Re: Lake o' Trash(Needs Grading)
Introduction, Length, & Plot: The background was interesting, the character was delightfully mysterious- We don't even find out if it's a boy or a girl- and for a Magikarp, the simple plot and small length were sufficient.
Other: Scyther's confusion at what to do with the 'karp was cute, and as Magikarp can't really fight, that was fine for a battle against one. All in all, a neat little story, very nice and compact. ;) Though, more complicated pokemon would require a bit of a more complex plot than fishing, finding a pokemon by fishing, then catching it.
There's really not much to say as Magikarp stories don't have to be very long, but overall, it was good. ^__^ Very nice for a first story, too- Most people have terrible grammar the first time around!