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Character Name: Dylan Lonator
Age: Fourteen
Race: Human
Gender: Male

Appearance:
Dylan has long, very light brown hair, that’s almost blond. He has blond highlights in his messy hair. He has sky blue eyes and light skin. Dylan wears a nice, buttoned white shirt with the bottom two buttons and top two buttons unbuttoned. Over that he wears a black leather jacket and dark pants. He has black shoes that almost look like cleats, but are more like parkour shoes—they’re great for climbing, and even performing stunts. Dylan is very thin at his age, weighing 107 pounds. His height is average, 5’6”. He’s not too muscular—his arms are pretty thin and he has barely visible abs, but a broad chest. His sunglasses are usually up on his head, but not covering his eyes.

Personality:

Dylan is a very lonely person, and often isn’t very cheerful. He tries to stay serious but at times can act silly, and can be annoyed or bothered very easily. He thinks in a way that he’s not sensitive, it’s more that people purposely try to bother him. If he gets mad enough, he’s willing to fight, but usually not with anyone not close to him—He’ll fight with his brother, but not many other people.

He’s also very skilled. Ever since he turned thirteen, he became interested in being in war and his parents never approved of it, because they were afraid of him dying. They just forced themselves to think that Dylan was in a phase, although he really actually practiced things he’d do in war—He practiced with knives (Which he kept secret from his parents), He practiced jumping over things and climbing, running quickly, and being stealthy and staying secretive. Although he’s skilled in these things, he can’t quite perfect most of them because he doesn’t have anybody to practice with.

Dylan is also very smart, being a straight A student in school, and knowing so much more than other kids at school. So, most people asked him for help. He usually defended everyone from bullies, weather he liked the victim or not, and weather he was stronger than the bully or not. He usually helps people he likes—so, really, he only helps his close friends and most girls. Dylan is also known as a cry baby, because when he was young, he never did anything wrong. So, when he does something wrong now, he doesn’t know how to take it, and just…cries. He’s fooled everyone into thinking that he cries on purpose to get out of trouble, though—and that’s worked. He’s gotten out of trouble many times by crying.

History:

Dylan was born being ambidextrous on January fifteenth. He lived in an upper middle class family with his father being the owner of a large business. He lived in a pretty big house with the biggest room out of the three rooms for him, his brother, and his sister. His room had a large bunk bed. Dylan typically slept on the bottom bunk when he got out of his crib—it was lined with a sort of tempurpedic liner. He also had a tempurpedic pillow and his bed was stuffed with…stuffed things. Stuffed animals. He had about five cats, three small bears, one big bear, two dogs, a caterpillar, a snake, and a few other various stuffed animals. He usually set up a thick blanket on the top bunk that extended down to cover the open sides of the bottom bunk, so barely any light went through. He had a walk-in closet with more and more ugly shirts on one half and nice, new shirts and jackets on the other half. There were shelves lined with things such as a toy electrical truck that he never used, some extra blankets, sheets, sleeping bags, and pillows, or a stack of nerf guns for when friends spent the night to use in ‘nerf wars.’ His dressers were usually cluttered with various items ranging from stacks of books to stacks of DVDs to stacks of games to stacks of CDs to stacks of…Pretty much anything that could be stacked and neatly organized on his dressers. On his tall dresser sat a stereo system and above his short dresser sat his 32” HD TV attached to the wall with a claw. The shelves next to the window on another side of his room were mainly full of games, Legos, and books. In the corner was a Lego table full of creative architectural designs that Dylan had built over the years. Next to that was a desk for drawing and doing homework—it had everything it needed for it too. There was a pencil sharpener, a compartment filled with mechanical pencils, normal pencils, shading pencils, all organized. Between his short dresser and tall dresser sat a swivel chair with his computer full of stories, scanned drawings, and graphics images in front of it. Near his TV was what he thought was the best video game setup ever—An X-Box 360 and Nintendo Wii which could both be played at the same time, a DS and a spot for it to charge, a rack designed for Wii games and accessories and its X-Box 360 counterpart, and a great video game chair that made the sound from the TV come out of the chair and right into his ears. Dylan’s room was his source of entertainment, and if he had a mini-fridge and a toilet, he would be able to live in that room. He was almost always in his room, alone, separate from his family. He was very independent, so he could do everything on his own in his room and around the house, including getting ready for school, making breakfast, lunch, and dinner, completing homework without help…Pretty much everything. That’s why Dylan was lonely.

One Summer night, when Dylan was about eleven years old, he was lying awake in bed. He had planned to have so much fun that night. His cousins were supposed to come over, his brother’s friend was supposed to come over, and they’d all have a big nerf war, and watch funny prank call videos, and play Wii and X-Box 360, but none of that happened. One of Dylan’s cousins was sick, and his brother’s friend, Alex, had just moved, so he couldn’t spend the night just yet. So, Dylan was just lying in bed with nothing to do. You’d assume that with a room like his, he’d always have something to do, but he wanted to do something with other people, not alone. Without any close friends to come spend the night as usual or his relatives to come play with him, he sat. Alone. However, the silence was interrupted by a howl and a small light coming from out the window. Dylan glanced over at his alarm clock, which read 1:26 AM. Dylan ran outside anyway (Luckily his parents didn’t set the alarm on the door) and bolted over to the source of the small light. Dylan bent down to see it was a pup, with fire coming out of its mouth…It was a Growlithe! She just looked and Dylan, stared for a moment, then made a soft barking sound that almost sounded like a whimper. He picked her up and brought her inside. He ran up to his room, hoping that he didn’t wake anyone up. Then he turned the lights on and grabbed a flashlight from his dresser. He dragged the flashlight around her, to see no collar or accessory, and no sign of having an owner. All he saw was a scrape on her body. He jumped when he saw it, and knew he had to treat it somehow. He ran downstairs and into the kitchen, then grabbed a step-stool so he could reach the medicine cabinet. He pulled out some cream, some bandages, and a wipe. He then went back upstairs to see that the Growlithe never moved. He sprang into action. First, he wiped the scrape. “This’ll clean your scrape,” he said. Then, he took the cream and rubbed it on. “And this’ll stop it from getting any worse.” Then he put on the bandages. “There, all better now!” He stroked her and asked, “Do you have an owner?” She just shook her head as if she could understand him. Dylan named her Flare.

Dylan grew up with Flare, training with her, teaching her tricks, playing with her…They were happy together. When Dylan turned thirteen, he had a sudden interest in combat. He obtained two knives from somewhere I can’t reveal—but he keeps them strapped to his legs, and pulls them out when danger strikes. Well, that explains why he has never used them, because danger had never struck. He began to train himself in other things, like, running quickly, being stealthy, and even parkour, for climbing and jumping over things. He wanted to someday be on the frontlines fighting in war, and planned to be of service to his country before he got married.

Pokémon/Weapons:


Flare, female Growlithe


Two tactical knives

Theme Song: Pillar - Frontline

Other: N/A

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Character Name: Dylan Lonator
Age: Fourteen
Race: Human
Gender: Male

Appearance:
Dylan has long, very light brown hair, that’s almost blond. He has blond highlights in his messy hair. He has sky blue eyes and light skin. Dylan wears a nice, buttoned white shirt with the bottom two buttons and top two buttons unbuttoned. Over that he wears a black leather jacket and dark pants. He has black shoes that almost look like cleats, but are more like parkour shoes—they’re great for climbing, and even performing stunts. Dylan is very thin at his age, weighing 107 pounds. His height is average, 5’6”. He’s not too muscular—his arms are pretty thin and he has barely visible abs, but a broad chest. His sunglasses are usually up on his head, but not covering his eyes.

Personality:

Dylan is a very lonely person, and often isn’t very cheerful. He tries to stay serious but at times can act silly, and can be annoyed or bothered very easily. He thinks in a way that he’s not sensitive, it’s more that people purposely try to bother him. If he gets mad enough, he’s willing to fight, but usually not with anyone not close to him—He’ll fight with his brother, but not many other people.

He’s also very skilled. Ever since he turned thirteen, he became interested in being in war and his parents never approved of it, because they were afraid of him dying. They just forced themselves to think that Dylan was in a phase, although he really actually practiced things he’d do in war—He practiced with knives (Which he kept secret from his parents), He practiced jumping over things and climbing, running quickly, and being stealthy and staying secretive. Although he’s skilled in these things, he can’t quite perfect most of them because he doesn’t have anybody to practice with.

Dylan is also very smart, being a straight A student in school, and knowing so much more than other kids at school. So, most people asked him for help. He usually defended everyone from bullies, weather he liked the victim or not, and weather he was stronger than the bully or not. He usually helps people he likes—so, really, he only helps his close friends and most girls. Dylan is also known as a cry baby, because when he was young, he never did anything wrong. So, when he does something wrong now, he doesn’t know how to take it, and just…cries. He’s fooled everyone into thinking that he cries on purpose to get out of trouble, though—and that’s worked. He’s gotten out of trouble many times by crying.

History:

Dylan was born being ambidextrous on January fifteenth. He lived in an upper middle class family with his father being the owner of a large business. He lived in a pretty big house with the biggest room out of the three rooms for him, his brother, and his sister. His room had a large bunk bed. Dylan typically slept on the bottom bunk when he got out of his crib—it was lined with a sort of tempurpedic liner. He also had a tempurpedic pillow and his bed was stuffed with…stuffed things. Stuffed animals. He had about five cats, three small bears, one big bear, two dogs, a caterpillar, a snake, and a few other various stuffed animals. He usually set up a thick blanket on the top bunk that extended down to cover the open sides of the bottom bunk, so barely any light went through. He had a walk-in closet with more and more ugly shirts on one half and nice, new shirts and jackets on the other half. There were shelves lined with things such as a toy electrical truck that he never used, some extra blankets, sheets, sleeping bags, and pillows, or a stack of nerf guns for when friends spent the night to use in ‘nerf wars.’ His dressers were usually cluttered with various items ranging from stacks of books to stacks of DVDs to stacks of games to stacks of CDs to stacks of…Pretty much anything that could be stacked and neatly organized on his dressers. On his tall dresser sat a stereo system and above his short dresser sat his 32” HD TV attached to the wall with a claw. The shelves next to the window on another side of his room were mainly full of games, Legos, and books. In the corner was a Lego table full of creative architectural designs that Dylan had built over the years. Next to that was a desk for drawing and doing homework—it had everything it needed for it too. There was a pencil sharpener, a compartment filled with mechanical pencils, normal pencils, shading pencils, all organized. Between his short dresser and tall dresser sat a swivel chair with his computer full of stories, scanned drawings, and graphics images in front of it. Near his TV was what he thought was the best video game setup ever—An X-Box 360 and Nintendo Wii which could both be played at the same time, a DS and a spot for it to charge, a rack designed for Wii games and accessories and its X-Box 360 counterpart, and a great video game chair that made the sound from the TV come out of the chair and right into his ears. Dylan’s room was his source of entertainment, and if he had a mini-fridge and a toilet, he would be able to live in that room. He was almost always in his room, alone, separate from his family. He was very independent, so he could do everything on his own in his room and around the house, including getting ready for school, making breakfast, lunch, and dinner, completing homework without help…Pretty much everything. That’s why Dylan was lonely.

One Summer night, when Dylan was about eleven years old, he was lying awake in bed. He had planned to have so much fun that night. His cousins were supposed to come over, his brother’s friend was supposed to come over, and they’d all have a big nerf war, and watch funny prank call videos, and play Wii and X-Box 360, but none of that happened. One of Dylan’s cousins was sick, and his brother’s friend, Alex, had just moved, so he couldn’t spend the night just yet. So, Dylan was just lying in bed with nothing to do. You’d assume that with a room like his, he’d always have something to do, but he wanted to do something with other people, not alone. Without any close friends to come spend the night as usual or his relatives to come play with him, he sat. Alone. However, the silence was interrupted by a howl and a small light coming from out the window. Dylan glanced over at his alarm clock, which read 1:26 AM. Dylan ran outside anyway (Luckily his parents didn’t set the alarm on the door) and bolted over to the source of the small light. Dylan bent down to see it was a pup, with fire coming out of its mouth…It was a Growlithe! She just looked and Dylan, stared for a moment, then made a soft barking sound that almost sounded like a whimper. He picked her up and brought her inside. He ran up to his room, hoping that he didn’t wake anyone up. Then he turned the lights on and grabbed a flashlight from his dresser. He dragged the flashlight around her, to see no collar or accessory, and no sign of having an owner. All he saw was a scrape on her body. He jumped when he saw it, and knew he had to treat it somehow. He ran downstairs and into the kitchen, then grabbed a step-stool so he could reach the medicine cabinet. He pulled out some cream, some bandages, and a wipe. He then went back upstairs to see that the Growlithe never moved. He sprang into action. First, he wiped the scrape. “This’ll clean your scrape,” he said. Then, he took the cream and rubbed it on. “And this’ll stop it from getting any worse.” Then he put on the bandages. “There, all better now!” He stroked her and asked, “Do you have an owner?” She just shook her head as if she could understand him. Dylan named her Flare.

Dylan grew up with Flare, training with her, teaching her tricks, playing with her…They were happy together. When Dylan turned thirteen, he had a sudden interest in combat. He obtained two knives from somewhere I can’t reveal—but he keeps them strapped to his legs, and pulls them out when danger strikes. Well, that explains why he has never used them, because danger had never struck. He began to train himself in other things, like, running quickly, being stealthy, and even parkour, for climbing and jumping over things. He wanted to someday be on the frontlines fighting in war, and planned to be of service to his country before he got married.

Pokémon/Weapons:


Flare, female Growlithe


Two tactical knives

Theme Song: Pillar - Frontline

Other: N/A
I've no idea why you described his room, but eh, I guess if you need filler information...

Looks fine with me. I'll let my helper peoples pick it apart if they want to; post whenever
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Old 04-08-2010, 06:48 PM
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It's not filler information! Don't accuse me!

...Yeah, it's filler information.
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Character name: Dreyken

Age: 58

Race: Firedrake (A race of dragon-like creature who are a bright red and gold and are about the size of house cats. In their true form they are only about seven feet tall at the shoulder, but they shrink themselves down to a more convenient size so they can follow their Chosen around.)

Gender: Male

Appearance: Dreyken looks like a dragon, predictably. His scales are a bright crimson, and his underside, wing membranes, spikes, and eyes are all a lovely shade of gold. He has a long pair of horns on his head, and a crest of tinier spikes decorating the part where the neck meets the skull, almost like a collar. The spikes follow his spine all the way to the end of his tail; even his wing bones have a few spikes coming out of them.

Yes, I know my dragons looks screwy. Shush.

Personality: Dreyken, like all drakes, is playful and cheery, always flitting around and examining things like he has ADHD. He loves to help out others, even with small tasks that serve no real importance. However, he has a touch of sarcasm reserved for people, and with his sometimes wise advice it's hard to tell whether he mature or a child at heart.

Dreyken loves chasing things, particularly rats and pigeons, both which he can't stand and more often than not munches on them for a snack. If he's surprised or angry, he has an unfortunate tendency to shoot flames from his nostrils, occasionally setting something on fire by accident. He can communicate with telepathy, but only to Cinder, because Cinder is his Chosen. But, Caron is Cinder's twin, so in a way he is an exception. People often mistake firedrakes for being dumb animals with animal instincts, something that deeply offends them and will sometimes make them want to tear your throat out. Dreyken is pretty easy to get along with, just don't make fun of him or make any threatening moves towards Cinder.

History: In the world of Cinder and Caron, there are a soecial high-class of mages referred to as magi (magus is singular). These magi are split in three distinct groups, the Good, Neutral, and Evil. Each class follows the path of a specific deity, and each is Chosen by one of the three types of drakes depending on what deity they follow. Dreyken was 53 when he Chose Cinder (a bit like a very young adult) and was irrevocably stuck to him.

At first Cinder was a little wary of the firedrake. It was not an uncommon thing, people were usually nervous when they suddenly shared a mind with a sentient being that wasn't even human. He kept his distance, physically and mentally, from Dreyken, but Dreyken was persistant and doggedly followed Cinder wherever he went. The new magus was more than a little freaked out and annoyed, but he knew he wasn't going to get rid of Dreyken so he grudgingly allowed it. Unlike his brother, Caron loved Dreyken almost immediately, and the two were actually friends. True, Dreyken would talk to him much, but Caron didn't seem to mind.

As time passed, and Dreyken saved them from numerous tight spots, assisted Cinder with magic, and proved himself to be an invaluable companion, Cinder began to grow friendlier towards his drake. He liked his biting sarcasm and advice, for it is rare to find wisdom in the world nowadays. Then, the duo known as Cinder and Caron became a trio, with their little house cat-sized drake as an irreplacable third. He proved himself valuable to the brothers over and over, and would to others as well.

Special powers: Firedrakes, like all of the draconian family, can breath fire. A surprising amount too, for such a small animal. They can change their size from their original height to something as small as a mouse, and anything inbetween. They cannot grow larger than their normal size though, and rarely change out of their chosen cat-size. If they ever do, it's to transport someone really fast or to fight.

Firedrakes have some grasp of magic, but it's often unpredictable and works only with their auras. What makes them most fascinating though, is that they can teleport through fire (earning their title). If you have a fire going nearby, whether it be a torch, fireplace, campfire, or anything similar, a firedrake can suddenly pop in and out of it to wherever they chose. (Think of it like a portal of sorts)

Theme Song: Come As You Are (for some odd reason O_o)

Other: He hates cooked meat :P
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Character name: Joseph and Joshua “The Clones” Antonimous.

Age: 14

Race: Semi-mermen (I don’t care what you say, dad. It’s NOT girly!”

Gender: Male

Appearance: They both have extremely messy, black hair (though Joshes is approximately an inch longer) and bright, turquoise eyes. They each have a thin, four-inch-long scar on the side of their face (left for Joe, right for Josh) because they were born Siamese.

They usualy wear black, sometimes “mixing-it-up” with blue’s, green’s and pinks. They’re never seen without a pair of fingerless gloves (style may vary). They each have a silver chain around their neck that have a small, glass vile on it which is said to contain the water from the lake of a Lugia. They keep them for good luck.

Personality: They’re very sarcastic and stubborn. They often do magic tricks, and can get extremely annoying. They care for one another, and rarely trust others. They both have mild ADHD (Josh also has MDS (Mild Depression Syndrome)) which causes them to be hyperactive at inappropriate times,. Because of this, and several other *ahem* contributing factors, outsiders consider them to be insane, often referring them to people who can “help” them.

History: They were born in Snowpoint City, Sinnoh. They had a normal and happy childhood, often visiting the Snowpoint Gym (where their mother was the Gym Leader) up until they were six, when their mother died from breast cancer, leaving Candice to take over the Gym.

They never knew their father, as their mother went to a sperm bank and never married, so they moved to Pallet Town in Kanto to live with their Aunt Delia. There, at age ten, they began their journey. They travelled the four regions, competing in contests and various tag-events.

When they were twelve, however, on a visit back home in Snowpoint City, they started to explore the surrounding icy seas. They found a small island, and went to explore. They found a small cave in there which, despite the sub-zero temperatures outside, was quite warm. Once there, whilst swimming in a small pool, them moon suddenly shone through a perfectly circle hole above them. The water began to suddenly bubble, and Joe and Josh experienced a tickling sensation on their legs. Upon inspecting, they found that their legs had been replaced by a 150 cm blue fish tail.

Special powers: Because they are semi-mermen, they only grow tails when wet. As well as this, they gained the powers of Hydrokenisis (controlling water). Joe gained the additional ability to freeze water, while Josh gained the ability to boil and, if so desired, evaporate it.

Theme Song: HAMSTER SAWNG! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p3G5IXn0K7A (do do do do do do do do)

Other: Um, Pokemon, I guess, since there isn’t a section for that XD

Joe: Veanasaur, Pigeot, Umbreon, Arbok, Gastrodon (North), Houndoom.
Josh: Charizard, Sarapter, Espeon, Ambipom, Gastrodon (South), Mighteana.


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I can already tell you that Metal will tell you that you need to work on length, especially when it comes to personality and appearance. Also, people RP with twins, even identical ones typically break the SUs up to give each more defining qualities.
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I can already tell you that Metal will tell you that you need to work on length, especially when it comes to personality and appearance.
Sorry. It looked soooooo much longer on Word DX

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Also, people RP with twins, even identical ones typically break the SUs up to give each more defining qualities.
Um... we actualy exist. I'm Joe, and Josh is my twin. I just wanted to bace it on reality... hehheh.
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I can understand that, but if you look over at Blank Academy, I broke up ny own twins into different SUs and gave them more life. Try looking at a few other SUs on here, between Metal, me, and Chibi(Enkaku Kumori) we've beaten everyone's SUs up and had them improve. You're absoultely no exception, trust me, I'm not singling you out.
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Yepyep, Winter-chan tells you right! More detail! How do they look? Do they have scars? Are they short? Did one of them have a horrifying accident that makes his personality much different? All that needs to be in there! You should break up your twins; unless they're attached at the waist, chances are they haven't had the exact same experiences, or taken things the same way. Like how Ulquiorra is so melancholy all the time. *whacked from a random portal*

Aanyways, try to get a good solid paragraph for each of their descriptions. I'm sure there's SOMETHING different, even if it's just clothing styles. One of 'em might need glasses, eh? Detail, detail, that's the key~ *shot for acting so cheerful*
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Character name: Shin Kuriushi

Age: 20

Race: Pokemon Trainer/ Death Scythe Fighter

Gender: Female

Appearance: Shin stands 5"4 which is mostly an average height of a teenager, she weighs 120 pounds. Not too skinny not too fat but normal. Her hair has brownish and redish like layers which are straight that go up to her waist. It's color turns light light brown when in the sunlight which gives a nice effect of showing her dark hidden streaks that are burried beneath the lock of hair. She wears two yellow ribbons so her hair doesn't get messy when the wind starts to blow. She creates two little pigtails that are tied above the temples (2 cm) away. Her eyes are blood red and her eyelashes aren't very long like other girls. Her nose is a little pointy but still cute. She wears clear lipgloss but people notices the glossiness on her lips. She wears a pendant with a red aurora jewel that is shaped like an oval with silver wrapped around the aurora. The pendant goes up to her chest which isn't very long.
She wears a red jacket with 6 black buttons and a pocket on the left chest, the pocket is the size of a childs index finger with only one item that you can hold into that pocket. The end of the arm's jacket are black streaks that go to her shoulder, almost like a soccer uniform. Underneath the jacket is a black top saying I ♥ Japan in big bold white letters while the heart is pure red. The t-shirt goes down to her legs but above the knee's. She wears tights that are black. It goes up to her ankles. Her shoes are flats and are also black. She loves colors that go with black. The flats are sparkly and they have a tight strap that lookes like a buckle.
Her waist has a big black shiny belt that keeps her Pokeballs in place. She has 2 extra pockets incase her belt is already filled with a lot of Pokeballs the pockets are about 5 cm to be exact.

Personality: Shin is a bright and loves to battle with her pokemon, she fell in love with pokemon at the age of 3 which inspired her life. She never get's tired of pokemon and always save the wild pokemon from the evil enemies known as "Team Rocket". She participates in many battles whichever is availabe at her rank (Trainer).
Shin is also serious when it comes to lack of improvement such as losing a battle from the arena or not saving one of the wild pokemon from team rocket. She gets a little tempered whenever she thinks about those "negative times" But once her Pokemon comes out of their Pokeballs she soon brightens up very quickly. She's also sporty which means that she loves to run around and jump alot, even swimming. Her love of sports doesn't stop and she never quits.

History:
When Shin was 3 years old she loved Pokemon and always wanted to run and hang out with them, her dad was a professer so she got to see a lot of Pokemon with her dad and she learned it all by heart but every eveloution of the Pokemon kind of makes her confused because of the appearance. At the age of 9 she was about to have her first pokemon, she couldn't wait to choose the Pokemon. When she got to the lab with her dad she looked at the pokeballs the pokeballs said piplup,treecko,vulpix and eevee. Shin chose piplup and she was very excited to train with her first pokemon. She was disappointed when they didn't get along very well, but her dad always told her that if you treat your Pokemon correctly it'll treat you correctly also so she followed her dad's words. Years have passed and Shin was 18, her Piplup eventually evolved into an Empleon which still surprises Shin. Her following pokemon that she works with now are Ninetails,Arcaine,Steelix,Grovyle, Kirlia and Manectric. As all of her Pokemon and Shin herself battle together their friendship increases each day, each day Shin always thinked that she would soon become a Pokemon Master.
Shin got a call from Yuuri (Her Aunt) that her father had passed away from Colon Cancer, Shin was deeply sad and she couldn't catch up with any of her battles. Her loss of passion with her Pokemon decreased and she couldn't do anything except cry. Her Pokemon were worried about her and they tried their best to help Shin lighten up, after a few days Shin got better and got to her normal self again. She always remembered her father's word and told herself that he'd always stayed insider her heart and remembered the tough days that they've been through that soon turned out to happy one's when they both smile together

Special powers:
Death Scythe Weapon
Shin hides her powers from everyone and always release it when facing through the tough missions of saving a Legendary Pokemon. Only some enemies she knew saw her secret power. She only has 2 powers since she's a beginner
Weapon: http://www.stormthecastle.com/Things...the-sketch.jpg

Three Chains of Death
As the user controls their mind and focuses with their Death Scythe, their connections of shock waves manipulate together to creating a equal balance between the user and the Death Scythe. The user suddenly creates a massive blow of Three giant chains that strech out to more than 1000 km. The three chains wrap around the user and the space itself between the enemy creating a spider web made out of chains. It may look like a lot of chains but only three are there. The user can strike anywhere at any point, but if the opponent is trying to escape the chains can make a burial chamber.

Healing Prayer
If the user or any of their teammates are hurt the Death Scythe can Heal them with their healing power creating a large burst of light that may ruin the eyes. The user tells the teammates to close their eyes incase the burst of light is too bright.



Theme Song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4HL3HU1pHXA

Other: Ninetails,Arcaine,Steelix,Grovyle, Kirlia,Manectric and Piplup

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Username: erm im sure its pokemonfanboy2000

Character name: my characters name is Geraldo

Age:12

Race: he is a star wars soldier undercover but no one ver seems to notice.


Gender: No gender really but disgiused as a male human bieng

Appearance: he dresses as an average human bieng
Personality: The best part! Everything your character is-- What they aspire to be, their hopes and dreams, their fears and hates, their insecurities-- All of it goes here! Keep in mind, the way they were brought up plays a major part in this; if they were abused, they're very likely to be psychopathic. If they got hit in the head and are just ENTIRELY BATCRAP CRAZY, then describe how they're crazy. What do they do? How will they react to the cockroach I put in their lunch earlier today? you get the picture, right? Different RP makers want different lengths; in general, they'll want two decent paragraphs.

History: Now this here is what'll back up your personality! The major events of your characters life go here; Was he/she hit by a truck when he/she was younger and walks with a limp now? Perhaps he/she had a bad experience that caused them to develop an intense fear of something? Maybe he/she was brought up to be a warrior, but is really a big softie on the inside because of a secret love (bleck)-- All of it goes here! Oh, well, not all of it; the important parts. How long this has to be'll vary, but you'll be set with about two paragraphs.

Special powers: Now, not all RP makers have a unique ability place, and it generally applies in only fantasy RPs. This can be swapped out for Pokemon, Weapons, Magic, etcetera; just list the power/weapon and, if required, give a short description of it, too!

Theme Song: This is always fun! Have a song that you think fits the character? Slap a link down here-- You know you want to!

Other: Almost everyone has an 'Other' section. If there's anything important you need to add that doesn't fit anywhere else, just put that here!


On playing Canon characters-- Now, some people (like me) prefer to play pre-existing characters. Before you do, make sure you know the character's personality you're trying to portray; you'll make a lot of fans angry if you make someone badass into a flower-picking sissie. Be sure to learn the ins and outs of the character before you decide to take them on as an RP character.

Making an OC-- Now this is the fun part; when you have a blank slate, you can make anything you want to! Want to make Zeus's son? Blam! A Deku Scrub merchant? Skibloosh! An Exploding, Fire-Breathing Pirranah? ...Erm... That's all you, pal, but go ahead. You get free reign over personality, appearance, history-- Everything! I'd suggest starting with the personality, age and history. Always make sure your history backs up your personality; otherwise, your character doesn't seem very realistic (or '3-D'), and in extremem cases can be very 'Mary-Sue' ish (In other words, a perfect character). Remember, everyone has their drawbacks; never make an unstoppable character. It'll never get accepted.


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Okay, Pokemonfanboy, I already have a complaint here--your use of capital letters is lacking. Some sentences start with caps and then others don't, and you can't just put "He dresses like a normal human being", what does he wear? What kind of human does he look like, ethnicity, is he tall, is he short, skinny, fat, what? And you don't have to elaborate on the things like name and gender and such, just make it short and simple unless you really need to put something in there.
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Username: Chaos_Control
Character name: Impmon
Age: Unknown
Race: Digimon

Gender: Male

Appearance: Impmon
Devimon
NeoDevimon
Beelzemon
Beelzemon Blast Mode

Personality: Impmon is a trouble-making Digimon who usually harasses others. He can be considered "Evil" by others, but he is actually more misunderstood. He forms very odd opinions about others, and so often seem to like AND dislike certain individuals at the same time. Impmon also seems to have a quick temper, and often taunts everybody else when he's in a good mood. Just don't get him angry when he Digivolves, especially when he's Beelzemon Blast Mode.

History: Not too long ago, Impmon had two young human partners, Ai and Mako, who always argued over who gets to play with Impmon as if he were a toy. He often picked on Takato, Guilmon, and their friends. He formed strange opinions of Calumon and Renamon in particular. Guilmon was especially kind to Impmon, even if Impmon threw constant insults at the red dinosaur-like Digimon.

When given the power to Digivolve to Beelzemon by the Twelve Devas, Impmon became blinded by power, and deleted every Digimon he could, including Jeri's partner, Leomon. Later, he realized the error of his ways, and returned to the world of the humans, and Ai and Mako gave him a toy gun, which broke when the D-Reaper attacked, but Impmon obtained the power to become Beelzemon Blast Mode.

And recently, he learned how to Digivolve to Champion and Ultimate, and no longer has to skip to Mega whenever he Digivolves.

Special powers: Impmon's attacks are BadaBoom, and Summon. Devimon's atacks are Touch of Evil, and Dark Wing. NeoDevimon's attacks are Guilty Claw, and Deep Sorrow. Beelzemon's attacks are Double Impact, and Darkness Claw. Beelzemon Blast Mode's attacks are Corona Destroyer, and Dark Ringer.

Theme Song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wMOsjqRxfnU (when Impmon)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=urEixv81IGM (when Devimon/NeoDevimon)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=reJH5...eature=related (when Beelzemon)

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