke bawlz, indicating that its too scared to have the smoke. Semicomplete scratch there.
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Old 10-18-2011, 01:52 AM
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It wasn't supposed to be bobbing; I don't really know why I described it like that. It's more of a, "Hey, I'm Seel, and you can't catch me!" with its tongue sticking out. But thanks for the kind words!!
No problem; I apologize if I sounded harsh at all. I have been very iffy within the past few days, and groggy, and...just completely bleh. And I'm very naggy on and off. I blame PMS, seriously.

Anyways, I usually do like to be blunt, but perhaps I came off as a tinge too strong lately.

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Old 10-18-2011, 01:53 AM
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Now some fail crits.

@Cherubi
I really like it overall; it makes seel seem cute (I highly dislike how their tounge is always sticking out and that the seel's fangs stick out).

Like Mawie said, I think the head dissapears too quick; maybe a frame between it disapearing and the one currently before that?

Another suggestion, maybe a fishing pole or something neerby? That is, only if you want to take the time to add it.
Sorry if this didn't help. at all.
Thank you! That actually did help! I'll look into adding some stuff, I just have a lot to do before that!

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The circle, as I can see myself, is wonky. Its meant to be a creeped out Ghastly, but I was too lazy/failed at doing the smoke, so I had an idea; Make it a glow and add smoke bawlz, indicating that its too scared to have the smoke. Semicomplete scratch there.
I like the idea of it, but the eyes should be bigger, like all Gastly's are.
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Old 10-18-2011, 01:44 PM
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Thank you! That actually did help! I'll look into adding some stuff, I just have a lot to do before that!


I like the idea of it, but the eyes should be bigger, like all Gastly's are.
Hahaha, you don't need to do it, its just something that would prolly look cool, and add to the 'Cant catch me' thing.

Thats honestly as big as I can get them without failing xD
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Old 10-18-2011, 08:00 PM
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I did this for the "complete the request thread",and wanted feedback.
PS. I know I suck TT.T

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Old 10-22-2011, 06:56 AM
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Lack of description, I need sleep.

Just a concept I thought out. Let me know of any anatomy inconsistencies and blah if you see them.

kthxbai imma go sleep nao.
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Old 11-05-2011, 10:45 AM
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it's a splice with sentret as base, drifblim, the big mushroom (still learning names...), and the one with the lance(again, still learning names). crit please, i'd really appreciate it!

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Old 11-05-2011, 03:43 PM
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Lack of description, I need sleep.

Just a concept I thought out. Let me know of any anatomy inconsistencies and blah if you see them.

kthxbai imma go sleep nao.
I remember seeing this on DA :) To me, the body looks a little long and a bit too rounded. To me, a dragon's chest and hips should be the same size, with the stomach (and where the ribcage ends) being a little bit thinner, giving it a curvier shape. The front leg on the left side of the dragon (our right), seems to come out of the shoulder a little bit too high compared to the right leg (our left)

That was my attempt at crit, I hope it helps a bit :)

Anyone want to give me crit on a few fusions of mine?



I realize the tail is a bit...wonky on the Growlithe/Zangoose fusion.
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Old 11-07-2011, 12:23 AM
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I think I honestly just need more practice with dragons at a 3/4ths angle.

But seriously, thank you. It's about time I received some good advice; I haven't for quite a while, actually. This takes the cake.
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Old 11-07-2011, 01:25 AM
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Glad I could be helpful :) I believe good constructive criticism is what everyone needs to get better, and I want to give it!

Also looking for some comments and crit on these fusions :)

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Old 11-09-2011, 01:22 PM
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Glad I could be helpful :) I believe good constructive criticism is what everyone needs to get better, and I want to give it!

Also looking for some comments and crit on these fusions :)

I do like the Charizard/Blastoise fusion - the way you editted the shell so it would fit Charizard's body is done brilliantly! I would just say that the curved lines on the knee-caps make the legs seem a bit off - but that's just my opinion.



Cowardigon - The Torn Emotion Pokemon

Cowardigon is classically a cowardice Pokemon. However, underneath their shell of fear lies true strength matched by none other.


I just had to add the description xD So yeah - I scratched this and I'd just like some feedback so I can improve it. Thanks :)

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Old 11-13-2011, 01:26 AM
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Thanks for the crit!

As for the scratch, it seems like there is an awful lot of black in the outline, and the blue seems a bit too saturated and a little too dark, but that's my opinion.

Also, just a few more sprites.



Aaaaaand...



Marik took the longest (probably about half an hour...possibly more...). First time I've done a trainer that needed any kind of scratching for the hair, accessories, ect.
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Old 11-16-2011, 02:13 AM
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I can do anything else but, I'm a noob at splicing sprites into "fakemon." Can someone help me with this one?

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Old 11-25-2011, 09:57 AM
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Please crit



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Old 11-25-2011, 10:21 PM
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Ok! so, i've been gone for quite a while. Recently i've started my own adoptables site. it's lame because it's only a myadopts site, but I still enjoy running it and such, and it gives me great spriting experience. so, I started making some adoptables and anyway, my newest one is my favorite. Please C+CC
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